五年级英语作文我的家庭8句话【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文我的家庭8句话【二】
我的家乡在著名的海滨城市——大连，一年四季，它都有别样的风景。
春姑娘迈着轻盈的脚步缓缓而来，大地的一切都在人们不经意间恢复生机。漫步在植物的木栈道上，欣赏这一派春意盎意。阳光恰到好处，暖融融地照在你身上，惬意而又舒适。树木都抽出新芽，嫩绿嫩绿的。小野花便地都是，红的、黄的、紫的……在微风下微微摇曳，为大地添上了一缕缕淡雅的花香。人们悠闲地散着步，脸上荡漾着微笑。几个孩子在奇形怪状的柳树中上蹿下跳，家长们坐在长椅上静静地看着……
时间不紧不慢地走着，转眼间，春天过去了，夏天悄悄来临。夏季，火热的季节，人们都选择去海边消暑。星海广场的海滩上缀满了帐篷与躺椅。瞧，一个女孩正在躺椅上沐浴阳光呢，柔和的海风轻轻吹拂着她的长发，她闭着眼，嘴角荡起一丝甜甜的微笑。向前看去，一个小女孩赤着小脚，手里捧着一小堆闪闪发光的贝壳，在阳光的照射下，如同珍珠散发着光泽。但更多人们在大海中嬉戏，一望无际的大海，如一块晶莹剔透的蓝宝石覆盖在大地上，宝石中人们绽开的笑靥与水面上溅起的层层涟漪都如鲜花般绽放。浅海中，是孩童们玩水的天地，孩子们身上套着五颜六色的游泳圈，随着波浪轻轻的荡漾。他们童稚的笑声回荡在空中。深海中，也有游泳健儿们矫健的\'英姿……
夏日渐渐褪去它火热的颜色，变成清凉的世界。秋，来临了，天高云淡，秋高气爽。天空中飘着各式各样的风筝，孩子们手握风筝线，自由自在地奔跑。劳动公园中落英缤纷，如蝴蝶般飞舞……
冬日迈着她优雅的步伐悄然而至。冬日中最传统的节日----春节到了。人民广场满天飞雪，银装素裹，节日的气息让冬日不再孤单。一层白雪覆盖在草坪上，上面有一层金色的小灯，与天空中的星辰交相辉映。广场四周屹立着一棵棵笔直的松杉，上面落上了一层晶亮的白雪，经过灯光的照射，如同五彩斑斓的水晶，广场中央巨大的屏幕上不断更换着一幅幅绚烂的画面，向远处眺望高楼林立，霓虹灯闪烁……
春夏秋冬，一年一年地流转，一年四季，大连都有独特的美。
五年级英语作文我的家庭8句话【三】
??，我的家-五年级家是幸福的，是快乐的，是温暖的，人总有一个家因为家是人避风的港湾。有了家，人的心灵就有了慰籍，因为它抚慰了一颗劳累的心，痛苦的心。
我的家就是我的温馨避风港湾，那是一天下午，大雨哗啦啦的下着，我垂着头哭丧着脸走出教室——我期中考试在全年级跌到了第四名没进前三名我失败了，我往日的\'非凡自信化为无有，雨仍下着我伞也不打就走进雨帘之中大雨傾盆之时我才打起伞，此时的我已成了一个泪人：我多么不争气呀！回去只能给父母亲丢脸我真后悔当时在面前夸下海口，如今叫父母面对亲戚？！想着想着我眼中流出了不***泪水我终于回到了家我跌跌撞撞的走进了家门当经过父母卧室时看见父亲正头朝我睡得正香呢，看着父亲那眉语间那深深的皱纹我知道————父亲在外已经奔波了三天三夜。
恰巧这时母亲走了过来亲切的问到：“回来了？”看着妈妈日益苍老的面容又想到了我自己，我头一沉鼻子一酸眼睛一麻，我一个箭步冲回了我自己的卧室，我把书包扔在了地板上飞身卧倒在床上失声痛哭起来，母亲见形式有点不对头，急忙走进我的卧室问我怎么了？我抽噎着说：“期————期中————试我落榜了，我————只得了第四名！！”“成绩都公布下来了！母亲抚摸着我的头说：‘‘你不是常挂在嘴边‘莫斯科不相信眼泪’吗？”“是呀，失败乃成功之母嘛！”我抬头一看原来是父亲。
我听了父亲的话心情豁然开朗便不再伤心了，开始认真复习功课。十点了正当我感到一股寒流时，一件衣服披在了我的背上，我回头一看原来是母亲！她微笑着看着我，原来母亲一直在用她火一般的心温暖着我，我不禁在心中呐喊“啊，我的家是我的温馨避风的港湾。
五年级英语作文我的家庭8句话【四】
如今战场风云变幻么测，说不定哪一天战争就会降临在我们身旁。而我要为自己的国家尽一点微薄之力，因为一个国家的强与弱就在于军事武器的变化而发展，如果某一个国家武器落后、装备不齐、国防能力差，那么必然会遭到别的国家的攻击，我国边远地区的防御能力比较差。应此作为一个堂堂正正的中国人，我应该为自己的国家多作贡献，制造出许多尖端的武器来增强自己的国防能力，是国家变得更加富强。
我曾听到这样一个故事：抗美援朝的时候，我军的一个整编师把美军的一个营包围了起来，固守在一个阵地上。但由于美军的武器十分先进，仅仅一个营的美军打退了我军的几次攻击，最终突出了包围圈。这是多么大的反差呀！是啊，“落后就要挨打”，只有自己的国家富强了，才能赢得其他国家的敬重。
应为我从小对武器十分感兴趣，遇到这样的书籍和图片总是爱不释手，所以一个当武器研究专家的念头就在我心中不由而生。为此我一定要努力、坚持、奋斗、才能赢取最后的成功。要成功就得接受磨练，磨练是让人成长的营养品。美国著名女作家海伦开了双眼失明，老天无疑给她开了个残酷的玩笑。虽然上帝关闭了她的门，但也给她留了一扇窗，她身残心不残，不懈的努力让她成长起来，走出心理阴影。何况我还是个健全的少年呢！
中国的著名数学家华罗庚说过：没有雄心壮志的人，他们的生活缺乏伟大的功力，自然不能盼望他们会有杰出的成就。所以说一个人有了理想就要不懈的努力奋斗，去实现自己的目标，如果失败了，一定要努力坚持，失败乃成功之母，只有失败过才会成功，只有成功理想才会实现！
历史上、文学上、科技上的灿烂辉煌都源于理想。生命因理想而精彩，生活应理想而更有意义！
五年级英语作文我的家庭8句话【五】
从一年级到四年级，我星期六就会去书店看书，因为妈妈星期六上班，没有时间带我，她只好把我送给书店。我看的书可多了，365夜故事，女生，公主故事大全，王子故事大全……
有一次，我在写一篇作叫：墙角的.最后一支花时，我的脑子很乱，于是，我翻开了我的宝书：女生日记。我突然眼睛一亮，我有灵感了，因为我看到了读书破万卷，下笔如有神这句话，我开始从我丰富的大脑里搜索丰富的资料，来完成我这篇，当我拿起笔时，啊！神灵把优美的语言一句句的告诉了我，我不到30分钟，一篇长达500字的作文出来了，我仔细的阅读，发现没有什么不好的地方，于是我把它发到了我的QQ空间里，好友们都说我写的好，我告诉他们，是有神灵在帮助我，他们不相信，我便告诉他们：读书破万卷，下笔如有神。 从这句话中，我写出了不少好作文，这句我一生受用。
