和煦的春风把我们送到美丽的珠山公园。 一进珠山公园,便可以见到鹤鸣台。鹤鸣台面对着音乐厅,站在那里,偶尔可以听到音乐厅传来的歌曲,令人心旷神怡。
从鹤鸣台一直向前走,便可以见到生机勃勃的.百草坛了。百草坛,顾名思义,就是一个50米左右的花坛,花坛里有着成千盈百得花草树木。走进百草坛,那五彩斑斓的花朵千姿百态,婀娜多姿。花坛上有一只只蝴蝶,在翩翩起舞;一只只蜜蜂在采着花蜜。真像是走进了一个花的世界。在花坛中间还有一棵参天大树,它苍劲挺拔,它高达8米多,吸引了不少前来参观的游客。
从百草坛往上走,再过一条马路,就到达了天师岭。我随着一条石铺的羊肠小道走上去,在树梢间,隐约看见了一条瀑布挂在眼前,宛如一条白绸子从织布机上泄下来,蔚为壮观。而在瀑布底部,却有着不一样的景色:人们有的蹲下来,撩一把水过来洗洗脸,有的把脚伸进潭水里,让鱼儿尽情地为自己挠痒痒,还有的用手与鱼儿们嬉戏玩耍。在瀑布旁,有一排层层叠叠,错落有致的石块,它们像一群群绵羊,向我们走来。 这时我注意到,湖边有一个下沉廊道。我走进去,简直惊呆了,我仿佛走进了一个海底世界。那里鱼儿种类繁多,琳琅满目,让你眼花缭乱。它似乎有一种魔法,把你的目光吸过去,目不转眼地盯着它,欣赏着它绚丽美妙的舞姿。我迟疑了一会儿,才缓过来,不禁感叹:“啊!这里是如此的美丽,如此的奇妙!”
徐州最美的地方就是南湖,而珠山则是南湖中璀璨的明珠!我爱你——珠山!
珠山公园背倚珠山,面对波光粼粼的云龙湖,公园内绿树成荫,树木葱茏,她犹如一颗明珠点缀在云龙湖边。
停车步入公园,首先映入眼帘的是鹤鸣台,它坐落在云龙湖边,上面立着一个巨大的道教标志。相传,徐州道教的创始人张道陵就在这里修道。继续向前走,便是百草坛,据说,古时候徐州疾病流行,张道陵便在这里制出消除疾病的草药,使百姓安居乐业。在这里漫步,闻着淡淡的花香,让人沉醉其中。
距离百草坛不远处便是天师岭,岭上的瀑布沿着绵羊石垒成的水道弯弯曲曲的缓缓流淌下来。看上去,还真有几分像羊群在饮水呢。虽是初春,水有些凉,但这仍然挡不住孩子们嬉水的冲动,他们脱去鞋袜,纷纷跳入水中,撩起水相互嬉戏,开心地叫着,笑着。瀑布最下方的水潭中,种植着水葫芦、美人蕉等水生植物,更添了几分野趣。
整个景区最有趣的莫过于下沉廊道了。步入其中,犹如步入了水底世界。鱼儿有的在你身边游弋,不停地朝你张张嘴,似乎有悄悄话要对你说,有的吐出一串泡泡,有的停玻璃上一动也不动,似乎在思考什么,有的朝你挥动鱼鳍,似乎在向你打招呼……
啊,珠山公园,我爱你那优美的风景和动人的传说。
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
寒假到了,我们全家决定到徐州玩。
怀着兴奋的`心情上了车,在煎熬了5个小时的高速行程后,映入眼帘的是大大小小的建筑。数不胜数的高楼大厦让我为之一振。“酷!”我高兴地跳起舞来。
“孩子,我们马上就到汉王兵马俑馆啦!”爸爸亲切地说。“哦耶!”我像一支离弦的箭冲了进去。
我被眼前的景象迷住了:高高矮矮的松树笔直地站着,活像一个个士兵;小河里的水清澈见底,鱼儿时而浮出水面跟孩子们打招呼呢;更引人注目的是立在山顶上的一座高塔,一眼望不到头。
我们一路上谈笑风生,不一会儿就走到了汉王纪念馆。里面的雕像精彩纷呈:大将手持宝剑,威风凛凛;宫女翩翩起舞,窈窕多姿;各类兵器让我大饱眼福……爸爸说:“这些画蕴藏着很深的意思,回家我一定要搞清楚!”
第二站——兵马俑博物馆。见识了举世闻名的金缕玉衣。“好精美的艺术品啊!“我们全家一起尖叫道。听讲解员介绍,这是用金丝串接的玉片,再镶在一块儿,经过很多道工序制成。我的眼前仿佛浮现出古代的能工巧匠埋头工作的场景。再往里走,大大小小的兵马俑展现在我眼前,气势十足;大型兵佣手握钢枪,忠实地守护着主帅,简直就是一大奇迹!一股自豪感油然而生……
参观完兵马俑,我们又进行了登山的旅程。山路很陡峭,我们费了九牛二虎之力才到达了山顶。一座高塔赫然眼前,拾级而上,不知不觉来到顶层的“幸福大钟”旁。我敲响了大钟,心里无比高兴。
这次的徐州之旅增长了我的见识,以后我还要去游览祖国的大好河山!
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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
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