如何做到有耐心的建议英语作文(给别人提意见或建议的英语作文)

如何做到有耐心的建议英语作文(给别人提意见或建议的英语作文)

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如何做到有耐心的建议英语作文(给别人提意见或建议的英语作文)

如何做到有耐心的建议英语作文【一】

(一)再现图片上的景物,表达孤独、绝望的思想感情倾向,描绘对象:天、云、沙、树、草。

(二)再现图片上的景物,表达超然物外、怡然自得的思想感情倾向,描绘对象:天、云、沙、树、草。 。

(三)再现图片上的景物,表达对天真烂漫深深怀恋的思想感情倾向,描绘对象:天、云、沙、树、草。 。

如何做到有耐心的建议英语作文【二】

Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.

So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.

In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.

首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。

第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….

第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….

第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….

其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。

段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。

统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。

连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。

完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。

再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。

1. It has been shown that … …

类似句型:It is known to us that … …

It is said that … …

It is reported that … …

It is controversial that … …

2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。

3. enable v. 使…能够

I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.

4. in that = because

表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:

The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.

此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:

Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。

最后,提纯范文“措辞”。

1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的

形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions

a multitude of

a great deal of

a large amount of

plenty of

many a

3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。

I argue that … …

I maintain that … …

I claim that … …

I insist that … … = I think that … …

I hold that … …

I assert that … …

I assume that … …

4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的

hold negative view = hold opposite opinions

5. phenomenon n. 现象

social phenomenon 社会现象

natural phenomenon 自然现象

6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever

(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever

在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:

1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会

3. 我的看法

Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.

However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.

In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.

如何做到有耐心的建议英语作文【三】

千里之行始于足下。前行之路沟沟坎坎,走稳第一步,才能走好今后每一步。

请以“第一步”为题写一篇记叙文。

要求:1.立意自定,将叙述与描写结合起来演绎主题;2.不少于600字;3.文中不得出现泄露考生真实身份的地名、校名和人名;4.书写要正确、规范、美观。

如何做到有耐心的建议英语作文【四】

例如,山西某考生的《好习惯要逐步养成》,叙述了这样一个故事:家里新装了门铃,三次来人都对门铃视而不见,还是敲门,后来“我”在门外贴“请按门铃”的告示时门被风吹关上了,“我”也是同样只管敲门……文章仿佛一幕轻喜剧,围绕“敲门”这一描写点多次进行描写,但不是简单的重复,而是对不同的人做出不同的拟声描写和语言、神态描写。请欣赏,对父亲:“咚,咚,咚”,三声有节奏的敲门声响起来。怎么搞的?没看见门铃吗?哦,原来是爸爸呀!干吗不按门铃,是装的吧!”对表妹:“嘭嘭嘭……”,又是一阵敲门声。“谁呀?”我气冲冲地把门打开。是表妹,只见她汗淋淋、气吁吁的,没等我开口,她便吐吐舌头,笑嘻嘻地说:“我忘了……”对四姨:没隔多久,又响起敲门声,“嘭,嘭,嘭”,一下一下,不紧不慢……门开了,“原来是四姨呀,从乡下来吧,快进屋坐!”……我顺势介绍:“四姨,这叫门铃,按一下就会响,屋里的人就知道来人了。”对自己:我使劲敲打被风关上的门,高喊:“开开门——”猛然抬头看见自己才贴上的“告示”,自我解嘲般地笑了……

上述提及的文字都由门铃这一描写点展开,但行文实现了“差别化”,既为结尾的“点睛”议论作铺垫,又与叙事结合推动情节发展,值得我们借鉴。

如何做到有耐心的建议英语作文【五】

有的同学不管主题是否需要,开头总是来一段写景,景物描写成了“万金油”。开篇成功的景物描写,一要精练形象,二要显出特色,三要服务主题,或交代背景,或渲染气氛,或烘托心情,或点出线索。“天气又阴晦了,冷风吹进船舱中,呜呜地响,从篷隙向外一望,苍黄的天底下,远近横着几个萧索的荒村,没有一些活气……”你看,鲁迅《故乡》开篇的景物描写选择了几个具有鲜明特征的事物,只用了50多个字,就将“我”活动的自然背景和社会背景展现出来,同时人物沉重压抑的心情隐含其中,全文凄清悲凉的基调由此奠定,堪称写景开篇的典范。南通某考生的《那一刻,我的世界春暖花开》,记叙了这样的故事:一只小鸟飞进自习课教室后来飞出窗户,“我”从小鸟身上学到自信沉着的品质,终于解出数学难题。文章开篇这样描写:“天气转暖,太阳的光芒洒满大地。窗外的一排柳树钻出了嫩绿的芽儿,几只可爱的小精灵,在嫩枝上蹦跳着吊嗓子——‘唧唧……喳喳……’。但热闹是它们的,教室里一片寂静,仿佛严冬厚冰下的河水……”如此写景开篇确实巧妙——既点出行文线索——“小精灵”,又写出了“我”被数学题难倒的“寒冷”心情,又为下文写景抒情(“从热闹的春风回到冰冷的寂静”“仿佛从严冬的冰河回到和煦的暖阳”“这一刻,玉门关隘迎来春风,我的世界春暖花开”)做了铺垫。

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