五年级英语作文五部曲【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文五部曲【二】
很多时候，一个人总会不自觉地回忆童年。想起童年的往事，一个人就会不由自主地笑，就像湖水中的一片涟漪，一圈一圈地荡漾开来，悠然地划过心头，于是，一个人就会愉悦起来，只为那一曲难忘的童谣。
偶然的一次，打开收音机，一首童年歌谣《让我们荡起双浆》想起在我耳畔，很久没有听这首歌了，但那美妙的音符，动听的旋律，让我不由得想起了童年的美好回忆。
记得我的童年，父母没有逼着我像其他的孩子一样，学这学那。所以我拥有很多玩耍的时间。小时候我在外婆家长大。和同龄的小伙伴们一起跳皮筋，捉迷藏。也一起满院子追着小鸡跑，最后落得被母鸡追得逃回屋里。虽热得满头大汗，却哈哈大笑。小时候我们也经常在榆树下捉知了，我害怕小虫，不敢捉。小伙伴们鼓励我，我也学着他们的样子，把手掌的后部贴在书杆上，让手心和五指张成一个口袋形，我的运气也真好，有一只知了慢慢地爬了下来，我闭上眼睛，把手一合，谁知我用力过猛，把知了给捏瘪了。害得这棵榆树上的知了全飞了。我们又捉了很多，家中的鸡可饱了口福。玩累了，我便和小伙伴们坐在榆树下唱起了《让我们荡起双浆》，悠扬的歌声在榆树林间回荡。黄昏时，我和小伙伴们坐在河边，唱着那首熟悉的歌谣，看着太阳把最后一丝余辉洒在波光粼粼的河面上，听着风的低吟、欣赏着云的轻舞、草的摇曳，一切的美景尽收眼底。
一阵嘈杂的车笛声，把我拉回现实生活中，才发现歌早已播完。于是打开电脑，寻找到这首歌，让她重新播放一遍，耳边数熟悉的旋律再次响起。才忽然间恍然大悟发现童年已不在属于我，但这首歌却深深地印在我的心中。
我怀念童年的快乐、童年的纯真！难忘，那一首《让我们荡起双浆》的歌谣，原来童年的一切一切都浓缩在这首轻快的歌谣中。
五年级英语作文五部曲【三】
新柳冒着青青的嫩芽，绿意铺满了客栈四周的大地，这春景虽好，但我的.心却满是凄凉。柳枝上的水珠好似朋友离别时的泪珠，每一根柳条都承载着昔日欢聚的回忆，每一滴水珠都诉说着惜别时的伤感。往事在脑海里越走越近，而元二却即将离我越来越远。
元二今日就要出使新疆库车，我同元二从小知交，总以为我们相聚的美好时光漫长，然而今天却成为我们分别的日子，人在失去友人时才彼此懂得珍惜。醉眼朦胧中，我再次斟满酒杯，高举着敬向元二。从今以后，不知道会是怎样的日子，不知是不是还可以一起尽兴地把酒临风，和诗吟唱。所以朋友啊，为我们的情谊，再喝一杯吧，出了阳关，再也没有老朋友陪你高谈阔论，饮酒赋诗了，再也没有人那么懂你了。新疆库车，路途遥遥，一路上，你将人单影只，餐风露宿，不知要受多少苦。朋友呀，我为你担心啊！
望着元二的背影消失在转角，我再一次流下了泪。
渭水河边，随风飘荡的柳丝也似乎依依不舍。元二啊，这一别，我们不知何时再见。
