一个春光明媚的早晨,太阳公公露出了笑脸,灿烂的阳光照耀着大地。
小明和小红穿着校服,戴着红领巾,排着整齐的队伍来到操场做早操。他们弯弯腰、伸伸腿,听着广播喊着口令:一二三四,二二三四……,做得多认真呀!
大树爷爷看见了,也挺直了腰板,仿佛在说:真棒!我也要天天锻炼不偷懒。风儿吹过,小草迎风飞舞,似乎在给小明鼓劲:早睡早起精神好,坚持锻炼身体棒。
本文对边远地区艺术生的英语教育现状进行了总结,并提出了一些提升教学水平的策略,希望对相关的教育工作者有所帮助。
一个星期天的早上,阳光明媚,太阳公公早早地起了床,露出了灿烂的笑容。
小红和小兰是好朋友。她们在前一天晚上就约好,如果星期天天气好的话,就一起到小区的公园里做早操,锻炼一下身体。她们来到了公园了。只见那里有一些老年人在那里跳着广场舞,有的在散步,有的在遛狗,有的做做老年操……真是好热闹呀!小红和小兰来到了一片绿色的`草地上,开始认真的做起早操来。她们一起打着节拍,异口同声地喊着:“一、二、三、四、二、二、三、四……”她们有节奏地做着,一会儿伸伸手,一会儿弯弯腰,一会儿踢踢腿,每个动作做得都是那么的到位,她们越做越起劲。连旁边的小花儿看了都不住地点起头来,好像在为她们鼓掌哩!这个时候,有几个小朋友也看到了。她们也跟着小红和小兰一起做起早操了。她们的队伍越来越壮大了。这下子,她们做得更起劲了。
公园里的老人们,小朋友们都为她们鼓掌。是呀!只有天天锻炼,我们才能有棒棒的身体哦!
一天早上,一轮红彤彤的太阳照耀着大地,空气多么新鲜。我们精神饱满地在操场上做早操。
我们排着整齐的队伍,听着口令,一会儿伸手,一会儿弯腰,一会儿转身。每个动作都做得有力而到位。我们像小鸟,在空中高飞。我们像小兔,在草地上蹦蹦跳跳。
大树展开枝叶,好像在活动筋骨。小鸟站在枝头,叽叽地叫着,好像在说:“你们多爱运动啊”。公鸡挺着胸,昂着头,喔喔地叫,好像在说:“天天锻炼身体好”。
评:在这篇习作中,语句优美,多次采用比喻的修辞手法,小作者能通过大树、小鸟、公鸡,来侧面烘托出我们是一群热爱运动的孩子。
今天上午上了一节课后,又要做早操了。我不喜欢做早操,因为很累,而且还要被烈日晒,那滋味可不好受,但是又不能不去。我发现自己的皮肤越来越黑了,而我本来可是很白的呢!今天“长征”又开始了。我们整了队,一步又一步地走下楼,我感到烈日正等着我,我很想走慢些,但不行。到操场上时,耀眼的光芒射向我的眼睛。“烈火”在我的脸上舞蹈,真让人受不了。大家都找到了自己的位子。音乐响了。我做了起来,做得还算好,因为平时我们每天都做,所以熟得不得了,但是美中不足的是动作沉重,没有精神,我们从开着空调的教室里一走出来,就到了太阳下,一冷一热一下子适应不了。我做着做着就感觉度日如年,似乎已经过了很久。还没有结束,此时 我对“早操结束”这个词已如饥似渴了。天上烈日炎炎,地面也不甘示弱,变得热气腾腾,我的鞋底也挡不住,脚底烫烫的。我受到了这些打击,恨不得立刻变成一只鸟,飞回教室里享受凉快的空调……。我在想这些心事时,似乎时光老人把时间变快了,音乐停了,我们也高高兴兴地回到教室休息。
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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