本文是一篇比较规范的议论文。作者从直接感知自然的角度入笔,开篇灵活运用命题材料,在对比之中提出“觉知自然要躬行”的观点,审题准确,立意鲜明且易“令普罗大众”接受。接着反向假设,运用排比反问句式,罗列苏轼、李白、***等事例,论据相对充实,论证较为有力。然后很有分寸地指出,光靠“影视、文字”感知自然是不够的,“唯有亲临自然,才能寻得自然的真谛”,归因分析合理到位。
更为可贵的是,文章在辨证地肯定“电视、手机”对感知自然“有积极意义”的同时,努力探究感知自然的意义所在,揭示出人类妄想“控制自然的野心”及其导致了“自然的心”离我们越来越远的后果,针砭时弊,引人思考。
另外本文标题和观点皆化用古诗,简洁典雅又略有变化。标题用“感知”,紧扣命题材料;论点用“觉知”,有些哲学意味,颇见匠心。结尾处,“要感知自然,诸君自请上路”,呼告亲切,嘱托殷殷。
今天,我们的生活比以往任何时候都好,但我们也面临着比以往任何时候都严重的生态和环境问题。全球变暖;臭氧层的消耗和生物多样性的破坏减少了酸雨的传播,森林急剧减少了土地沙漠化、空气污染和水污染
大量的`森林被砍伐,大量的水被污染浪费,大量的野生动物被猎***.上面的天空没有以前蓝了,下面也没有净土。水龙头里的清水多久会干?有多少濒临灭绝的动物朋友还在挣扎?人类是聪明还是愚蠢?
在人与自然的关系中,人一直处于主动地位。当人类行为违反自然规律,资源消耗超过自然承载力,污染排放超过环境容量时,就会导致人与自然的失衡,造成人与自然的不和谐。
大自然母亲,她真慷慨!我们习惯于索取。一旦这个慷慨的母亲不能给我们提供生存的资源,或者我们的行为激怒了她,她就会给我们颜色看看!那我们会死的!如果人类不及时改变发展模式,实现人与自然的和谐发展,地球可能会变成一个不再适合人类居住的星球。人类的生存依赖于自然。应该给她更多的关心和爱吗?我们必须平等对待自然,与自然融为一体!马克思说:“自然与人的完全统一,才是自然的真正复活”。
例如,当谈到人与自然的和谐时,我们砍树并种植它。我们应该尽一切努力弥补以前的错误。善待我们周围的草和树,不要伤害我们的好朋友——动物……
有人说“人类创造发现科学,最后被科学毁灭”!这句话不无道理。每天都在想,怎样才能更好的利用自然,用自然做实验,让生活变得美好,那么——我们的后代呢?
如果你想在这个美丽的地球上生活很长时间,你必须和你周围的朋友搞好关系。如果你之前欠别人的,就赶紧还。而光是这种事情是绝对不够的,这是你我的责任。最后,记住地球日的主题:“善待地球——科学发展,构建和谐。”
For the behavior of human, nature and the earth mother gave us a words: \"who done no wrong, and that could change, be not.\" People seemed to understand the meaning of this sentence, and began to enjoy the environment of the protection of the environment at the same time, hope in harmony with nature.
Said to the man and nature in harmony, for example, we see a tree to plant a tree, to do everything in our power to our compensation fault before, treat every inch, protect animals...
People began to afforestation and the protection of animals, is also a lot of propaganda slogans on television. People in the desert near to shelter forest, prevent dust storms. Remember there is a news said: \"an old man near their HuangShanPo value on trees, trees when I was a child, every day he came to see once, pouring water or weeding, seedlings grown up now, he has to go to other places to plant trees, he said, he is old and his son, and his son is old son\'s son.\" Old man planting trees have spent, also. Can such a man, what can\'t we? Wenxin after reports, it is more and more people began to plant trees. A lot of naughty children no longer draw out a bird\'s nest, but long accompanied by building the bird\'s nest at home. These things have become common now.
I believe in that way, the earth mother will restore the original beauty, man and nature will become more harmonious to get along, is more prosperous, human life more beautiful! Finally remember a words: \"be gentle with the earth _ scientific development, harmonious.
