一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。
●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.
●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
今日,我看了影片《为了明天》之后,便津津回味无穷,影片里的剧情感人肺腑,使我心很长时间不能平静。
影片关键演了:一位老师为了更好地让贫困的水族学员能够念书,在每一户别人的门口都是有他跪爬过的身影,根据他的持续勤奋,每一个小孩都上学。以后,便发生了一系列的感人故事。
在大家现实生活中,有几个能够像电影中的卢老师一样呢?他能够为了更好地孩子们舍弃自身的一切,殊不知,大家现实生活中全是自私自利的,不以他人着想。
我敬佩卢老师,敬佩他那能够为孩子们着想却不管不顾自身的精神实质。父母不许孩子们念书,他不折不挠用自身残废的两腿,跪爬到每一户人大门口。央求让孩子读书。最终为孩子们铺平一条专业知识的路面。
我钦佩卢教师,钦佩他有坚强的意志。孩子们沒有桌椅板凳,他就用自身的两手去造就;孩子们有风险,自身扑上去以身相挡。在教室里,孩子们的课程内容不一样,他便跪爬的给一个个小孩上不一样的课程内容。班里随处是他跪爬的身影。
想一想卢老师,相比自己,我愧疚得很。在日常日常生活,我只给自己着想从没在意到他人的体会。我做什么事情必须他人协助,却不可以单独进行。看了这部影片以后我懂得了,它是一种依靠的心理状态,是沒有坚强意志的主要表现。我想学会独立,学好独立。不能全都借助他人。
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