我会做什么英语作文五年级范文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我会做什么英语作文五年级范文【二】
可是，很多时候我都没机会做家务。不是我不做，而是爸爸妈妈不让我做。比如，我想洗碗，妈妈害怕我把碗打碎：我想洗衣服，妈妈又怕我洗得不干净……唉。
放假了，我完成作业，没事做，我看见厨房里的菜还没洗，爸妈也不在家。我想：妈妈既要上班，又要做这么多的家务，一定非常辛苦，让我帮帮她吧。于是我学着妈妈的'样子认真洗莱。洗着洗着突然看见叶子上有一条毛毛虫，我有点害怕，慢慢地把菜扔到垃圾桶里，继续洗其他的莱。半小时后，我就把菜洗得干干净净了。妈妈下班回来了，知道我帮她把莱洗了，而且还洗得很干净，非常高兴，就说： “小铭长大了，会帮妈妈做家务了，真是个好孩子。看来，我以前的担心是多余的，以后妈妈会让你多做一点力所能及的家务。”
听到妈妈的称赞，我心里甜滋滋的，决定以后多做一些家务事，以减轻妈妈的负担。
简评：
本文小作者受学校的教育感染，决定向父母尽孝道，可是之前父母的不信任让她非常苦恼，后来她帮妈妈完成了洗菜的任务，转变了妈妈对她的看法，本文生动地描写出了她内心的变化过程。
我会做什么英语作文五年级范文【三】
终于有一天，我变成了白头小鹰，羽毛还未长全。鹰妈妈出去捕食了。我和其他小白头鹰坐在一块玩游戏。我们又蹦又跳，开心极了。
谁知，毒蛇在窝的下方，准备偷袭。它的速度快极了。一只可怜的小伙伴就这样离去了。剩下的`小鹰打破了快乐，有的大声叫唤，有的吓得发抖。这时，妈妈来了，她悲愤交加，尖利的嘴猛向蛇刺去，蛇都躲过去了，接着它张开大口向妈妈咬去，妈妈飞了起来。毒蛇扑了个空摔下悬崖。就在那一秒，它带走了我。我拼命地拍打翅膀，无论怎样，毒蛇和我还是一个劲向下掉。
“砰咚！”过了许久，终于落地了，我以为我要就此完蛋了，但幸运的是毒蛇当了我的软床，落下来我没有受伤。
我成了流浪的鹰儿。可怜的我只能蹦跳着走，没有谁教我飞翔。
这时，小麻雀飞到了我身边，说：“你是谁呀？怎么会在这里？”我说我叫白头鹰，来自遥远的天边。小麻雀说：“这很荒唐，哪有什么天边不天边的，还“切”了一声。”
“我没有骗你！”我大声吼叫。说着它看我好像得了什么病，不想再理我，然后飞走了。
为什么没有人帮助我？白头鹰有那么讨厌么？
