怎么回笔友的信英语作文【一】
Dear Linda,
亲爱的琳达，
I saw your name in a newspaper. You asked for pen pals in China. I am fifteen years old and I live in the city of Shenzhen. I am in my second year at
我在报纸上看到你的名字。你问中国笔友。我十五岁，我住在深圳市。我在我的第二年
No. 1 Middle School. You can see from my photograph that I have a big smile and long black hair.
1中学。你可以从我的.照片中看到，我有一个大大的笑容和长长的黑发。
My father is a worker and my mother is a doctor. I like stamps, music, movies and reading. I enjoy dancing and helping my uncle on the farm, too. I am also interested in your country. Please write to me soon.
我爸爸是工人，我妈妈是医生。我喜欢邮票，音乐，电影和阅读。我喜欢在农场里跳舞和帮助我的叔叔。我也对你的国家感兴趣。请尽快给我写信。
Yours,
你的，
Li Ming
李明
怎么回笔友的信英语作文【二】
Dear MS Hu,
It\'s my honor to get the chance to write to you. Nowadays, people seldom write letters, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, in some circumstance, writing letters is indispensable.
In the class, you know well how to keep the class active. You\'ve got such an open mind that you can keep leading us to talk about the topic during the whole class. I learned not only the listening and writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as the knowledge of the concerned areas.
In addition, It seems that although I have been studying English during the last many years, I can’t speaking English fluently and precisely like the local people. Would you like to give me some suggestions on how to pronounce English like local people?
Yours sincerely,
Xia Wenjie
怎么回笔友的信英语作文【三】
Dear Mrs Hu,
I am very glad to write to you about what I think in my mind. First of all, I think I have to admit that you have excellect command of English and teach us much knowledge, which is not only English but also lots of thinking on life .
Next,You help us how to see the world and even how to apply for a good job.
But I think what impressed me most was the way you work. You do everything so patiently and carefully, which is highly thought of by all the classmates...All of these leads us to respect you very much.
Well,AS for me,I think full of humor is your another impressed charactistics.You know, I just regard your class as a very enjoying meal. I guess It’s widely acknowledged that all of your students like It very much.
To conclude,I think you are a very good teacher. I hope you will pay more attention to your health and be happy every day.
Sincerely,
Zhao Zhouxing
怎么回笔友的信英语作文【四】
亲爱的灵溪：
您好！
作为你多年的笔友，很高兴能再次收到你的来信。可遗憾的是，我最近几年都没有看见你在誉恩教育上的投稿，我希望你能够重新拾起你的笔在网络上看见你的身影。
那么言归正传，你在来信中提及起要我评论一下你这几年来的文风和写作，我愿意竭我驽钝，给予一些不成熟的看法。
首先是你在六年级时写的一篇文章《雪中石桥》，我也是在那个时候关注到你的，我对此文的看法是“语言优美，但是缺乏线索”，我在指出你的不足之处时，很高兴你能够改正过来，那么，过去的错误我们既往不提，就谈谈现在你的不足之处。
你经常向我埋怨“作文字数不够”“练笔小说人物单薄无力”，下面我就围绕这两个方面好好与你商讨一番，如有不足之处、或者见解不到位的地方还请能指出。
“作文字数不够”我认为这是写作中特别容易解决的\'一个问题，通常一篇作文或者是一篇轻小说，都有一个比较完整的故事，这个故事可大可小，但是其语言的描述必须做到细致，有的时候你以一种极高度概括的话语描述一件事情反而会把这件事情推向茫茫迷雾之中让读者难以看懂你到底想说些什么，要么就成了流水账，然而一味地追求字数也会把一篇不错的文章推向“深渊”。解决这个问题的根源就是思维的周全，往往线索的贯穿有利于文章的结构更加严谨，再比如在文章中穿插“插叙”、场景氛围描写铺垫，不仅能让故事完整有极强的逻辑性，一方面也大幅度地增长了字数。
最重要的就是细节描写，在平时的作文中通常只有650字加，上不封顶，这时候就可以适量穿插细节描写，比如在描写母亲的为你递上一杯牛奶，往往可以拓展开来至少一百字的描写，发散性思维设想或是回想当时的情景，比如“母亲递过牛奶的神情”“牛奶的味道”“指尖感受到的温暖”“台灯灯光照在母亲脸上泛起的迷人光芒”“我口中的干渴和对牛奶的渴望”等等。
其次，就是写作中（尤其是轻小说）个人觉得用得很顺手的“意识流”，运用联想手法穿插回以和你平时的见闻，相比现在情况的相似之处或者是特别突出的对比之处，还是那母亲递上一杯牛奶为例，由此你或许只能描写到“我的心头涌上一股温暖”，但是发散思维又或许能想到更多的东西，比如“孟子身上那件他的母亲为他临行密密缝的衣裳”“冬日的一缕温暖的阳光”，甚至是对比，比如“某些同学在学校对你的嘲讽刁难”“学习上或者是生活上的困境”等等，用文中“我的思维”串联起来效果更佳。
第二点“轻小说中人物形象单薄无力”，当然这里并不是指你对她外貌服装描写地如何如何貌美如花英俊潇洒，有的时候总感觉你过于注重外表描写而果断忽略了人物内在，如果只这样的话塑造出来的人物只可能是“穿着奢华衣服的木头人”。
