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写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
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My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
I valued my time in the No.1 middle school very much,because I know there is no endless banquet in the world.Before appling for xiao yu zhong,wondering whether it is the sixth sense, there was a prediction that I would leave my mother school,so I valued the left time which I have spent with my teachers and classmates.Perhaps some students and teachers didn’t understand why I was still so hardworking since I have been recruited by ShanDong university,Ididn’t have a very mature reply at that time.Now I can make a summary:After all,I have been in the science class for two and a half years.Not only was I interested in the subjects but also I have formed good privity with my teachers;Futher,many people take part in the National Entrance Examination in order to go to college,including me,but before the second term of senior three,I have known I have been admitted,to tell you the truth,I can’t accept it right now,so there was a time when I adjusted to it.
During my presence in the school,I was xiao san hao student in a row,and I obtained Li Zhen De bonus for two years.I got the second prize in the maths competition held by Shan Dong Province,After I was admitted ahead of time, I got a prize in the English speaking competition in jinan held by CCTV.
Besides my efforts,above all,I owe my scores to my teachers.It is teachers who passed knowdege to me,without them,I can’t have such scores,here,Ishall say sincerely,toilful are teachers!
In the study life in the future,I will develop my advantages and get over my shortcomings,making me more excellent,I can say full of confidence,I am pround of yizhong and yizhong is pround of me!
June sixth,2006
The start of this year's first class show strong,unusually brilliant.China's first female astronaut liu Yang first appeared as a guest speaker,she spoke about full of poetry,vivid tells the story of the beauty of the space,the beauty of the earth,at the same time also tells the story after she returned to the earth the beauty of human nature,tender feeling and touching.
Said liu himself in the space,more was shocked by the beauty of the earth,"this generation inhabit our planet,in the boundless universe should appear so magnificent,so dazzling,she segmental arc edge is visible,covered with a layer of blue and white halo,sunlight cast in the sea deep shallow blue,vein and clear,clear long coastline.The earth is so beautiful,exquisite planet,in a dark universe,quietly coruscate gives a dreamy,blue light,like a Mosaic on the black velvet of the sapphire,it is a kind of beyond the beauty of language.It is my home,where are my dearest friends and family,at that moment,I was so far away from the earth,but it is so close to".
Liu Yang can't wait to return to the bosom of the earth in space,"after such a trip to space,saw the smallness of the earth,to better understand the earth's greatest; left earth,and realize the dependence on the planet is infinite,infinite love.I love the sunshine here,love the fresh air here,love the pure water here,love the rivers and lakes here,love the mountains,plains,love live here diverse species,love living here we human beings".
The most beautiful,brought color to our life,warm every hurt heart,healing,gives people hope,the future and courage,they are the most beautiful,is also the most lovely!
The first day of high school life, I have some thoughts and feelings。 The passage of time can always give people some special things。
In the new environment, I feel a bit excited。 Be able to recognize the new students and teachers is my greatest gains。 In the next three years, we will learn、work and progress together to make our dreams come true。 I will have new friends, and share the joy and sadness with them。 The process of learning is also a growing process。
Similarly, I will also face many difficulties。 I might have difficulties in learning and getting along with classmates , bearing some pressure in life。 However, I will get stronger and get through every step of high school three years。
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