五年级英语作文交通安全的建议【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文交通安全的建议【二】
人世间生命最为可贵，如果没有了金钱，可以去再赚，没有了工作，可以去拼搏，没有了学业，可以去学习，可一旦没有了生命，一切都是空谈。
生命有时极端脆弱，不经意间就失去了，在剥夺人类生命的恶魔中，有的是病毒，有的是灾害，可多数是车祸。病毒无法抗拒，灾害不能避免，但车祸是人祸，不是天灾。所以，我们可以控制，可以防范的。
随着经济的日益发展，人们的生活条件也飞速发展，马路上川流不息的景象随处可见。然而，却由于有些人对交通安全意识的淡薄，不遵守交通规则，在车水马龙的公路上上演了一幕幕不可挽回的悲剧。例如：20xx年4月4日，在纳雍县老凹坝乡以那河大桥，因司机违规进入乡村水泥路，操作不当，一辆中型客车侧翻，造成21人死亡，3人受伤。
同学们，这些令人心痛的画面，曾使多少个家庭妻离子散，家破人亡，又使多少颗甜蜜之心在一刹那间被打碎。那一起起血淋淋的交通事故，又夺去了多少人仅有的生命啊！同学们，当你看到一个个鲜活的生命中消失在车轮底下，当你发现一阵阵欢声笑语湮没在汽笛声中，当你面对那触目惊心的场面时，你难道不感到痛心疾首吗？然而，这种种不幸的“头号***手”都是因不遵守交通规则而酿成的。
交通安全，必不可少！交通安全，至关重要！据了解，上个世纪，全世界因交通事故而死亡的.共有1585万人，2585万人啊！难道这个世纪我们还要重蹈覆辙吗？不！不能啊！同学们，我们是新世纪的接班人，让我们共同携起友谊之手，遵守交通规则。遵章守纪，就是尊重生命，尊重自我。重视交通规则，不仅是我们每个人的义务，更是我们的责任。同学们，让我们携起
手来把平安的种子撒进心间，一起来呵护这文明的生命之花。让安全与我们同行，让安全永驻我们心间，让我们的青春之花开得更加绚丽多彩！
五年级英语作文交通安全的建议【三】
春风轻轻的吹，唤醒了沉睡的大地，万物复苏，我建议的家去农村的田野去看一看，一定会有许多收获，因为我经常去乡下的姥姥家去走亲戚。
迎着春风，我们全班同学乘坐旅游客车向美丽的乡村--移风驶去，一进村就感受到了大自然的气息，清新而舒畅，没有一点污染瑕疵。走在路上，瞧，道路两旁的垂柳已经换上了嫩绿的新装，轻风拂过;无数的柳条像仙女扭动的腰肢一样，随风飘动;又想用绿色四线织成的绿丝带，美丽极了。农村小院里，桃花，杏花，梨花，还有一朵朵苹果花，一簇簇都露出了笑脸。他们争奇斗艳，竞相开放，构成了百花盛开的春天。就连那个不起眼的小草也不甘示弱，悄悄地从地探出了绿油油的小脑袋，在向我们微笑。我们坐在草地上，就如同坐在一张地毯上一般舒服。放眼望去，山坡上一片绿色。可爱的小燕子也从遥远的南方飞来。他们鸣叫着，飞舞着欢迎春天的到来。
我们步漫游，尽情享受这美好的春光，不觉得心阔旷怡，好行进入仙境一般。
我想最近农村一定更美丽了。因此我在此希望大家采纳我的意见:到田野里，麦田边去看一看，乡村生活因为自由自在，无拘无束，多姿多彩而让人向往，令人沉醉不愿归。
