很多学生觉得,只要脑袋里装满例子,写作时想要什么例子就有什么例子,就什么都不用愁了。其实,这是一种误解。议论文固然离不开例子,但例子并不能代替分析论证,议论文的力量,主要来源于作者丰富的生动的言之成理的思想,归根到底,要以说理取胜,并不是靠例子取胜。一篇八百字的议论文,你能举多少字的例子呢?例子多了,辨证分析的空间就小了,就很难把观点说透。许多学生就形成了一种强盗逻辑思维,不管三七二十一,叙完某人的成功之处就贴话题(命题),比如,在一次习作中,话题是尊重他人,有些学生就如此论证:李白之所以能够成为诗仙,能写出‘乘风破浪会有时,直挂云帆济沧海’的名句,就在于他能够尊重他人;鲁迅之所以能够成现代文学巨匠就因他能够尊重他人,这就是一种强加,前面没有事例证明,后面没有辨证分析,这些伟人之所以能够取得这些成就,就一定是他们能够尊重他人的结果吗?这就说明没有思辨能力就无法做到把理说透。
Recently, the topic of air pollution has again aroused more and more attention since pollution haze, a kind of weather, has appeared increasing frequently in our cities. Just as the picture showed, when pollution haze comes, the whole city was covered with suspended particles which can breath into our body causing heavy problem to our health.
Due to the bad effect from pollution haze, a green and clear environment, rather than anything else, turns to be an important role and a urgent issue in our daily lives. Meanwhile we just live in only an earth, if we didn’t try to protect our common hometown, we would have no place to settle.
Thus, we should take effective measures to rebuild our beautiful environment of the cities from now on.
In my opinion, law and regulations should be enforced by the government and authorities to control the emission of polluting gas. To ourselves, we should enhance the awareness of environment protection and choose a green lifestyle to make contribution to our earth day from day.
The components that make up haze may have negative effect on people's health especially that of the children and the elderly. Also not excluded are those who have certain diseases such as asthma, allergy, and pneumonia and lung disease. Workers working in the open air have a high risk in their health.
组件构成烟雾可能对人们的健康有负面影响特别是儿童和老人。也不排除是某些疾病如哮喘、过敏、肺炎和肺部疾病。工人工作在露天有很高的.风险在他们的健康。
Recently, the topic of air pollution has again aroused more and more attention since pollution haze, a kind of weather, has appeared increasing frequently in our cities. Just as the picture showed, when pollution haze comes, the whole city was covered with suspended particles which can breath into our body causing heavy problem to our health.
Due to the bad effect from pollution haze, a green and clear environment, rather than anything else, turns to be an important role and a urgent issue in our daily lives. Meanwhile we just live in only an earth, if we didn’t try to protect our common hometown, we would have no place to settle.
Thus, we should take effective measures to rebuild our beautiful environment of the cities from now on.
In my opinion, law and regulations should be enforced by the government and authorities to control the emission of polluting gas. To ourselves, we should enhance the awareness of environment protection and choose a green lifestyle to make contribution to our earth day from day
“自古逢秋悲寂寥,我言秋日胜春朝”。这句诗出自刘禹锡的《秋词》,他认为春天比不上秋天,而我也是这么认为的。
小学生涯的最后一次秋游终于来了。我们自己上了大巴车后,迅速进入了“状态”。有的掏出了零食,有的拿出了扑克,还有人变戏法似的迅速拿出手机,把我的囧样拍了下来。当然,他付出了“代价”。说笑中,目的地——小南湖到了。
刚进大门,一阵清爽的秋风卷着几片落叶拂过我的面颊,欢迎会开始啦!草儿向我们自己鞠躬;大树奏起了音乐;落叶跳起了舞蹈……我们自己早就按捺不住,欢呼着跑来跑去。
没走不远,前排某个班级同学大喊一声:“看!枫树!”我们自己“呼啦”一声围了过去。“哇!”我不禁感叹一声。原来那丛枫林十分茂密,此时正值深秋,枫林中的枫叶红得似火。远远望去,就好像熊熊燃烧的烈火。我捡起一片枫叶,细细观察,那枫叶好像小孩子的手掌,叶尖微微泛着水红,我当时诗兴大发,随口吟了两句:小手叶尖泛水红,沐光火焰更蓬勃。
激动人心的时刻到了。我们自己三五成群地聚在一起,倒出零食和伙伴们分享。瞧!王志涛一个劲往嘴里塞,脸都吃成了“大包子”,真不儒雅;而满庭轩也是个“狠角色”,个子小,身体机能却十分强大,只见他左右开弓,见好吃的就啃;李晨启可不是那样的人,他细嚼慢咽,十分有“贵族气质”;我的吃相也不好看,但“高手”太多,我不得不抢……
吃饱了当然要散散步,我撇下争食的二师弟们,来到了湖边。放眼望去,水天一色,波光粼粼,平静的湖面不时映出鸟儿的倒影。阳光洒在湖面上,好像碎金在随波逐流;又好像鱼鳞漂在水面上为太阳作镜子……真令人心旷神怡。
快乐的时光总是短暂的,我们自己会慢慢长大,这份美好的回忆会一直留在心底。
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