中秋英语作文小学五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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中秋英语作文小学五年级【二】
在家吃完了月饼，就和同学骑着车子去赏月，去游玩。 黄昏的傍晚,玉兔东升,皎洁的月光是那么的迷人,天空中有几朵洁白的云彩飘荡在云朵中间,微风飒飒,徐徐的吹着小风,月光下的葡萄架上有几串沉甸甸的葡萄,几只萤火虫飞来飞去,,是那么有情调,这情调又是那么的迷人. 我等着等着，天空中有一点白色，好像月亮要来了。就在那一刹那间，月亮出现在人们眼里，但是月亮还不圆，也没有光。天空中的黑云向月亮围拢过去，月亮经过一次又一次的困难、一次又一次的挫折，终于照亮了整个天空，顿时，天空一片暗蓝。整个世界焕然一新，在月亮的`光线下，草坪上都变成金光般的了。远处的那几颗星星也被月亮的光盖住了，天空上除了月亮什么也没有。
一轮金黄的圆月现在已经高高地挂在天空中，像轻纱似的一般温柔。天空中云很淡，风很轻，月光很美，这构成了一幅漂亮的画。在深蓝色的夜空里，月亮显得更圆、更亮、更美了。这么美的月亮能不让人心动吗？这圆月非常调皮，一会儿钻进云姐姐的怀里，一会儿和星星谈话，一会儿唱歌跳舞……真拿它没办法。
夜幕降临，天空中显得有些阴天，没有几颗星星的陪伴，明月如镜，满月如盘。
我和同学骑车到了中华阆天城，来到音乐喷泉旁，一阵音乐响起了，喷泉随着音乐的节奏，“跳”了起来，有红色、蓝色、白色、绿色……真是漂亮 ！旁边的人们，随着音乐的旋律，跳起了优美的舞蹈。
我和同学骑车又来到了滨江路，微风从家家户户的窗前吹过，送来了月饼和水果的清香味儿。
一路上，“银盘”跟随着我们，但似乎有些害羞，我死死盯着它，刚和同学说话的功夫，它悄悄躲进云里，过好长时间，再出来瞧瞧。
啊！中秋的月亮可真美！月亮高高地悬挂在空中，夜已经很晚了，我和同学披着银白的月光骑车走上回家的路。
今天，真是一个快乐的中秋节呀！
中秋英语作文小学五年级【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
中秋英语作文小学五年级【四】
记得那一天，忠诚的信使——电话，报来了一条可怕的消息：“外婆生病了！还咳出了血！”这个消息像雷霆霹雳一样在空中划过！一点儿也没有心理准备的妈妈，立刻被击垮了。她变成了泪人儿，吃饭的时候哭，睡觉的时候哭，整日以泪洗面！
和外婆在一起的一幕幕像放电影似的，在我脑海里回放：外婆抱我，亲我，给我做我最爱吃的，给我玩最好玩的，让我看最热闹的……妈妈说：“轩，你还记得吗？那天在爷爷的生日宴上，你在台上主持，那么自信、那么优秀，外婆被你的表现给震住了。她拉着我的.手悄悄地对我说：伟丽，孩子是我们的希望，今天他用自己的努力，证明了自己一点儿也不比别人差，或许，他现在很平凡，但谁能说平凡中不孕育着伟大呢！”听完妈妈的讲述，我已经坐立不安，妈妈看着我已经湿润的眼眶，安抚着我，一边啜泣一边说：“外婆会平平安安的，没事的，锦轩！”
我坐在妈妈的汽车里，怀着急切的思念，想要马上就见到外婆。车子一路颠簸着，开到了外婆家，妈妈显得有些激动，三步并作两步地走着。刚来到家门口，外公就立刻迎了出来，一边和妈妈寒暄着一边拉着我的小手给我递过来许多好吃的。“妈，妈——”妈妈喊着外婆，外婆从房间里传来轻微的呼唤声，妈妈急切地走进去，亲切地问：“妈！怎么样了，化疗以后身体怎样了，有没有不舒服啊？”
我注意到外婆的气色虽然不怎么好，但是精神状态还可以，本来无精打采的眼神，现在变得活络了。问完了一些情况，妈妈就开始帮外公扫地、烧饭、洗衣……大家还一起欢快地进餐，和和睦睦的，一丁点也看不出谁生病了。
中秋节象征着平安和团圆，人们可以通过中秋节来互相祝福。我们期待外婆早日康复！
但愿人长久，千里共婵娟！
