7月1日,也就是今天,我和我哥以及我的姥姥、姥爷。到博山去看望在一次意外的'氢气爆炸中炸成了残疾的姨妈。我去的时候总是回想着姨妈原来的样子,十分的忐忑不安。
到了那里,经过一个拐角,只看见一位身穿蓝色T恤衫,座在轮椅上的胖阿姨。但没着就是我的姨妈。我上去喊了声“姨妈”她用一种陌生的眼神看着我,我立即吓的往后推了一步。后来才知道虽然保住了命,但那场爆炸不但把她炸成了残疾,还伤到了脑子,智力和小孩子一样。
再看看她的孩子——林林。再一边玩,十分的高兴,显得十分的活泼,看起来不像是家里出事的孩子。他现在还小,不懂事,但一张大后,就会……。上楼的时候,姨妈想和林林玩,但林林却闪开了,姨妈笑了笑,眼睛里似乎含着泪水。
我们去吃饭,我是非常的照顾小林林他要什么菜,我会给他夹菜。他想***事,我会尽量满足他,因为他是一个半孤儿。着场事故,不但伤到了姨妈,还伤到她的婆婆,她的婆婆被炸伤了眼。
虽然着表面上只是一个人受伤,但会对父母、孩子,家人会产生多大的影响?很快回家了,望着未成年的小林林,我竟然流下了眼泪……。
今天下午,外公说要带我一起去骑自行车,我听到后兴奋地跳了起来,因为我们已经好久没有出去骑过车了。一路上,我们两个有说有笑的,十分开心!骑了一半路,我和外公一人一根香蕉,吃饱了又继续上路。骑了一会儿,外公突然想起来我们还有一样吃的没买,就是:朱古杯。因为外公知道我最最喜欢吃朱古杯了!所以我和外公就决定再去买朱古杯。
我们先去“友好邻居”看了下价格。再骑到“好享购”又看了下价格。最后,我们去了一个“无名”超市看了看。然后我们把这三家超市的价钱放在一起比一比,哪个最便宜,我们就去哪买。外公告诉我,这就叫:货比三家!一开始我还不怎么理解。但经过了我和外公的实践,还有外公的讲解我终于知道了他的意思!意思就是:把一样的东西经过三家店比较质量或价钱,哪家质量好哪家便宜就买哪家的东西!
黄昏了,我们玩的不亦说乎!我想:如果我每次都能在玩耍中不断的成长、进步,那可真是一举两得的好事啊!希望每个周末都能过得这么有意义!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
上个星期天,天气寒冷。我和爸爸妈妈还有一位叔叔――他是我爸爸的朋友,开着车去巩义的宋陵公园游玩。
到了宋陵公园,首先映入眼帘的是,原来空旷的道路两侧变成一个花样繁多的游乐园。我先来到射击气球的摊位,一元钱可射十发子弹,我赶快崔妈妈交钱,拿起枪进行射击,只射中了3发,真可惜。我说:“妈妈,再来一次。”可是,妈妈说:“我们再看看别的,好的风景多着呢”。
我们又来到土山。“土山就是皇帝的陵墓啊!”我说。我、爸爸和叔叔一起爬山。我在爬山的时候很艰难,而爸爸和叔叔像猴子一样向前冲,唯恐自己落后,可是我呢,还在艰难地抓着树枝缓慢地向上爬,简直像一只又笨又慢的乌龟。但是,我没有放弃,继续向上爬,终于爬到了山顶,成了最后一名,即使如此,大家都伸出大拇指向我祝贺。
一会儿,我们又来到玩过山车的地方,我和爸爸一块坐,在坐的时候,我看见爸爸的样子很紧张,我问:“爸爸,你怎么了”,“下坡一定很快,弯又那么急,我们会被甩出去的”,爸爸回答到。下坡开始了,真是有一些快,但是,我已调整好心态,心情就不紧张了。我问爸爸:“你为什么不紧张”,“我是逗你玩的”。
时间过的真快啊,我一看表,时间已经不早了,我们坐着车回家了。
一个阳光明媚的星期天,我走在街上。
忽然,我看见一个骑自行车的老爷爷急匆匆地经过。可能因为有什么急事钱包从口袋里掉下来。正巧,一个小姐姐刚从店里走出来,她看见掉在地上的钱包,急忙捡起来。我急忙凑过去,只见小姐姐打开手中的钱包,哇,里面有好多钞票呢!
