初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
“两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书”这句话教育我做什么事都要一心一意,不能三心二意。它让我常常想起。
记得那天晚上,我正在写作业,耳边突然传来一阵阵歌声,我想起,爸爸正在楼下看电视。再一听,那不是我最喜欢的歌——《想象之中》嘛!于是我也跟着哼了起来。渐渐地,我手里的笔快了,不一会儿就把作业写完了。等到爸爸来检查我的作业时,一看我的作业写得乱七八糟的`,甚至作业里还有歌词,顿时火冒三丈。厉声说道:“你难道不懂‘两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书’吗?你是做作业,还是听歌的呀?真是心不在焉,重做!”没办法,我只好再重新做一次。虽然我被爸爸狠狠地批评了一顿,但我也明白了:学习要认真,只有“两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书”才能专注学习。
这件事给了我很大的触动。在学习中,我也把爸爸的话记得牢牢的。有一次,老师不在教室,班里的“捣蛋鬼”也坐不住了。叽叽喳喳叫个不停。而我没有随波逐流,又想我践行了这句话:“两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书”,于是,我就专心地写起了作业,写完后,,我又认真地看起了书,丝毫没被外界的嘈杂所干扰。等到老师来了,沸腾的班里顿时变得鸦雀无声。可老师还是看见了一言也没发的我,还表扬了我。此刻,我又想起了那句话:两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书。是这句话指引我,让我得到了老师的表扬。
正是爸爸教育我的这句话:两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书引导我让我受到了老师的表扬;让我做事不再三心二意;让我认真地对待每一件事……这简短而有意义的一句话。
上个星期四中午,我们班就开始停课了,到今天我们班还在停课。
这个周一早上,我和弟弟一起去爸爸厂里玩(因为我弟弟的班也在停课)。
星期一,没有停课很多小朋友都要去上学,而我和弟弟却都到爸爸厂里玩,这让厂里好多大人很意外。
黄伯伯率先问我们两个,“你们今天怎么不上学啊?今天可是星期一啊。”我们就回答黄伯伯,“因为我们班停课,我们呆在家里没事情干,就过来了。”“哦,原来如此。”黄伯伯恍然大悟。接着我们跑去妈妈办公室。
进了妈妈的.办公室,第一眼就见到了小静姐姐,小静姐姐见到我和弟弟来了,大吃一惊,“你们两个今天怎么没有上学啊?”我们又是同样的回答:“因为我们两个的班都停课,我们就和爸爸妈妈一起到厂里来了。”“哦,明白了。”
我和弟弟来到楼梯那边玩,不知不觉那个平时有位被我们称之为“西瓜”的人站在了我们的身后,我们转过来对“西瓜”笑了一下,西瓜就问我们,“你们今天怎么没有去上学啊!?”我们异口同声地回答“西瓜”,“我们两个人的班停课!”“哦,知道了。”
我和小弟弟又在走廊上遇见了金叔叔,他也问了同样的问题,“你们两个今天怎么没有去上课啊?”我悄悄对小弟弟说:“小弟弟,我们已经说过n次同样的话了,这次我们不回答了,直接逃吧!”小弟弟点点头,就赶快逃了。
每见到一个大人,他(她)总会问:“你们两个今天怎么没有去上学?”实在是太烦了,每个人都要问一回,我们回答很累啊!早知道今天就不去爸爸厂里玩了。
Early morning,sun farther—in—law showed smiling face,small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries,seem to saying:“Beautiful,should get up!Should get up!!
Li Lixing,see sun farther—in—law came out,asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress,wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment,transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry,li Li looks up to look,a birdie is crying,seem to saying:“Li Li has breakfast quickly,I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly,carry small satchel on the back,go to school together with birdie。
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