英语作文五年级写事【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文五年级写事【二】
我刚用布条将双眼蒙上，妈妈就让我洗澡去。我还像平时一样，快步走近浴室，一不留神踩在什么湿滑的东西上，“扑通”摔坐在地上，疼的我龇牙咧嘴直叫唤，慢慢爬起来，不敢再大意，小心翼翼地做着每一个动作。该洗头了，好不容易摸到一个瓶子，不管三七二十一，就抹上了头，“咦”气味不对啊！怎么是茉莉味的啊，我的洗发膏可是薄荷味的啊，看来错拿成沐浴露了，只得赶紧冲洗干净。好不容易洗完了澡，刚扶着墙走出浴室，又一头撞到了妈妈身上，她看到我的`模样，提醒道：“衣服穿反了啊！”，原来黑暗中我连衣服的正反都分不清了。
我摸到电视机旁，想看会电视，可刚坐下，忽然想起自己此时是个盲人啊，只得作罢。想看书，可怎么看啊？想写作业，可怎么写啊？想下楼玩耍，可怎么玩啊？最后我劝自己断了这些念头，坐等时间吧。
漫长的一小时终于过去了，我迫不及待的扯下布条，长叹道：“终于又见光明了”。这时我才深深体会到盲人的痛苦，没有光明他们诸事不便，连看一眼家人熟悉而陌生的面庞都是奢望。这样的体验让我终身难忘，也更加珍惜拥有的光明。
英语作文五年级写事【三】
那是一个普普通通的星期六，却发生了不平凡的事——我们三十名孩子代表班级，代表学校去参加小语论谈会。这是多么让人激动人心啊！
首先，我们乘坐着车到雨花区政府。一路上我们唱歌、讲笑话，声音大得好像都能把车顶上天似的。到了雨花区政府，我们排好队，很有次序地进了小语论谈会的等候厅。
老师叫我们排队准备上场上了，我是一号，紧跟在老师后面。
开始上课了，老师先问我们：“你们知道关于动物的成语吗？知道的`请举手。”动物的成语我知道多了！心想，我就把手轻轻地举了起来，老师喊了我，因为我是第一次上台上课，所以心里非常紧张，我说：“狐假虎威”。
“你知道狐假虎威的意思吗？”
完了，我不知道，紧张的把意思都忘记了。我双眼直直地看着老师，哑口无言，老师也没办法，只好让我坐下了。
在小语论谈会上，一节课就像风一样灰溜溜地走了。
虽然那一天已经过去了，但是我永远不会忘记那一堂课。
英语作文五年级写事【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