对于人类的这些行为,自然和地球母亲给我们留下了一句话:“谁无过,而过而能改,善莫大焉。”人们仿佛已经理解了这句话的含义,开始在享受环境的同时保护环境,希望与自然和谐相处。
说到人与自然和谐相处,打个比方,我们看一棵树要栽一棵树,要尽我们一切力量来补偿以前的过失,善待一草一木,保护动物……
人们开始植树造林、保护动物了,电视上也大量宣传环保的口号。人们在沙漠附近再上了防护林,防止沙尘暴。记得有一则新闻上说:“一位老爷爷在他们附近的荒山坡上值树,树苗小的时候,他每天都来看一回,浇浇水或除除草,现在树苗长大了,他还要去其他地方种树,他说,他老了还有他儿子,他儿子老了还有他儿子的儿子。”老人种树也有大半辈子了,也乐此不疲。一位老人都能如此,我们有什么不能?这则兴文报道后,更多的人开始植树。很多调皮的小朋友不再掏鸟窝了,而是在家长的陪同下筑鸟巢。这些事现在已经屡见不鲜了。
我相信这样下去,地球母亲定能恢复原先的美丽,人与自然会更和谐地相处,是人类更加兴旺,生活更加美好!最后请记住一句话:“善待地球_科学发展,构建和谐。
自然,一个赖以生存的空间。在自然里,有着各种生物,比如最大的恐龙,最小的细菌,还有花、草、老虎和狮子等各种植物和动物。但是自然也创造了一种另它后悔的生物——人。
人,又是一个有着比同类高的智慧的生物。就是因为有着比同类高的智慧,才会冲上自然界霸主的地位。它们用着自己的智慧,剥夺一个又一个的生命。正因为有了它们,自然界才受到了血的冲刷,为此自然界也做出了对它们应有的惩罚,狂风、暴雨、雷劈、曝晒等。但是这些已经对付不了它们了,为此,它们还改造了自然,水泥、钢筋、玻璃、金属······使自然原有的草坪、森林、河流受到污染,让所有的动物、植物离开自然之母。
人类,你们怎么还不知道收手啊!总有一天,人类会受到恐龙一样的大规模灭亡,到那时侯,你们后悔也来不及了!你们就觉悟吧!
The beauty of nature is like a magician. To daub on light green, spring to summer with a dark green, and, with dazzling aureate autumn to winter again put on a white coat; Ding-dong of the spring water gently singing tune, spectacular sea in rhythm, those little the singer with the wind also show up their indirect voice; Beautiful picture of nature is the blue sky white clouds, green hills and water, flowers, quiet mountains...
What a sight!
However, such a view, so beautiful, because human desire is don\'t have much, everywhere is named \"tall buildings\" tree; Flow of the river is called \"car\" of water droplets; Beautiful mountain \"has been renamed as\" factory \"; Beautiful blue sky white clouds seemed to fit the nobility, clothed in black.
Oh my god ~! The beauty of the earth\'s natural villages? Where is she? Oh, she is still there, just for old face... These, is she the children are making! The human and the nature can\'t coexist? As long as we are taking the path of sustainable development, mother nature will not be ill-treated in human ~! But now? Human unchecked, makes the natural mother scarred, also sped up the earth\'s resources to reduce...
Stupid human ah, you really are in knowingly ah ~! Preached that environmental protection, and increase the demand, this is the face of love your mother? Action! Action! With the practical action to implement environmental protection, for future generations point f!!!!!
美丽的大自然好似一个魔术师。给春涂抹上淡淡的翠绿,赠予夏一抹深绿,又为秋染上耀眼的金色,再给冬披上一件白色的大衣;叮咚的泉水唱着轻柔的调子,波澜壮阔的大海则打着节拍,那些小小的歌唱家们伴着清风也展示起了自己婉转的歌喉;大自然中美丽的图画则是那些个蓝天白云,青山绿水,鸟语花香,幽静山林……
多美好的景象啊!
可是,这样的景色,这样的美好,因为人类的***已经所剩不多,到处可见的是名叫“高楼大厦”的树;流动着的河是名叫“汽车”的水滴组成的;美丽的山已经易名为“工厂”;美丽的蓝天白云似乎也装起了高贵,披上了黑色的纱衣。
天啊~!那个美丽的地球自然村呢?她到哪里去了?哦,原来她还在,只不过是换成了苍老的容颜……这些,正是她那些儿女们所一手造成的~!人与自然难道就不能和平共处吗?只要我们走可持续发展道路,自然母亲是不会亏待人类的~!可是现在呢?人类无节制的索取,使得自然母亲伤痕累累,也加快了地球资源的减少……
愚蠢的人类啊,你们真的是在明知故犯啊~!一边口口声声的说环保,一边又加大索取,这就是你们爱母亲的表现吗?行动!行动!用实际行动来实行环保,为子孙后代积点福吧!!
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