导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
听说唐城是为了给著名的.导演陈凯歌拍一部电影才建成的,我本来没觉得有什么特别的,可真正到了后,才感觉唐城气势很雄伟,叹为观止。
一到城门口,就看到两个威风凛凛的石狮子站在门口,就像在站岗一样。城里的建筑还真是特别,有气势宏伟的皇宫;有高大的拱桥;还有宽广的御花园。
首先,我们来到了那座高大的白拱桥前,从侧面远远地看去,拱桥好似一条弯弯的彩虹挂在天上,低头一看,拱桥倒映在水里,它和桥上的拱桥相互映衬,构成了一个大大的椭圆,放眼望去,远处的树木和房屋都像是镶在这里面一样。走上拱桥,顿时感觉一切景物尽收眼底,微风浮在脸上,轻轻的,柔柔的,真像在给我挠痒痒呢。
接着,我们走过拱桥,来到了皇宫。从外面看,皇宫红砖绿瓦的,从里面看,皇宫的每一个墙上都有壁画,五颜六色的样子真好看!门外还有两个神仙,他们一个抱着脚,一个看着手表,哈哈,是在提醒人们有时间观念吗?这两个雕像栩栩如生,就连神态都刻画得仔仔细细。
最后,我们来到了皇上的御花园,那里可真是一个仙境啊:有山,有水,有花,有湖,它们构成了一幅自然的风景画。你看,山是那么的高,湖水是那么清澈,花儿是那么艳丽,这种境界真叫人心情舒畅!
如果你没来过,就来看看吧,定能让你心情舒畅,烦恼跑光。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成\"总—分—总\"结构
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
在平时的学习中,大家最害怕的就是作文了吧?那么,你需要积累一些可用的作文素材!为了帮助大家积累更多作文素材,下面是小编收集整理的正确的书信格式及范文中考作文素材,仅供参考,希望能够帮助到大家。
书信历史悠久,其格式也几经变化。今天,按通行的习惯,书信格式主要包括五个部分:称呼、正文、结尾、署名和日期。
1、称呼:也称“起首语”,是对收信人的称呼。称呼要在信纸第一行顶格写起,有的还可以加上一定的限定、修饰词,如亲爱的等。后加“:”,冒号后不再写字。称呼和署名要对应,明确自己和收信人的关系。
2、正文:正文通常以问候语开头。问候是一种文明礼貌行为,也是对收信人的一种礼节,体现写信人对收信人的关心。问候语最常见的是“您好!”“近好!”依时令节气不同,也常有所变化,如“新年好!”“春节愉快!”。问候语写在称呼下一行,前面空两格,常自成一段,不可直接接下文。否则,就会违反构段意义单一的要求,变成多义段了。
问候语之后,常有几句启始语。如“久未见面,别来无恙。”“近来身体是否安康?”“近来一切可好?”“久未通信,甚念!”之类。问候语要注意简洁、得体。
接下来便是正文的主要部分——主体文,可以分为若干段来书写,即写信人要说的话。这一部分,动笔之前,就应该成竹在胸,明白写信的主旨,做到有条有理、层次分明。若是信中同时要谈几件事,更要注意主次分明,有头有尾,详略得当,最好是一件事一段落,不要混为一谈。
3、结尾。正文写完后,都要写上表示祝福的话,作为书信的结尾。这是对收信人的一种礼貌。祝福的话可因人、因具体情况选用适当的词,不要乱用。一般对长辈都说一些“工作顺利”“身体健康”之类的祝福语,而对同学则说一些“学习进步”“天天快乐”之类的话。
祝福语的格式是:在正文写完之后,另起一行空两格写“祝你”、“敬祝”,再另起一行顶格写上“工作顺利”“身体健康”等,后面都不要用标点符号。
如果不用以上祝福语,也可以最一般的“此致”、“敬礼”结尾。“此致”可以有两种正确的位置来进行书写,一是紧接着主体正文之后,不另起段,不加标点;二是在正文之下另起一行空两格书写。“敬礼”写在“此致”的下一行,顶格书写。后应该加上一个惊叹号,以表示祝颂的诚意和强度。
4、署名和日期。在书信最后一行,署上写信人的姓名。署名应写在正文结尾后的右方空半行的地方。如果是写给的亲属,可加上自己的称呼,如您的孙子、您的侄子等,后边写名字,不必写姓。写给老师则要写上“您的学生”,空一格写上自己的.姓名。日期只要写在署名下边即可。
如果忘了写某事,则可以在日期下空一行、再空两格写上“又附”,再另起行书写未尽事宜。
(例文)
小溪姐姐:
你好!
现在已经到了冬季,咱们的家乡又变成了银色的世界。加拿大那里的气候怎么样?也很冷吗?听妈妈说,你下个月就要回国了,到时请你一定到我家来,好吗?
我还在绘画班学习呢。前几天,我的一幅画在“中美少年儿童环境美术书法摄影比赛”中得了一块银牌,为学校争了光。颁奖会上,校长亲手把银牌挂在我的脖子上,别提我多高兴了。
我每天都要拉小提琴,老师说我还行,有进步。我现在已对小提琴入了迷,我决心成为一名合格的小提琴手。
以上说的是我的成绩。我还有些不足之处,比如说英语,我的口语总是不好。如果你下个月能回来,好好教教我那该多好啊!好了,就谈到这吧。盼你早点回来。
此致
敬礼
你的表弟:张钊
20xx年11月29日
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
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