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三年级写长城的英语作文【一】

初稿

As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.

I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.

In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.

自评

As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.

In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.

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互评（刘兴顺评）

As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.

In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.

评分：23

互评（战越评）

As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.

In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.

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互评（李春霞评）

As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.

In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.

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三年级写长城的英语作文【二】

登上长城，顿时感到心胸都开阔了许多，这雄伟挺拔，气势恢宏的长城，蜿蜒的卧在连绵起伏的山峦上。仿佛像是翘首欲飞的巨龙，显现出华夏魅力和宏伟的英雄气概。

我站在长城上，抚摸着一块块城墙青砖，从他们身上感受着那久远古朴的气息，同时还散发着辛酸和苦涩，感受到役民的痛苦和劳累。缓缓闭上眼睛我的思绪仿佛随着吹拂的山风回到秦朝，我是俯瞰天地的太阳，望着人民在这灰暗的天底下，过着苦不堪言的日子，役民的劳苦和汗水，才筑成了这座恢弘的长城。经历了多年的建造，日复一日，年复一年，他们没有自由，没有休息，没有尊严，汗水从身上滑落下来，浸湿了大地，浸湿了人们脚下的长城。

在这看似雄伟壮丽，代表着华夏人民智慧和精神的伟大建筑物上，他的背后，又隐藏着多少役民的辛酸和汗水，多少人们的苦和累，又有多少百姓饥寒，无辜的生命和家破人亡。这一切，仿佛都历历在目的浮现在我的脑海中，我俯瞰着大地，将这一切都尽收眼底。我看见在这漫漫修建之路上，有无数的人慢慢倒下，他们经不住劳累和艰苦，终于和自己的妻儿永远地告别。我仿佛看到，在这样伟大的工程背后，又埋葬着数以万计人民的尸骨，我仿佛又看到，家中的妇女听闻丈夫的死讯，躲在家里抱着孩子庆生的哭泣……

我看到，在这一条漫长的修建道路背后，有着千千万万百姓的尸骨，他们有的不甘，有的不舍，还有的充满了怨气，抚摸着城上的青砖，这些画面在我的脑海中不断播放，挥之不去……我仿佛又看到了家人离别和搬运砖石的场面，又听到妇女孩儿的抽泣，残酷的鞭挞声。

有许多人谈论秦始皇的功与过，有人说：“他焚书坑儒，建阿房，是暴君的典型代表。”也有人说：“他统一全国，建立长城，实属一位明君。”但是，在建立长城抵抗匈奴的同时，又何不是一种“暴”的体现呢？

也许很少有人想到，在这华夏的代表，中国的伟大建筑——长城的背后，又有多少的艰苦和黑暗。