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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
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第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
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The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
在我们身边,“车”是个常用词,汽车与我们的生活息息相关,它能提高我们的出行速度,给我们的生活带来方便,但是它的负面作用我们也不能小视。
随着科技的发展,汽车也在不断地进步,汽车的发展也引起了能源的过度消耗和空气污染,生活中,我们每天都会看见汽车拥堵的现象,或许我们在不断使用私家车时,对我们的空气却造成了很大的'影响,现在我们的天空呈现了灰蒙蒙的景象,而平时不常见的雾霾天气也悄然走进了我们的生活中,霾使我们的空气变得浑浊。
那我们要怎么做才能回复我们往日的蓝天白云呢?我们可以少乘私家车,多步行,既锻炼了我们的身体,又减少了尾气的排放量,我们何乐而不为呢?也可以骑自行车、电动车、还有利于减少肥胖。
记得又一次,我看电视,有很多人酒驾而失去了宝贵的生命,汽车可以不要,但生命只有一次,车对于我们也有很多的负面作用,所以我们要杜绝大量用车的情况。
在这里我倡议:
一、做绿色出行的先行者,如果家人有要购车的请买低排量、低油耗、低污染的汽车。
二、做绿色出行的实践者,我们使用“135”计划:1公里内步行,3公里内骑自行车,5公里内坐公交车出行,如果必须驾驶车辆出行,要做到环保驾车、文明驾车。
三、做绿色出行的倡导者,把低碳生活、绿色出行传递给同学、老师和家长。
为了我们家园的美好、健康,让我们手拉手从现在开始,从自己做起,从身边的小事做起,一起绿色出行,让我们的家园多一缕绿色,多一路畅通,多一点文明,多一抹蓝天,多一份健康,多一些幸福!
“绿色出行,低碳环保”从我做起!
I had a wonderfulspring festival holiday.I went to the park with my friends.We met at eight o‘clock at the school gate.We went to the park by bike.It was a sunnyday.We sat under a big tree and talkedwith each other.We talked about some movies andfunny things.Then we hadhamburgers and some drinks for lunch.Then we played some games.
We went home at 5pm.Although we were all fell tired,we were very happy.It was great fun!
我想大家都知道,现在人们都成了“驾车族”,连我家也不例外。但是,就是因为这样,车辆每天都要消耗许多能量,排出很多废气。
正是因为这样,所以我们的生存环境才一天一天地被破坏,越来越恶劣……
所以,我们都提倡要“绿色出行”,保护我们“亲切和蔼的地球爷爷”——多乘一趟公交车,不让他一天比一天虚弱;少开车,不让他整天唉声叹气;骑骑自行车,不让他在病房里挂点滴;也可以步行,不让他上吐下泻;还可以乘地铁,不让他一直拖着疲惫的身影……
再说了,汽车派出的废气不仅对绮丽的花草树木有害,对我们人体也有害:我也不例外,所以我一直坚持着“绿色出行”。
据科学家叔叔统计,北京现在相当于一座“废气城”,废气犹如一个污浊的大平底锅,笼罩着原先令人向往的北京!北京众多高耸的建筑物,使得空气流动受阻,风速减小,涡流增加,城市向空气中排放的污染物不容易扩散;再加上北京三面环山的簸箕型地理特点,容易在北京市上空形成逆温,即地面气温比上空低好多!这样就破坏了空气上下对流,使得地面含有污染物质的空气不能及时与上空空气交换,进一步加剧了北京市的空气污染,所以,当风力较小的时候,北京市上空就像罩上了一个污浊的大平底锅!
这一危险的情况已经给人们敲响了一个极其大的警钟,不要再开车了,不要再排放废气了,不要再使亲切和蔼的地球爷爷再受到他不应该受到的伤害了……
在这里,我默默地祝福我们亲切和蔼的地球爷爷——虚弱的身体一天一天地好起来。
Today is a sunny. I and my friends went out shopping shopping mall. We go to see many T-shirt, rich and colorful,Wewent have lunch-their. Last time we buy at a black T-shirt, a bag and the socks. The receiver, were happy! Today, my mother and I go to shopping.
There are many things to the supermarket. There are many books on the bookshelf answer: have toys and ball shelf to b their pens and pencils on the bookshelf many fruits on the shelf have clothes shelf to colon I want to buy a new pen, a toy plane, a football. My mother wants to buy some fruit, a shirt, some fish. But we bought a new pen, a football, fish, and some fruit. We have a very good time, today.
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