五年级人教版英语小练作文【一】
金秋十月，天高云淡，正是郊游的好是节。妈妈带我去公园游玩。
一进公园，一阵芳香扑鼻而来。是什么这么香啊？原来是花坛里的菊花开了。这些菊花五彩缤纷，红的如火似霞，粉的清淡高雅，黄的金光闪闪，还有几朵淡紫的……它们垂下的一丝丝细长的花瓣，像妈妈的卷发，美丽极了！花坛边，一棵棵挺拔的桂花树上，叶子层层叠叠，郁郁葱葱的绿叶中，开出了米粒般大小的桂花，散发出阵阵沁人心脾的芳香。
我们走在林荫道上，只见道路两旁是一棵棵高大的银杏树。它们已经换上了秋装，金色的叶子仿佛一把把小扇子。微风轻轻一吹，黄叶纷纷扬扬地飘落下来，宛如一只只金色的蝴蝶，在空中翩翩起舞。
远处的山坡上，一片红艳艳，那是枫树林，枫叶变红了，仿佛是个害羞的小姑娘涨红了脸。我不禁想起了杜牧写的“停车坐爱枫林晚，霜叶红于二月花。”
我和妈妈继续往前走，来到了开阔的大草坪前。原来绿油油的小草已经变成了一张绿黄相间的大地毯。我们走在草坪上 ，不时惊起草丛中的蚂蚱。蝴蝶却不怕人，依然在我们身边飞来飞去，要时竟敢落在我身旁的野花上。几个孩子正在草地上追逐玩耍。一群老人正在练太极拳。
夕阳西下，公园里的秋色更加迷人了！到天黑我们才依依不舍地离开了公园。
五年级人教版英语小练作文【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级人教版英语小练作文【三】
秋天像一位美丽的母亲，风儿就是母亲那双大手轻柔地抚摸着你，又像一位音乐家在给你唱歌，让你感受秋天的赞歌之美……
我走进公园来探望秋天。一进大门，就把我迷住了。整个公园铺上了一片金色的地毯。顺着秋天那香味扑鼻的气息，我来到了一棵枫树下，它像正在猛烈燃烧的熊熊火海一样，默默闪耀着自己的光彩。突然，一阵微风吹过，美丽的枫树就像一群火蝴蝶一样纷纷飘落下来，我不禁赞叹：“秋啊，真美！”
紧接着，我来到了一棵光彩夺目的银杏树面前，它可真漂亮啊！它的叶子像一把把金黄色小扇子一样，那样美丽，那样可爱！时时吹来一阵温暖而柔和的轻风，那一把吧精致的小扇子微微扇动着，仿佛在我带来清凉。它像一位慈祥的母亲为我扇风，教给了我孝顺与关爱。
我又来到了粗大的梧桐树下，它宛如一个有着金色黄发的大巨人一样，高高伫立在地上。这时，只要你轻轻闭上眼，你会听到风姑娘在与树叶一起跳舞，仿佛无数片小叶子在拍手一样，真可爱！它，教给了我做人也要自强。
我又看到了五颜六色的菊花。白的像雪，粉的像霞，黄的似金，红的似火……真漂亮！菊花的样子也是千姿百态，像千手观音，像烫了发的公主，像可爱的绣球一样。这时，只要你轻轻一闻，淡淡的香味沁人心脾，还引来了无数的蜜蜂、蝴蝶争相飞舞呢！
秋，你真美，我赞美你！
