英语作文《我的家》五年级【一】
我的家乡在著名的海滨城市——大连，一年四季，它都有别样的风景。
春姑娘迈着轻盈的脚步缓缓而来，大地的一切都在人们不经意间恢复生机。漫步在植物的木栈道上，欣赏这一派春意盎意。阳光恰到好处，暖融融地照在你身上，惬意而又舒适。树木都抽出新芽，嫩绿嫩绿的。小野花便地都是，红的、黄的、紫的……在微风下微微摇曳，为大地添上了一缕缕淡雅的花香。人们悠闲地散着步，脸上荡漾着微笑。几个孩子在奇形怪状的柳树中上蹿下跳，家长们坐在长椅上静静地看着……
时间不紧不慢地走着，转眼间，春天过去了，夏天悄悄来临。夏季，火热的季节，人们都选择去海边消暑。星海广场的海滩上缀满了帐篷与躺椅。瞧，一个女孩正在躺椅上沐浴阳光呢，柔和的海风轻轻吹拂着她的长发，她闭着眼，嘴角荡起一丝甜甜的微笑。向前看去，一个小女孩赤着小脚，手里捧着一小堆闪闪发光的贝壳，在阳光的照射下，如同珍珠散发着光泽。但更多人们在大海中嬉戏，一望无际的大海，如一块晶莹剔透的蓝宝石覆盖在大地上，宝石中人们绽开的笑靥与水面上溅起的层层涟漪都如鲜花般绽放。浅海中，是孩童们玩水的天地，孩子们身上套着五颜六色的游泳圈，随着波浪轻轻的荡漾。他们童稚的笑声回荡在空中。深海中，也有游泳健儿们矫健的\'英姿……
夏日渐渐褪去它火热的颜色，变成清凉的世界。秋，来临了，天高云淡，秋高气爽。天空中飘着各式各样的风筝，孩子们手握风筝线，自由自在地奔跑。劳动公园中落英缤纷，如蝴蝶般飞舞……
冬日迈着她优雅的步伐悄然而至。冬日中最传统的节日----春节到了。人民广场满天飞雪，银装素裹，节日的气息让冬日不再孤单。一层白雪覆盖在草坪上，上面有一层金色的小灯，与天空中的星辰交相辉映。广场四周屹立着一棵棵笔直的松杉，上面落上了一层晶亮的白雪，经过灯光的照射，如同五彩斑斓的水晶，广场中央巨大的屏幕上不断更换着一幅幅绚烂的画面，向远处眺望高楼林立，霓虹灯闪烁……
春夏秋冬，一年一年地流转，一年四季，大连都有独特的美。
英语作文《我的家》五年级【二】
??，我的家-五年级家是幸福的，是快乐的，是温暖的，人总有一个家因为家是人避风的港湾。有了家，人的心灵就有了慰籍，因为它抚慰了一颗劳累的心，痛苦的心。
我的家就是我的温馨避风港湾，那是一天下午，大雨哗啦啦的下着，我垂着头哭丧着脸走出教室——我期中考试在全年级跌到了第四名没进前三名我失败了，我往日的\'非凡自信化为无有，雨仍下着我伞也不打就走进雨帘之中大雨傾盆之时我才打起伞，此时的我已成了一个泪人：我多么不争气呀！回去只能给父母亲丢脸我真后悔当时在面前夸下海口，如今叫父母面对亲戚？！想着想着我眼中流出了不***泪水我终于回到了家我跌跌撞撞的走进了家门当经过父母卧室时看见父亲正头朝我睡得正香呢，看着父亲那眉语间那深深的皱纹我知道————父亲在外已经奔波了三天三夜。
恰巧这时母亲走了过来亲切的问到：“回来了？”看着妈妈日益苍老的面容又想到了我自己，我头一沉鼻子一酸眼睛一麻，我一个箭步冲回了我自己的卧室，我把书包扔在了地板上飞身卧倒在床上失声痛哭起来，母亲见形式有点不对头，急忙走进我的卧室问我怎么了？我抽噎着说：“期————期中————试我落榜了，我————只得了第四名！！”“成绩都公布下来了！母亲抚摸着我的头说：‘‘你不是常挂在嘴边‘莫斯科不相信眼泪’吗？”“是呀，失败乃成功之母嘛！”我抬头一看原来是父亲。
我听了父亲的话心情豁然开朗便不再伤心了，开始认真复习功课。十点了正当我感到一股寒流时，一件衣服披在了我的背上，我回头一看原来是母亲！她微笑着看着我，原来母亲一直在用她火一般的心温暖着我，我不禁在心中呐喊“啊，我的家是我的温馨避风的港湾。
英语作文《我的家》五年级【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文《我的家》五年级【四】
??的弟弟-五年级你们知道吗?我的弟弟是怎样的人?你们看了我的介绍一定会知道的。
我的弟弟长得像瓜子的脸，爸爸说他是“帅哥的标准脸。头发乌黑光亮，一双眼睛又黑又圆，扁扁的鼻子，像狗一样什么都能闻到。
他是一个尊老爱幼的孩子，记得有一次我和弟弟去玩，看见一个盲人阿姨过不了马路，弟弟看见后赶紧过去帮忙人阿姨扶到马路对面，盲人阿姨非常感动，说：“谢谢你，我虽然看不见，但我想问你叫什么名字。弟弟说：“阿姨，好人不留名，你就叫我红领巾吧。“真有礼貌啊。盲人阿姨夸到，我也对弟弟说：“你真棒。我真佩服他呀!
他也非常的\'调皮。有一次，我刚回到家，他就立刻来到我的旁边，说：“姐姐，陪我一起玩吧!我叹了一口气，说：“不行，我已经很累了。他蹲下身子，抱住我的腿说：“姐姐，你不陪我玩，我就一直抱着你。我真是没有办法了，只好答应了，他却蹦得一跳三尺高。我和她玩的是“孙悟空，我当的是“妖怪，他当的是“孙悟空，他拿着他的“金箍棒，我拿着我的“大刀，他便向我说：“妖精，快把我师傅放出来!我说：“没门，我还要等着吃他的肉呢!她听完我的话，他便直接拿着一“金箍棒向我敲来，我也不甘示弱，也向他发起攻击，经过一系的回合，我和他打了几百大战，他忽然一个金箍棒打中我的腰，我便倒了下来，他看见后，欣喜若狂。我说：“既然你赢了，那我就可以歇息了吧!他说：“嗯，好的，不过下次我还要玩，这个游戏太好玩了，我太开心了!唉，真是的!
他也非常爱学习。有一次我叫他出去玩，他却说：“我的功课还没有做完，你先去玩吧。过了一两个小时，我去看看他把功课做完了没有，却看见他在在看书，我说：“你完成作业了吗?他说：“完成了。“那不去玩。我生气地说。他说：“对不起，我忘了。听了他的话，我想到了一个四字词语“废寝忘食。
这就是我的弟弟，你们想跟他做朋友吗?
