Wolf, meeting with a Lamb astray from the fold, resolved not to lay violent hands on him, but to find some plea, which should justify to the Lamb himself his right to eat him. He thus addressed him:"Sirrah, last year you grossly insulted me." "Indeed," bleated the Lamb in a mournful tone of voice, "I was not then born." Then said the Wolf, "You feed in my pasture."
"No, good sir," replied the Lamb, "I have not yet tasted grass." Again said the Wolf, "You drink of my well." "No," exclaimed the Lamb, "I never yet drank water, for as yet my mother′s milk is both food and drink to me." On which the Wolf seized him, and ate him up, saying, "Well! I won′t remain supperless, even though you refute every one of my imputations."The tyrant will always find a pretext for his tyranny.
狼和小羊
一只狼瞧见一只迷路失群的小羊,决定暂缓下毒手,想先找一些理由,对小羊证明自己有吃它的权利。它就说:「小鬼!你去年曾经骂过我。」小羊可怜地说:「老实说,我去年还没有出生呢。」狼再说:「你在我的草地上吃过草。」
小羊回答说:「不,好先生,我还未曾尝过草的味道呢。」狼又说:「你喝过我井里的.水。」小羊叫道:「不,我从没有喝过水,因为直到今天为止,我都是吃着母亲的奶汁。」狼一听这话,便抓住它,把它吃下去,便说:「好!即使你驳倒我每一句话,我终究要吃晚餐的!」暴君总有他暴行的借口。
话题“牵挂”,情深意浓,依题,也要以情动人。这篇作文小事微言,却把母亲对子女的牵挂之情表现得淋漓尽致,让我感动。我想,一篇考场作文倘能打动评卷老师,肯定会获得很好的成绩。
我喜欢第一节的幽默,它把母亲对“我”一如既往的牵挂,含蓄而诙谐地表达出来。我欣赏第二节两双眼睛在黑暗中对接:不用灯光,彼此心里亮;不用言语,无声胜有声!我最惊叹第三节的“放飞”,母亲明明时刻牵挂近在身边的“我”,但为了“我”的前程却说“我希望你飞得越远越好”,而宁愿独自承受无边的牵挂之苦,多么感人肺腑啊!什么是母爱,还需要解释吗?还值得一提的是,“我”的感情变化也写得相当自然、感人,能很好地衬托出母爱的深沉。
题为“最温柔的称呼”,不大妥帖,不如改用“温柔的情愫”(见第二节最后一段),以表现“牵挂”之内涵。在选材上,一二两节都选“晚归”显得单一,如能另择素材更好。
晚上和妈出去逛街,忽然妈妈说了一句:“我希望你飞得越远越好。”
我会飞得很远很远。可是,不管我飞得有多远,你的牵挂都会牢牢地将我拴住,你的爱都会永远地包围着我,让我在远离你的时候,有继续飞翔的勇气。
因牵挂,你永远与我同在。
“我会的,妈妈。”看着她眼角的皱纹,我轻轻地说。
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