Dear Mom,
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger training”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。
Dear Mum,
Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!
your son
When he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food,though he couldn‘t do the cooking well. Thenhe cleaned the room. He felt very tired, but he was very happy.
When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes which weren‘t so nice, they were very happy.They had their supper together. His mother said, Thank you,my child!
今天是母亲节。孙峥觉得应该为妈妈做点事,他决定帮妈妈做些家务。放学回家的路上,他去商店买了食品。到家后,他尽全力做些好吃的,尽管他并不擅长烹任。做完饭,他又打扫了房间。他感觉有些累,但仍然很高兴。
当父母回来后,看见干净的房间和并不太荚味的`菜,他们依然很高兴。他们一起吃了晚饭。妈妈说:“谢谢你,孩子。”
Today is Mother‘s Day. I know some of my classmates are going to help their mothers with the housework, others .are going to buy some flowers for their mothers. I want to say to her that I love her very much. But as a boy, it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart. I think only girls can do that.
My mother is very kind. She takes care of me day and night.
She spends little money, but buys anything for me that I need.
This time I must show my love. I am going to give her a card and write like this, I love you, mother! I am going to put it under her pillow.
今天是母亲节。我知道一些同学打算帮妈妈做些家务,还有一些同学打算给妈妈买些花。我只是想对妈妈说一声,我非常爱她。但是对我来说这样表达我的情感有点儿难,因为我是个男孩。我觉得只有女生才这样做。
我妈妈是个非常善良的人。她对我照顾得无微不至。她自己很少花钱,但能给我买我需要的任何东西。
这次我一定要表示我对她的爱。我打算送她一张写有“我爱你,妈妈”的卡片,我还打算把它放在她的枕头下面。
您好!
有一种爱,我无法用言语诉尽,更无法用文字写尽——母爱。在我成长的道路中,是您教给我知识,是您教会了我许多做人的道理,是您在挫折中给我鼓励。妈妈,我要感恩的人是您!
妈妈,您是一位优秀的教师。您所带的班级经常受到学校的表扬,同学们经过您的认真、细心地辅导和教育,有的踏入工作岗位,有的考上了大学。学生们为了表示对您的感激,经常带着礼物来看您。你虽不是学校领导,但您关心同事的文化生活。您创办的街舞俱乐部,受到了众多老师的欢迎。每周星期五,由学校的舞蹈老师来辅导你们。您每次都是汗流浃背地回来,却摆出副神采奕奕的模样。那一刻,您身上散发的对工作的热忱,对生活的`热爱之表,深深地感动我,也无声无息影响着我。妈妈,我感谢您!是您用言行教我做一个阳光的、热爱学习和生活的男孩!
妈妈,您还记得吗?在常平镇举行的党的知识竞赛中,您和另外两名老师代表学校参加了比赛。比赛的前几天,您总是不知疲倦、全神贯注地复习资料。尽管窗外汽车的喇叭声很刺耳,尽管人们的喧闹声很嘈杂,但您却能专心致志地陶醉在知识的海洋里。校庆晚会的当天,全校师生沉浸在欢乐的海洋里尽情地欣赏节目。可您却缺席了,呆在家中熟记竞赛的知识要点呢!这一刻,您用言行教导我:业精于勤而荒于嬉。一天上午,趁我休息的时间,您让我考考您资料上的问题。您背得滚瓜烂熟,如同喝水一样一气呵成。然后,您让我测试您的反映能力,我说:“A:2;B:3;C,请答题。”您立刻一拍桌子,模拟按抢答器的样子,说:“A。”可惜您慢了半拍。我们反复练习,您的抢答速度相当快了。比赛完那天中午,我知道你们拿了一等奖,立刻来给你们祝贺。此时,我感悟到:人生要像妈妈一样,敢于挑战。而人生的价值,即以其对当代所做的工作为尺度。
生活中,您给了我许多的爱。妈妈您辛苦了,您为了我,为了工作,为了家庭,为社会一直在默默无闻地付出,我将永远铭记于心!您就像我人生的航标,在我漫漫的成长之路上指引我前进!感谢您,亲爱的妈妈!
祝妈妈工作顺利,身体健康!
您的儿子:简凌奕
Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!
your son
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