关于假期的作文英语高中【一】
Today is a sunny. I and my friends went out shopping shopping mall. We go to see many T-shirt, rich and colorful,Wewent have lunch-their. Last time we buy at a black T-shirt, a bag and the socks. The receiver, were happy！ Today, my mother and I go to shopping.
There are many things to the supermarket. There are many books on the bookshelf answer: have toys and ball shelf to b their pens and pencils on the bookshelf many fruits on the shelf have clothes shelf to colon I want to buy a new pen, a toy plane, a football. My mother wants to buy some fruit, a shirt, some fish. But we bought a new pen, a football, fish, and some fruit. We have a very good time, today.
关于假期的作文英语高中【二】
I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship。
then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. the sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.
At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. they are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table.
After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.
关于假期的作文英语高中【三】
写事件一定要有波澜，才有吸引力，切忌平铺直叙的记叙文。这方面我们需要反思，我们在引导学生写有波澜的记叙文的时候，做的不是很好，我们总是告诉学生写作的时候要有波澜，但是我们并没有找到一个很好的办法怎样去生成波澜，我们只告诉学生结果，并没有告诉学生具体怎么操作。我觉得英国的母语教学这方面做的非常好，值得我们借鉴。英国的作文教学中，也非常重视生成波澜，认为开头要有悬念，要有伏笔，要有照应，这样写出来的故事才有波澜。他们研究出一个操作性很强写作模式，叫“大卡车（BIGCAR）”写作模式，就是每个单词的第一个字母组成的一个新的单词，有六步。第一步，Beginning，在开头抓住读者的注意力，第二步，Introduceaproblem，要抛出麻烦事，第三步，Catherpace，要营造紧张情绪，第四步，Crisis，要陷入危机，第五步，Adjustment，要开始调整，第六步，Resolution，解决麻烦，这是英国训练学生生成波澜的模式，同样一个故事，经过这样的处理，就发生了变化，可读性很强，写作起来也很有味道。这就叫“生成波澜”。所以，我觉得要改进我们的写作教学，很多时候要向外国学习，操作性要强，要一学就会。其实不应该反对写作模式，特别是学生在刚刚开始写作的时候，有些模式是很有效的，模式的背后是一道程序，程序的背后是什么？思维方法，我们需要写作模式，只要不模式化就可以了。掌握更多的模式，学生就不会模式化。关于假期的作文英语高中【四】
I had a wonderfulspring festival holiday.I went to the park with my friends.We met at eight o‘clock at the school gate.We went to the park by bike.It was a sunnyday.We sat under a big tree and talkedwith each other.We talked about some movies andfunny things.Then we hadhamburgers and some drinks for lunch.Then we played some games.
We went home at 5pm.Although we were all fell tired,we were very happy.It was great fun!
