例子1 题目:Honor for my teacher
Everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it. To me, it happened , and I still remember the whole process vividly. At that time, I was
It was a sunny day and things were awfully before it happened. Then drew my attention. I saw , and to my was It did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that I would .
Whenever I look back on what happened that day, I think it is right to . First for all, no one can deny her . Furthermore, it is important for us to
注意,这是一个写作模板,里面有12个空格,并不是说一定要填满12个空格。可以按照实际情况进行取舍。
开篇句:About _____ O'clock one evening in _______, _____.
扩展句:________. (展开描述一下事件
时态:描述自己过去的经历自然用一般过去时
谋篇布局:文章以时间为线索,描述自己在家的行为
主题:难忘的经历,所以中心应该突出如何难忘,如何有意义
My First Stay at Home
开篇句:Aboutnine O'clock one evening inMay, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.
扩展句:His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot.We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.(展开描述一下事件
1、父母出差,自己一个人在家
2、自己照顾自己
3、难忘有意义的经历
顺叙,倒叙,插叙,补叙,分叙。
About nine O'clock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.
Without hesitation, I dialed "120". It wasn't long before an ambulance arrived. One roommate brought a blanket for him. Another supported him in the ambulance. Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
Is he a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? But we did't retreat. When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
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