语言描写很重要，仅仅只是片面的、毫无个人观点的对一件事物的描述反而会让人物更加模糊，《陈毅市长》的话剧选段对于人物的形象就比较生动，比如“偌大一个上海我都进得去，我就不相信进不了这扇门！”，人物的性格在言语之中也就自然不言而喻。
动作描写往往配合语言描写，然而动作与性格的不符合是大忌讳，动作往往决定人物性格如何，比如：一位小姐手中拿着书本放下了茶杯这一简单的动作描写，加以细节描写就可以勾勒出人物内在。
1、一位小姐肘部轻倚着座椅扶手，左手支起她那白皙的额头，视线聚焦在了书籍的第二行，右手缓缓放下茶杯，嘴中吐出了几个单音：“真是可惜。”
2、一位小姐将左腿翘在右腿上，手指快速地锤击着桌面，视线聚焦在了书籍的第二行，右手食指和中指瞬间用力，将茶杯砸在了桌子上，咬牙吐出内心的愤怒：“搞什么！”
由于时间关系，如果有不明白的地方请电话联系我，乐意为你效劳。
怎么回笔友的信英语作文【五】
Dear Tom,
I am very glad to receive your letter.Here is my plan for the Sping Festival.I will go shopping with my parents to buy some food,vegetables and gifts.On Spring Festival Even,I am going to help my parents make the dumplings and cook delicious food.Then I will watch TV,play cards and set up the firework.
I am going to visit my friends and relatives duing the Spring Festival.Of course I will viist the Temple Fair and take a short trip with my parents.I am sure I will have a good time.
Yours friend
怎么回笔友的信英语作文【六】
Dear dad and mum,
Today is Thanksgiving Day,so I want to write a letter to you.I know you are kind and helpful to me.You cook meals and wash clothes for me every day.At the weekend,you often prepare some of my favorite food.Sometimes you also help me with my lessons.I know you are very strict with me,but when I make a mistake,you first listen to me and then have a talk with me instead of just complaining about it.You always try to understand me.I think that is a good way for a child to grow up.With your care,I am living and studying happily,so I want to say "I love you,dad and mum" .
Yours
Baby
怎么回笔友的信英语作文【七】
Dear Mr Guan,
How time flies. In the blink of an eye，the semester has been on for almost three months ,and you also teach our English for almost three months.Maybe you can’t call my name ,but you have a deep impression on me.
It\'s my honour to get the chance to write to you. \"Approachable and amiable \" is my first impression to you, because you always keeps smiling. You always arrive at the classroom early, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. In general, when we are professional courses, the atmosphere of the class have a
little bit nervous, boring.But in your class,we feel very relaxed. And if we knew the answers to the questions,we can enthusiastically answer,without worrying about making mistakes.When learning a new unit,you will let us to prepare for a ppt or a direct speaking which we can express our own ideas and interact with other students more frequently.At first,we feel embarrassed ang don’t have enough courage.But under the teacher\'s encouragement step by step,we make enough preparations to have positive statements.
I remember that you have said one thing that a lovelorn senior in department of history talked with you and you encouraged him to be a doctor for further education.I don’t know wether the senior will be a doctor or not,but I must study hard and deep to be a doctor. I was always worrying about that my boyfriend will break up with me before.Through this,I know that as long as you ability is strong,there is no necessary to worry about it. We appreciate you for not only improving the ability of our English ,but also teaching us some truths with your personal experience. Nous vous remercions enseignants.
Life\'s a journey, you shine our light of hope, enrich our minds, adding to our intelligence. At last, I hope everything goes well with you. Please give my best regards to your family.
Sincerely yours,
xxx
