2023中考英语作文福建【一】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
2023中考英语作文福建【二】
假期里，我怀着无比激动的心情，去参观久闻大名的福建漳州土楼。车子行驶在变弯弯曲曲的盘山路上，两边山峦重重，水道弯弯，绿树成荫，鲜花簇簇。一路上，随处可见丰收的香蕉林。路真长啊，足足开了三个小时，我急切盼望快点到达土楼。
福建省漳州南靖土楼，产生于宋元时期，以历史悠久、数量众多、规模宏大、造型奇异、风格独特而闻名于世，被誉为“神话般的山区建筑。”
我怀着无比的好奇心下了车，当我看到眼前的一群群建筑物，像天上掉下的飞碟，地上长出的蘑菇，顿时，我惊呆了，过了一会儿，这才明白，这就是土楼。它是由一个方形，一个椭圆形，三个圆形，五座伟大的土楼组合而成，看上去气势磅礴，令人震撼，被称作“四菜一汤”。从外面看，它是由黄土，黑瓦彻成，构造简单又奇特，听导游说，一幢土楼由一个家族住在一起......我们参观完此处便继续游玩。我们来到了一座可以与比萨斜塔比较的土楼，它就是号称“东歪西倒楼”的裕昌楼。这幢土楼的外面是一条清澈的小溪，裕昌楼依山而建，小路上，一块块光滑的小鹅卵石铺在小路上，色彩明亮的石阶小径掩映在果树的绿荫之中，穿伸在错落有致的楼房之间。
进入土楼，我发现，从第三层开始木柱便开始有规律地从左向右倾斜，从第四层开始反方向倾斜，但是既便如此，从一楼到顶楼，最底层的木柱和顶层的木柱，始终保持在一条直线上，真是太奇妙了，让我一饱眼福。
参观完土楼，我的心久久不能平静，我赞叹古代人民的智慧，土楼是中华文明的一颗明珠，是中华古建筑的一朵奇葩，被列为世界文化遗产。
2023中考英语作文福建【三】
今天要介绍的这位励志先锋人物叫邓衍晨，他毕业于福建师范大学数学与计算机科学学院，并被保送到重庆大学攻读硕士研究生。在我们采访的每一个励志先锋人物背后都隐藏着一段段辛酸、困苦的悲情故事，但是他们都没有在逆境中怨天尤人自暴自弃，而是以一种积极乐观的心态去面对，邓衍晨的励志故事也不例外。
记者见到邓衍晨时，很难将眼前这个腿脚行走不便，不爱说话的小伙子与推荐表中那个屡次获得学校奖学金，在校期间参加多个国家级课题组，发表多篇论文的励志人物联系起来。
对于自己的身体缺陷小邓并不避讳，他告诉记者，因为身体原因他的之路变得异常艰辛。
靠着不比别人差的信念和顽强的毅力，小邓不仅顺利读完初中高中，而且高考时还以全班第九名的成绩考入福建师范大学，就读他最感兴趣的计算机专业。
很多人宅在宿舍都在打游戏，邓衍晨却把大把的时间用在了计算机新技术的钻研上，因为专业知识过硬，小邓在大三时就被选入老师的课题组，负责国家级项目的研究。
除了学习，小邓也热心志愿者工作，从一进入大学，他就参加了学校的义务电脑维修队，大二的时候他还被推选为义务维修队的队长，免费为全校的师生解决电脑的各类故障。
虽然在学弟学妹眼中他已然是一个身残志坚的学习榜样，但是小邓却并不满足，他相信努力是交给生命最好的答卷。
2023中考英语作文福建【四】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
2023中考英语作文福建【五】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
2023中考英语作文福建【六】
早晨，刚一下火车就看见云朵妹妹向我们微笑；蓝天哥哥向我们招手；太阳公公向我们问好，我的心情也像这天气一样好。
来福建的第一天下午我们就来到了金山公园。这里的面积非常大，绿化也非常好，花草树木随处可见。正当我陶醉其中时，一阵优美动听的声音打断了我的思绪，我抬头一看，原来是一对可爱的黄鹂鸟在树枝上唱歌呢！嗯，黄鹂鸟的声音可真是名不虚传啊! 走过石子路，我便来到了赫赫有名的长廊。我开始浮想联翩起来：这里如果刚下过雨，我一个人在这慢慢地散步，欣赏这美丽的景色，听着小鸟那动听的歌声，看着蝴蝶在翩翩起舞，那该是多么美好多么惬意呀！在不知不觉的幻想中，我来到了荷花池。呀！真大！足足有两个黎河公园那么大呢！忽然，我看见妹妹与弟弟在拿着荷叶在嬉戏打闹。我刚准备摘一朵和他们一起玩耍，却被妈妈立即制止了，说是破坏环境也不文明。我委屈极了 ，心想：他们为什么可以摘，但我却不可以呢？
随后，我们便踏上了回家的路。走着走着，一位工作人员把他们手中的荷花无情地扔进了垃圾桶中，他俩先是一愣，然后尴尬极了。我狡猾的微微一笑,心想：嘿嘿，刚才幸好妈妈及时制止了我……
夜幕来临时 ，我们吃完了牛排，一起来到了人人皆知的万达广场，这是一座大型的购物广场。它外形高大，里面的装饰很精巧，给人一种舒适的感觉。还有各种各样的小吃店铺. 服装店铺……应有尽有，物美价廉。我们在这里买了许多的物品后，就心满意足地回家了。
随着时间的流逝，一天就这么过完了…… 第二天下午，我怀着激动的心情，来到了一直想去的地方——蔚蓝的大海。我飞快的脱掉鞋子，站在海边，微风轻轻地吹拂着我的头发，轻吻着我的脸颊，这种喜悦的心情使我无法描述。换上泳衣，去游泳，一路上我们捡了许多贝壳留做纪念……登上回宿松的火车，我一直依依不舍，这，使我流连忘返……
2023中考英语作文福建【七】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
