写好朋友性格的作文英语五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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写好朋友性格的作文英语五年级【二】
车――一个敢直言不讳，有话就说的猛将“张飞。”车能自由地向前向后行驶，即使在敌营，也有如行平地一般，敌军的千军万马拿他丝毫没有办法。而且任何兵马都不敢和他正面攻击。他向前往后行左跑右充分表现了他正直刚正不阿的性格。
炮――一个暗箭伤人，借助别人***敌的\'“暗中诸葛亮。”炮从不与别人正面冲突，他借助着万里长城――五个兵的力量对敌方进行毁灭性的“轰炸。”他常常躲在别人后面，出其不意地攻击，让人防不胜防。他是一个“花言巧语”（但只对敌方）的忠臣。
马――一个华丽进攻，步法巧妙的“长山赵子龙。”“白枪白甲白旗号，敌将面前逞英雄。”马虽然走着斜步，但决招却十分华丽。他独特的斜线进攻法，让敌将防不胜防。他是一个语法婉转，敢说真话的猛将。
象――一个依靠同伴，防守勇猛的“马超。”当双象合壁，已方阵地固若金汤，万般人马拿这儿毫无办法，但当双象分离，己方阵地就如同断了线的风筝――不由自主了。象是一个同伴生存的棋子。
士――一个能力不大，却忠心耿耿的老将“黄忠。”大家都知道，士的活动范围并不大，加上曲折的走法和“帅”的存在，活动范围就更小了。但士却从来没有一句怨言，为了“主将”随时都可以供献出自己的道路乃至自己的生命。他是一位忠臣啊！
兵――一个本领不大，却义薄云天的“关云长。”兵几乎是所有敌将的“出气桶，”敌方最先拿他来当开口处，并且他行动缓慢，一次只能进一格，不能象车那样勇往直前，也不能像炮象一样借助别人，他只能一步一个脚印地朝前走，每一步。都关系着他的命运，于是人们往往忽视了他的存在，但当到了最后的时刻，兵往往又能成为取胜的关键。
帅――一个外强中***国君“刘备。”帅虽然看似无用，但他却关系着胜负，千军万马随时随地都要为他献出生命，能否取胜全取决于他。象棋中的每一个棋子，为了胜利，都鞠躬尽瘁死而后已，他们给我们以启示，以沉思，他们是我们的“第二道德老师”。
写好朋友性格的作文英语五年级【三】
朋友是春天的一缕微风，是夏日里的一股清泉，是秋的一片落叶，是寒冬的一丝暖意。也许很卑微，但很伟大。
朋友是沙漠里的一片绿洲，浩瀚大海中的指明灯，是高原上的一棵草，是珠穆朗玛峰的一片雪，是海边的一粒沙。也许默默无闻，但很伟大。
朋友只是在你失意的\'时候陪你说话，高兴的时候和你一起享受，不需要什么承诺，只有信任与真诚。也许简单，但很伟大。
朋友，身边无处不是。珍惜是每个朋友应该做的。
朋友之间的离别，无言胜有言，一切尽在不言中。“天下无不散之宴席”但我仍相信，世间有无老的友情。因为我们是朋友。
朋友之间没有隔阂，因为我们坦然。朋友之间没有隐私，因为我们彼此相信。朋友之间没有猜疑，因为我们互相谅解。
朋友是世间最美的人。
朋友，文章讲述了朋友的意义，这篇文章语言自然，语句流畅和谐。综合运用多种辞格，使语言富有形象感；多处排比，增强了气势，更显作者语言功力之不菲。
