英语五年级开始是不是要写作文了【一】
爱是不自私里的尚宇最让我感动，自从尚宇爸爸过世以后，尚宇就开始爱打架了。最后加入了儿童义工队，尚宇就经常帮助别人，更不打架了，而且生病的.妈妈也从忧郁中逃了出来，也去当了义工，她还去希望之家收养了小勇。最后尚宇终于有了弟弟!还让阿珍婆婆和碎碎念大叔一起住。从此他们过上了快乐的生活。尚宇也越来越懂事了。经常去希望之家看那些小朋友，也经常去图书馆帮忙整理，和去养老院帮忙。
读了这本书后我想;下次我要当一个懂事的孩子，多多帮助别人，别人也会帮助你。
英语五年级开始是不是要写作文了【二】
读了《爱是不自私》，我知道分享就是让你我一起感受幸福。
主人公尚宇从一个调皮的男孩变成一个有爱心、懂分享的男孩。
分享对于人类不可或缺，犹如生活需要阳光和水一样。因为爱迪生的分享，光照亮了整个人类;因为怀特兄弟的分享，人类实现了千百年“飞”的梦想……他们用传奇的经历证明了分享可以改变世界、创造世界。
所以，不是只有自己生活得好才是好，不是只有自己独占了资源才幸福，只有大家放弃私心，一起努力，分享彼此的财富、知识和才干，让世界更加美好，人们的生活变得越来越好。
所谓“与人为善大地宽，与人分享情更浓”。各位小朋友必定能从小小的分享里，获得大大的喜悦和满满的感动。
英语五年级开始是不是要写作文了【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语五年级开始是不是要写作文了【四】
暑假我读了很多书。我最喜欢《爱是不自私》这本最励志校园小说。这本小说讲述的是：有一个叫尚宇的小男生，自从爸爸去世后就变成一个爱打架的问题学生，过度伤心的妈妈也不知道该怎么开导他。有一天，同学介绍尚宇参加儿童义工队，利用业余时间去养老院和福利院，帮助那些孤苦无依的老人与小孩。渐渐地，尚宇发现帮助别人时自己也很快乐。他不在迷茫，终于拥有了幸福的感觉。
分享是多么的快乐。给予别人多少爱，你会收获更多爱!这就是这本小说让我懂得的。我要改变自己，做一个善良、有爱心的小姑娘!