只见小姐姐拿着钱包大声喊:“老爷爷,您的钱包掉了。”可是太远了,老爷爷毫无反应。姐姐拿着钱包向老爷爷的方向狂奔过去。我连忙跟在背后。跑呀跑,她离老爷爷越来越近。她用手一伸,车子跑得跟快了,她重重地摔在地上。她忍着疼痛站起来,更加用力地向前跑。她喊一声:“老爷爷,您的钱包掉了。”终于,车子停下来,老爷爷转过身,小姐姐站在他面前喘气,老爷爷十分感激地接过钱包。老爷爷对小姐姐说:“小姑娘,你把姓名、学校告诉我,我给你写表扬信……”小姐姐说:“不了,没关系。”说完转身离去。
我望着小姐姐的身影,虽然她那么瘦小,但在我眼中却显得十分高大。
结束了一周的紧张学习,每个人都想放松调整一下自己,我也不例外。可是每当我想放松玩会电脑时,总是有恶运的魔爪来捣乱,那就是我妈喋喋不休的唠叨。
记得那天(就说这个星期天吧),我早早地把作业做完了,于是我就建议去学校和同学打会羽毛球:“妈妈,今天天气这么好,是个踢球的好机会,何况我们班同学也要去学校打球呢!”但是,妈妈一个“不行!”把我打球的美梦给打破了,“你下午要去参加小记者团的选拔。你想想看这是多么难得的机会啊,怎么能为了去打球就放弃呢?不行,一定要去!如果你真当上了小记者,那多光荣啊,不过就算没考进去,你整天在家里玩电脑应该出去见见世面……”最后,我还是放弃了打羽毛球的念头,准备下午的选拔,因为我宁愿去选拔,也不愿遭受妈妈在家里不停的唠叨,这简直比每天听英语听力还恶心,比古文还深奥。不过还好,因为这中午有口福去外面大吃一顿咯!
吃了中饭我急匆匆地去了选拔的地点,令我和妈妈啊吃一惊的是到了那里后,那幢大楼是如此的高,本来我还以为只是在别的学校选拔。电梯乘到了42楼,里面灯光很刺眼,只见家长们带这自己的孩子来选拔,有的比我小,有的比我大。可以想象以后工作的应聘也是如此。我听说这次考试分为笔试和口试,看来想当上一个好的小记者还真是不简单。走进房间,“哇,好壮观啊!”我情不自禁地叫了起来。
没过多久,小记者的选拔就开始了。一共50名考生,我是第30名。于是我不停地对自己说道:“加油,加油,你是最棒的!”可是心里还是有几分紧张。我顺利的通过了笔试,接下来就是口试了。我大方地站在舞台上,准备自我介绍时,突然脑子像进了一块石头似的,什么都忘了。正当我急得快要哭出来时,是妈妈在后排用一个无声的手势提醒了我,使我流利地用英语说出:“Hello, everybody.My name……”。最后成绩出来时令人惊讶:才只有可怜的71分。那么低,都快没脸见人了,会不会是把我的和别人的搞混了搞错了?我心想。不过这都是早有准备的事,妈妈说只是出来见见世面,至于分数和结果的不是很重要。不过我还是有点受打击的。而妈妈便说"你现在知道你自己的水平有多差了把!不要整天骄傲自满,要善于发现并弥补自己的弱点!
是啊,是啊,人生犹如大海,我们就像刚刚启航的小船,在无边无际的大海里行驶,难免会遇到风暴和大浪的冲刷。但是无论怎样,唯一不能改变的是遇到困难那永不退缩的精神!
这个星期天,我懂得了太多太多……也懂了山外有山,人外有人这个道理。一个天才读书都需要付出努力,更何况我们这些普通人呢?
尊敬的Ben先生(老板的名字:
①Please accept this letter as formal notification that I am leaving my position with XXX company on August 7.
请接受这封辞职信,我将于八月七日正式辞去我在XXX公司的职位。
③Although I have enjoyed my job, I have received an offer for another company that I feel is better suited6 to my career objectives.
虽然很喜欢日前的工作,但我已得到另一家公司提供的'更适合我事业目标的职位。
④Thank you for your kind attention and would appreciate if you could let me have a reference letter before I leave.
感谢您对我的关照,如果您能为我写一封推荐信,我将不胜感激。
⑤I regret having to resign from my position. I wish you and XXX the best of luck and future success.
很遗憾我不得不辞职。祝您和XXX公司好运相伴,未来更加兴旺发达。
⑥If I can be of any assistance during this transition, please let me know.
如果在工作交接期有需要我做的事情,请通知我。
Sincerely/Fortunately,
真诚的
(your full name
(你的全名
每个周末,是我们和父母期待已久的休息日。在休息日里曾发生过许许多多悲欢离合的事情。在这个周末里,发生了令我难忘的一件事。
记得在星期六下午,我上完课,天上下着绵绵细雨,我撑着小雨伞走在回家的路上。突然只听见前面“咚”的一声,一位老爷爷摔倒在地。旁边路过的行人走过去把老爷爷扶起来,并轻声地问:“老大爷,你有哪里伤着吗?要不要去看一下?老爷爷说:“没什么,小伙子,谢谢你了。”旁边撞了老爷爷的那位年轻人感到十分的尴尬,红着脸连声对老爷爷说:“老大爷,对不起,真对不起。我家有急事,你哪里不舒服,钱我赔给你。”原本我还为老爷爷会十分生气,然而结果出乎意料,老爷爷却把钱退给了年轻人,并让他快点回去。路旁边围观的人议论纷纷,都说老爷爷为什么不收钱,快到手的钱不要,真是笨。而老爷爷却视而不见,听而不闻,他对围观的群众说:“别人有急事,另外我现在也没有什么大碍,就让他去吧!”我对老爷爷肃然起敬,大家好对老爷爷的做法连连称赞。
通过这件事,从中我懂了一个道理:不能因为芝麻般的小事,而伤和气。更不能违背良心,见钱眼开。啊!这正值是个快乐而难忘的周末。
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