初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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终于又到了周末!周末在人们的脑海里是快乐而幸福的,因为可以不用去上班也可以不用去上学,家人可以团聚在一起休闲和玩乐。但是我的周末总是充满着遗憾,因为那些恼人的`作业让我无法尽兴。
假如这个周末没有作业,我就可以尽情地玩耍。我想去天津参观被称为“滨海之眼”的滨海图书馆,在书海中拾贝,而不用担心路途遥远而无法写作业的问题;我想和同学一起去公园骑车、“撕名牌”或者联机打游戏而不被家长催着写作业;我想看自己喜欢的书,想看多久就看多久,一点儿不受作业的干扰;我想下棋、画画等等,总之没有作业我玩什么都痛快。
假如这个周末没有作业,我就可以去看望我的姥姥、姥爷。今天是重阳节,我想去帮姥姥、姥爷做些家务,我想去给他们捶个背洗个脚,晚上吃一顿姥姥做的美味佳肴,夜里我可以和他们睡在一张大床上,听他们讲述他们年轻时候的故事,这将是多么幸福的周末呀!
假如这个周末没有作业,我会是一个好脾气的孩子。其实我的脾气并不差,只是经常在我玩到兴头上的时候,妈妈会问作业写完了吗,然后我会不情愿地放下手中的玩具被迫去写作业,这让我产生怒气积在心里,不知什么时候就会像火山爆发一样发泄出来,然后就会被爸妈一起批评。要是没有作业我哪会发脾气呀。
可惜这只是“假如”,我不得不从这白日梦中醒过来,接受这残酷的现实,继续赶着这周末的作业了。
首先我要去新华书店买书,我已经是那里的常客了。什么类型的书我都爱看,只要有趣味的书我就会废寝忘食。这个周末我决定去买高尔基自传体三部曲之一的《童年》,另外两本《在人间》和《我的大学》,等我看完之后再逐一将它们收归我的囊中,嘻嘻!
如果不去买书的话我就去市民广场溜旱冰。那地方宽阔平整,绿树成荫,空气清新,我可以在那样优美的环境里尽情的溜,而且那里教溜冰的'老师已经认识我这个热爱溜旱冰的小朋友了,他们经常会给我一些好的建议,对我学习花样溜冰很有帮助。我已经开始想像,我穿上溜冰鞋,戴上头盔、护膝、护肘、手套、臀垫、护腕,哗真是全身披甲上阵,先是来个单足蹬冰,双足向前滑行,完了再来个单足向前滑行,然后是双足向前弧线滑行、前交叉步滑行、向后双足滑行……哦!我已是迫不及待了,真想马上就开始我的“冰上之旅”啊!
再或者我去我朋友家玩,我们一起玩孔明锁。孔明锁,也叫八卦锁,相传由三国时期的孔明发明而得名。这种三维的拼插玩具,外观看是严丝合缝的十字立方体,动动脑筋可拆解,但想装上可不是那么容易的。可因为它有一定的难度,所以我们才喜欢玩。哦!孔明锁,此刻开始我想念你了!
我急忙起床,在客厅环视了一圈,看到桌上有一张字条,上面是妈妈那熟悉的字迹:“对不起,宝贝!我临时要开会,晚上会很晚才回家。爸爸也要下午5点才能回来。冰箱里有吐司面包和玉米片,午餐你就先应付一下了哦。另外,记得收衣服,把衣服折好后放进衣柜第二层抽屉里,还要再打扫一下屋子,最后写完所有作业,就能玩喽!”
“唉,什么叫午餐‘先应付一下’啊?面包和玉米片我都不喜欢吃啊!”我抱着早饭碗,嘀咕着。
吃完早饭后,我立马开始做家务。先扫大房间,再扫客厅,接着整理垃圾桶……忽然,窗外的.天黑了,一眼望去天空阴云密布,紧接着,黄豆大的雨点不由分说就“哗哗哗”从天而降。“完了,衣服还没收!”我急忙奔向阳台,“唉,还是晚了一步,全湿了!”把衣服一股脑儿全部拎进来后,它们立即被我请进了烘干机。
我继续打扫完剩下的房间。不一会儿,“咕咕……咕咕……”肚子又闹起“空城计”。我走进厨房,打开了冰箱,“哇!太好了,还有速冻水饺呢!我最爱吃了,哈哈!”卷起衣袖,系上围裙,锅里倒上水,等沸腾后我再小心翼翼地将冻饺子放进去。过了几分钟,透过透明的玻璃锅盖,就能看见饺子们在欢乐地跳舞了!
“嗯,妈妈教过我,饺子煮开后,要再加些冷水,继续煮,直到煮透煮熟。那好吧,再添一碗凉水,你们就继续跳舞吧,我先看会儿电视!”三两步跳到客厅沙发上,我迫不及待地打开了电视机……
“哎呀,坏了!过时间了!”猛然,我想起锅里还煮着饺子呢!等我揭开锅,饺子们已经不跳舞了,它们像玩累的孩子,把自己的白外衣都脱了,全部漂在水面上,一定是又热又累,都改仰泳了!
“唉……原来煮个饺子也不容易啊!”
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