星期六,我在姥姥家,刚醒来,想起老师布置的作文,愁啊!《一件有意义的事》,怎么写啊?抬眼看见挂在床头上的日历,五月七号,七号的后面是八号,赫然写着“母亲节”!我自言自语的说:“明天就是母亲节了,要祝妈妈节日快乐,也要祝妈妈的妈妈---就是我的姥姥节日快乐。”
我从两三岁就在姥姥家生活了,毕竟姥姥养了我七八年了,所以姥姥现在也成了了我的母亲。
妈妈呢?我也要祝福,因为妈妈生了我,所以我要祝妈妈节日快乐。
想到这,赶紧起了床,对姥姥说:“姥姥谢谢您,把我养这么大,还把我当小公主一样伺候,您辛苦了,祝你母亲节快乐!”姥姥特开心的抱着我亲了又亲。
妈妈离我太远了,我只好打电话祝福她,妈妈听了我的祝福激动万分,说:“我自己都不记得了呢!子怡还在记着,真是我的好女儿!谢谢你!好宝贝!”
妈妈和姥姥,一个生我,一个养我,就像是我的“生母”和“养母”。我要给她们带来快乐和成就感。
我觉得母亲节给她们祝福是一件很有意义的事情!可以让她们增加幸福感!
Dear Mom,
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger training”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。
晚上,我早早地做完作业,想:“今天是母亲节,是妈妈的节日,我应该送给妈妈一份什么样的礼物呢?”我左思右想:“对了,还是为妈妈做点力所能及的事吧。”
“妈妈,今天是你的节日,我能为您做点什么吗?”我来到妈妈面前,大声问。“不用了!”妈妈摸摸我的头说,“你学习成绩好,就是给妈妈的最好礼物!”我紧锁着眉头说:“不行,您养育我这么多年,这么辛苦,还是让我给您服务一下吧。”妈妈说:“那好吧,那你准备为我做点什么呢?”
我想:家里有泡脚的中药,就给妈妈洗脚吧!于是,我端来一盆热水,倒进一些泡脚的中药,扶妈妈坐到椅子上,帮妈妈把袜子脱掉,让妈妈把脚伸进盆里,问妈妈:“这水烫吗?”妈妈说:“正好。”我一边帮妈妈按摩,一边为妈妈讲述学校里的有趣事,妈妈时不时发出哈哈大笑。洗完脚,妈妈笑颜逐开地说:“杨杨真乖,真的长大了。”
我谦虚地说:“这不过是一件小事!”
Dear Mum,
Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!
your son
在我们的生活中,经历过许多的磨难和挫折,其中有许多有意义的事令我们难以忘怀。
3月8日妇女节,这一天我感到非常开心,因为是全世界妈妈们的节日,伟大的母亲养育我们不求任何回报,我们应该好好为妈妈庆祝一下。造成,我起了个大早,忙着去给妈妈挑选礼物,坐上车心里充满各种想法,什么礼物妈妈最想要。只要妈妈高兴我就满意。今天我带的钱不多,这是我这几个星期的零用钱,积攒下来买礼物的。我兴高采烈的来到商店,仿佛要去干一件非常伟大的事,心里美美的。进商店我细心的挑选礼物,看着看着发现柜台上有一双皮手套,上面有一颗红心,我很好奇。问店主这手套有什么意义吗?店家就细心地讲给我听,店主说:“这副皮手套里面的含义非常深刻,是母亲节送给妈妈最好的礼物,因为妈妈经常刷锅洗碗,很容易伤手。让妈妈带上这副手套,既保护了妈妈的手,又能够向妈妈献出自己的一份关心。”听了店主的话,我便给妈妈买了一副皮手套。虽然这副手套很廉价,但是去饱含了我对妈妈深深的爱。我高兴地回到家把它交给了妈妈,并说:“妈妈祝你母亲节快乐!”妈妈高兴地流下了幸福的.眼泪,说:“孩子长大了,懂得感恩了,妈妈谢谢你。”我在母亲节这一天留下了最甜蜜的笑容。
我们在笑声中结束了这难忘的母亲节。母亲的教诲让我终生难忘。
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