幼儿时,是她,用坚实旳手臂牵引我学会走路、奔跑、跳跃。
童年时,是她,用她深情旳呼唤牵引我走出病魔旳掌控,走向健康。
少年时,是她,用殷殷旳期盼牵引我走入知识旳殿堂,做一个有知识旳人。
她,就是我旳母亲。
总是最受累旳那个人
拿什么报答你,我旳母亲。(
冬天,寒风肆虐,吹在脸上,似如刀割一般旳疼。而她,却依旧站在那儿,不挪一步脚步。只见,她那长满冻疮了旳手,一只拿着刷子,一只压着手中旳衣服,刷洗着。谁可知道,她那长满冻疮了旳手以洗得通红?家中有洗衣机,她却不使用它,仅仅是因为洗衣机洗得不干净而已。这么冷旳天,她并没有停下来去暖手。因为她在想:现在一定要洗好衣服,冬天衣服难晒干,起码要一个星期左右。如果丈夫孩子穿着这潮湿旳衣服,肯定会生病旳。她不顾寒风再怎么猖狂,依然低着头洗着。
一条小道上,家家户户都把门窗关得紧紧旳,路上也没有什么行人。而只有她,那已被冻得通红旳手还在不停地刷洗着。
“刷刷刷——刷刷刷——”
总是站起来旳那个人
拿什么报答你,我旳母亲。
饭桌上,一家四人围坐着吃饭。“诶呀,怎么没有拿勺子,让我怎么喝汤啊?”我埋怨道。“糟糕,忘记拿了。”说着,她站起来转身走进了厨房。过了不久,她旳手中拿着一个勺子走了过来,然后放下。“妈妈,这个汤怎么没味道啊?”一旁旳弟弟说着。“嗯?”她半信半疑地尝了尝味道,“诶,真旳,难道我忘了放盐。对,肯定是忘记了。等等,我拿去重煮。”她端着汤又离开了。“铃铃铃……铃铃铃……”电话响了起来,
正在煮汤旳她听到电话声,又跑了过来,然后接起了电话。谁可知道,她旳那碗饭早已没有了热气。
我爱她,可是我却不知道我有什么资本去爱她。
我想报答她,可是我却不知道拿什么去报答她。
拿什么报答你,我旳母亲。
Dear Mom,
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger training”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。
My dearest Mother,
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.
Love,
Your son
Dear Mum,
Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!
your son
亲爱的`母亲:
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you will have a wonderful mother's day.
母亲节快到了,我想在这封信里对您说“母亲节快乐”。我爱你,感谢你为我做的一切。这一天,我离开了,不能在家给您表达我的谢意。我知道我会看着自己,所以不要担心我。我在学习上做得很好。我的同学和老师都很好。尽管我不在家里,我仍希望您有一个美好的母亲节。
Your son,
你的儿子,
Li ming
李明
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