要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
真的小猛士:美国9岁男孩徒手斗鳄鱼
A brave 9-year-old is recovering in hospital after he wrestled a 9-foot, 400lb alligator off him with his bare hands - and he now plans to make a necklace from a tooth doctors found embedded in a wound on his back.
美国佛罗里达州一名9岁的小男孩,在湖中游泳时,遭到一条长9英尺(约2.7米长、重400磅(约180多公斤的`短吻鳄袭击,赤手与其搏斗之后,小男孩身上多处受伤,目前正在医院治疗中。医生从他背部的伤口里取出一颗短吻鳄的牙齿,小男孩表示想把它做成项链。
James Barney Jr, spoke calmly and eloquently about his ordeal from hospital, where he was tucked up in bed with a teddy bear by his side. He was covered in some 30 teeth marks, doctors said.
小男孩名叫小詹姆斯·巴尼,他在医院里平静、生动地讲述了自己与短吻鳄搏斗的经历,在他床边还放有一只泰迪熊。医生说,小詹姆斯全身有30多处牙印。
The little boy described how it was a hot day so he had parked his bike and jumped into Lake Tohopekaliga - a lake that people are forbidden to swim in - when he felt something brush against his leg.
小詹姆斯说那天特别热,于是他就把自行车停在一旁自己跳进了托霍普卡莱加湖,这个湖是禁止人们在里面游泳的,刚一进去他就感觉有东西擦到他的腿了。
'It really amazed me what happened. At first, I thought someone was just playing with me, and I didn't know what happened,' he told ABC.
“后来发生的事情真的让我大吃一惊。但开始的时候,我以为是有人在跟我闹着玩,我并不知道发生了什么事情。”他告诉(ABC的记者。
'I reached down to grab it, and I felt its jaw, I felt its teeth, and I didn't know what to do, so I immediately reacted and hit it a couple times. And I had enough strength to pry its jaw open.' The child pulled the powerful jaws open long enough to slide out and swim to shore.
One day a crow stood on a branch near his nest and felt very happy with the meat in his mouth. At that time, a fox saw the crow with the meat, so he swallowed and eagerly thought of a plan to get the meat. However, whatever the fox said to the crow, the crow just kept silent. Until the fox thought highly of the crow's beautiful voice, the crow felt flattered and opened his mouth to sing. As soon as the meat fell down to the ground, the fox took the meat and went into his hole.
有一天,一只乌鸦站在窝旁的.树枝上嘴里叼着一片肉,心里非常高兴。这时候,一只狐狸看见了乌鸦,馋得直流口水,非常想得到那片肉。但是,无论狐狸说什么,乌鸦就是不理睬狐狸。最后,狐狸赞美乌鸦的嗓音最优美,并要求乌鸦唱几句让他欣赏欣赏。乌鸦听了狐狸赞美的话,得意极了,就唱起歌来。没想到,肉一掉下来,狐狸就叼起肉,钻回了洞
这是我听到的最难受的话,就像龙应台所说的那样,渐渐地明白到,所谓父母子女一场,就是在一次次离别时看着她他的背影渐行渐远,而他用他的背影告诉你,不必追。
我们教会他仇恨,我们教会他宽容,我们教会他单纯,我们教会他们我们所恐惧,我们所愤怒,我们所拥有。
但不管是什么,我们都教会他爱。
因为爱才会滋生的仇恨,因为爱才会滋生的单纯,爱包容任何事物,不分种族。它会导致悲剧,会导致战争,会导致轮回,但这些事务皆因爱而生,否则不会有这个故事。
不会有术士去养育一条龙,不会有龙无论何地何时都称做爸爸的那个人,不会有龙在怒吼下去毁掉,去毁灭,在烟尘中留下灰烬,不会有一个四处游历又归去却再次一无所有的人,不会有那只愤怒的理智的.成为遥远天空的一颗星的龙,不会有那么一条龙,却在懵懂无知时,背叛了最亲的人。
我们不能一味地教孩子善良,因为善良不仅仅是单纯,单纯的背面便是毁灭。我们不能教他们仇恨,我们的明亮的双眼会失去它的意义。
树欲静而风不止,子欲养而亲不待。
这是我最爱的结局,因为当我们累了困了想家时,
那个人已经不在了。
他不会在沙滩上等到夕阳西下,尽管他那么怕水,他不会再在门口在冷风下等待,即使背后便是温暖的壁炉,他不会再说farewell my son,因为他们已没有机会了。
旦行旦坦荡,且行且珍惜,世界如此之大,却再也寻觅不到你存在过的痕迹,我们一生都能如此幸运的一些人,也在无奈的失去。
最近一直阅读了读一本英文书《me before you》,因为被小说的情节吸引,但每天的阅读量是固定的,不能超量,于是我按耐不住看了电影版,总体上来说还是不错的,至少男主的笑容很有魅力,我非常喜欢。
就像电影中的女主,如果你把自己限定在某个范围或者区域里,你就无法真正认识你自己,无法去发掘更多的潜力与可能。因为车祸而高位截瘫的will曾是那么热爱生活,后来却被困在小小的轮椅之上,尽管家庭富足,他不用担心生计,但是,那曾经可以自由驰骋,自由翱翔的心灵是不堪囚禁的。他与父母约定的在他选择安乐死之前再活半年。半年里,lou的到来给了他爱与快乐,却未能改变他要结束生命的决定。看到will选择在lou和家人面前安乐死的时候,我忍不住落泪,但若换成我,我也一定会像will一样。
不是玛丽苏的结局,will虽选择了离开,却给lou留下打开了新世界的希望和资源。她不再因为家庭的经济来源问题被困在那个小镇,她可以自信地穿着最爱的大黄蜂条纹打底裤,坐在巴黎的街头,品味着经典的苦咖啡和新出炉的牛角包,然后微笑着走进那家香水店,购买will推荐的`那款适合她的香水,带着will给她的永恒的爱与希望前行。
结局虽不圆满,却是最好的,因为will不用再过每天睁开眼就期待这一天结束的日子,心灵不会再被身体禁锢,因为lou终于可以去过自己的生活,去看更大的世界……
will应该从来没想过自己会被一辆摩托车毁掉一生。生命或者说生活永远都是未知的,我们无法窥探未来,或许,解放自己,过好自己的每一天,去发现,去尝试才不枉生活。但在我们的文化中,各种关系和羁绊很多时候你是无法放下的,因为就算你是对的舆论的压力太大。
在过去的一年里,应该很多人都觉得很累,或许这已经是一种常态了。上班的人有太多迫于生活的压力而发条式的前进着,全职妈妈们也疲于24h全年无休的工作。或许,我们都需要一点点时间,一点点空间,去疗愈我们自己,哪怕只是看几页我们喜欢的书,或者看一部我们喜欢的电影,哪怕是在阳光明媚的午后,坐在窗前静静地发会呆,释放一下心流,又哪怕只是听一首歌,品一杯茶……只要我们是全身心的陪伴自己。
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