初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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“春蚕到死丝方尽,蜡炬成灰泪始干。这句千古名句是对老师的赞美,在老师的影响下,我也想成为一名光荣的人民教师。
那天是星期四,我因病旷课了一天。星期五,我昏昏沉沉的脑袋才清醒了许多,“叮铃铃铃……清澈的铃声响起,我忙抄起电话,“你的病好多了没呀?老师温和的声音在我耳畔回荡。“下午放学时我顺道回家,在公园内帮你补补课吧。“好好,谢谢老师!我内心欣喜不已,对老师千言万语的感谢却只化作一句谢谢,挂了电话,我的内心还是暖融融的,如沐春风……下午,我准时应约来到小公园的桌凳旁,远远地便看见一个倩影,“老师--我扯着嗓子喊,那身影回头,入目的是红润的脸庞。我忙落坐,心里像打着鼓,有些紧张地捏了捏裤脚,鼻尖沁出了细汗,不自然地拿出课本。老师似是看出了我的刻意,安慰似的拍了拍我的肩,这亲近的动作让我放松了许多。于是,便细心听起了课,老师认真细心地讲着,我沉浸其中。不知过了多久,我慢慢感到了凉意,下意识地动了动脚。老师发现我不断打着冷颤,就把她的风衣给我披在了身上,然后继续一丝不苟地辅导我。我瞬间热泪盈眶,鼻头酸酸的`,眼泪像开了闸似的,心里却如过娟娟细流,一点又一点地滋润着我干涸的心田。初秋的傍晚微微刮着冷风,夕阳在一丝丝云下似无可奈何般慢慢落下,紫红色的长天,我与老师的影子拉得长长的,透过叶隙,斑驳的点点夕阳落一地。
我金色的回忆正在慢慢褪去,有些记忆似生命过客被抛之脑后,然而我的恩师将永远烙在我的脑海中,她一丝不苟的工作态度,她平易近人的洒脱性格,都在我脑海中挥之不去,我要成为他这样的老师。
为实现这个愿望,我要在学习知识的道路上勇往直前,纵使前路满铺荆棘,我也要无畏前行!
如今战场风云变幻么测,说不定哪一天战争就会降临在我们身旁。而我要为自己的国家尽一点微薄之力,因为一个国家的强与弱就在于军事武器的变化而发展,如果某一个国家武器落后、装备不齐、国防能力差,那么必然会遭到别的国家的攻击,我国边远地区的防御能力比较差。应此作为一个堂堂正正的中国人,我应该为自己的国家多作贡献,制造出许多尖端的武器来增强自己的国防能力,是国家变得更加富强。
我曾听到这样一个故事:抗美援朝的时候,我军的一个整编师把美军的一个营包围了起来,固守在一个阵地上。但由于美军的武器十分先进,仅仅一个营的美军打退了我军的几次攻击,最终突出了包围圈。这是多么大的反差呀!是啊,“落后就要挨打”,只有自己的国家富强了,才能赢得其他国家的敬重。
应为我从小对武器十分感兴趣,遇到这样的书籍和图片总是爱不释手,所以一个当武器研究专家的念头就在我心中不由而生。为此我一定要努力、坚持、奋斗、才能赢取最后的成功。要成功就得接受磨练,磨练是让人成长的营养品。美国著名女作家海伦开了双眼失明,老天无疑给她开了个残酷的玩笑。虽然上帝关闭了她的门,但也给她留了一扇窗,她身残心不残,不懈的努力让她成长起来,走出心理阴影。何况我还是个健全的少年呢!
中国的著名数学家华罗庚说过:没有雄心壮志的人,他们的生活缺乏伟大的功力,自然不能盼望他们会有杰出的成就。所以说一个人有了理想就要不懈的努力奋斗,去实现自己的目标,如果失败了,一定要努力坚持,失败乃成功之母,只有失败过才会成功,只有成功理想才会实现!
历史上、文学上、科技上的灿烂辉煌都源于理想。生命因理想而精彩,生活应理想而更有意义!
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
暑假的每一天我都过的特别充实、开心。最难忘的要数——七月里一个晴朗的午后,我们睡午觉后,觉得没啥事干,舅妈突然说:“我们去滨湖的公园里玩玩沙子吧!我和弟弟们顿时大声欢呼起来。
舅舅开车带着我们几个来到了公园,下车走进一看,眼睛顿时亮了起来,这里的风景可真美啊!远处,几只小鸟在天空中飞翔,鸟飞过的地方,有一个许多树枝搭成的鸟巢,周围郁郁葱葱的树木把鸟巢遮挡住了,只露出了一点点。近处,有一片金黄色的沙滩,沙滩旁有一条像镜子一样的小河,河水是碧绿碧绿的。我迫不及待地光着脚丫走在沙滩上,金黄色的沙子是那么细腻,那么柔软,那么炙热,让人看着就忍不住想用手去摸一摸。
我和弟弟在沙滩上边走边玩,就连舅妈也跟着一起玩了起来,我和舅妈决定搭一个狮身人面像,首先我们搭了一个小山,然后把桶里的`沙子装满,接着把桶盖在“山顶上,最后添上了眼睛、鼻子、和嘴巴就可以了,还别说真的挺像。短暂休息后我又和舅舅一起搭城堡,我们先挖一个圆形,然后沿着圆形用沙子堆城墙,城墙堆好后,舅舅就开始修墙面了,哇!一会功夫,城墙被舅舅修的像长城一样,看上去十分雄伟。接着在里面埋一些“地雷,最后做一些小鱼和螃蟹放在城堡的四周,一个海底城堡就搭好了,简直像个艺术品。
太阳渐渐落下了山,晚霞映红了半边天,倒映在水面上格外的美丽。舅妈说时间不早了,该回家了,我和弟弟都没玩尽兴,深深叹了一口气,穿上鞋子依依不舍地离开了,到了家里,听家人议论,我才知道那个公园叫——滨湖塘西河公园。
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