女儿刚出生就患有脑瘫,个月大时又被诊断患有癫痫。岁老来得女的赵长萱,这位来自哈尔滨的伟大父亲,年如一日,用他最深沉、最厚重的爱,为女儿撑起了一片天空,创造了一个又一个生命奇迹。当《让世界充满爱》的动人旋律在耳畔轻轻流淌,从“唯朵至珍”,到唯爱至真,“朵朵爸爸”感动万千网民,也向我们诠释了这样一个道理:父爱如山,静默无声,不求回报;父爱似海,深沉宽广,足以包容一生。
Study the two pictures above carefully and write an essay entitled “On the Relationship between Environment and Economy” In the essay, you should (1 describe the pictures and interpret their meaning (2 give your opinion with some proof (3 give your conclusion.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points
[参考范文]On the Relationship between Environment and Economy
The two pictures above are both about the relationship between the environment and the economic development. In the first picture, GDP is on the rise while the environment is drastically polluted. In the second picture, economic efficiency progresses with environmental protection. It’s easy to get the conclusion that development according to the second picture is more reasonable than that in the first one.
In the early development of socialism, our country didn’t pay much attention to the issue of environmental protection and savored the bitterness. Now, the government has taken many measures and is implementing the strategy of “sustainable development”. One aspect of the strategy is to develop the economy and take measures to protect the environment at the same time. In this way, we can develop our country in a sustainable manner and our offspring can have enough resources to develop society. If we don’t put much emphasis on the environment issue and excavate the natural resources blindly, our country will become a barren land sooner or later.
In a word, sustainable development is a reasonable strategy which should be implemented for a long time. The nature is providing us with plentiful resources generously, but it may punish us severely if we don’t care her.
洛阳市突降暴雨,市内一交通要道水深及膝,积水深达厘米,交通拥堵不堪。交警戚新峰在水中指挥交通。虽然穿着雨衣,但由于涉水时间较长,他的裤子都已湿透。紧张的疏导中,一只皮鞋被水冲走了,他索性把另一只鞋也脱掉,继续淌水指挥。戚新峰雨中指挥交通、援手被困群众的视频,被网友传至大河论坛,迅速走红。网友称戚新峰为“赤脚哥”,他在平凡中创造感动,在风雨中彰显无私。
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
岁的长春小伙卢续,一个普通的房地产公司职工,在吉林永吉巨大洪灾面前挺身而出,用他的智慧与勇敢,成功挽救了一个又一个鲜活的生命。在他的身上,让人看到源自于人内心最本质的一种温暖与力量。当“救人视频”出现在网络上,被无数网友不断“顶”起,几天内点击量达数百万次,一度成为网络上“最揪心”“最感动”的暖流。灾难面前,一个又一个卢续告诉我们:洪水无情,但人间有爱,在这些平凡人身上,到处散发着人性的光芒与温暖。
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
买尼沙汗·沙吾提,一名新疆昌吉市的普通维吾尔族妇女,尽管家境贫困,却毅然与丈夫收养一名汉族弃婴,年不离不弃,视如珍宝。如今,当年被收养的女孩已经成长为一名品学兼优的初中生,一家四口过着平静而幸福的生活。维汉两族间互帮互助、和睦相处的这段感人故事一经网络视频形式推出就在网民中引起强烈反响,大家感叹维汉团结友爱,人间真情可贵,祝福他们全家幸福。
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