初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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你的妈妈,我的妈妈,虽然她们都是妈妈,但有的同学的妈妈温文尔雅,有的同学妈妈脾气暴躁,而我的妈妈却有的与众不同。
我的妈妈长得很可爱,她那胖呼呼的苹果脸上戴着一副深红色的近视眼镜,头上染着酒红色的头发,妈妈身材矮小,体型较胖,平时没事在家爱跳跳健美操。 妈妈在单位是个心直口快的人,每当单位发生了不公平的事,妈妈总是两肋插刀,拔刀相助,所以单位有一些同事对妈妈很不满,但是妈妈依然活得开心,活得自在。 在家里,妈妈对我更是没得话说。。。平时给我做各式各样的可口饭菜,把我养的健健康康。但是妈妈对我的学习时非常严格的,可是,妈妈也有投降的时候,记得有一次。晚上9:30多了,因为妈妈在家还给我布置了“妈妈作业”,所以我写不完,于是我又哭又闹,妈妈没办法了,只好做出让步:周末的“妈妈作业”取消。看到妈妈投降后,我心中的欢乐之火又重新燃烧起来,你猜,妈妈为什么让步呢?因为妈妈心中是非常非常的爱我的,疼我的。
妈妈在单位是个乐于助人的'好同事,在家是个温柔体贴的家庭主妇,我希望妈妈能做的更好,我也一定会更爱我的胖妈妈。
一年一度的感恩节到了,但我最想感谢的人是一个普通的家庭主妇——我的妈妈。
她无时无刻不在照顾我,关心我,每次我早早地起来,都能吃到香喷喷的早饭,因为妈妈怕我上学迟到,所以很早就准备好了。
记得有一次,天刚蒙蒙亮,可是外面就传来了轰隆隆的敲鼓声,把我从美梦里揪了回来。我便想起床下来走一走,一掀被子,一股凉风袭来,直钻我的骨头,冻得我浑身发抖,赶紧缩回了被窝。可是老躺在床上也闷得慌,还是硬着头皮穿上衣服出来走走。走到厨房门前,厨房的门虚掩着,里面发出哗哗哗的水流声。我推开门一看,一个熟悉的人影正在厨房里忙碌着。仔细一看,原来是妈妈在煮早饭,只见她的手冻得通红,还不停地在冷水中淘米,动作是那么娴熟,不时将双手放在嘴边哈哈气。淘完了米,她又忙着切菜,忽然妈妈“啊!”的一声叫了起来,一股鲜血从她的指尖渗了出来。但妈妈只是匆匆地把血擦掉,用开水泡了一下消消毒,又继续切菜了。我小心翼翼的跑到妈妈身边问:“妈妈,您手受伤了,还是不要切了吧!”妈妈朝我笑了笑亲切地说道:“没事的一点小伤,只要用水泡一泡就行了,倒是你这个小不点这么早就起来干吗,快再去睡一会儿,要不上课的时候会打瞌睡的,那老师讲的知识你也就不知道了,快去吧!”
望着妈妈忙碌的.背影,我心里暗暗对自己说:“妈妈您放心,我一定会好好学习,将来考个好成绩,找一个好工作,好好报答您对我的养育之恩,您就等着好好享福吧!”
妈妈不仅坚持每天早早地起床给我做好吃的,而且在我生病时格外地关心和照顾,让我感到温暖。
开学前几天,我感冒了高烧一直不退,浑身无力,什么都不想吃。妈妈急得像热锅上的蚂蚁团团转,还打了电话请医生来,又到旁边的超市去买了一些泡泡糖,递到我的手上和言细语地说:“给,一般生病的人吃什么都比较苦,所以我特地买了泡泡糖,你吃了就不觉得苦了。”妈妈的话犹如一缕缕阳光照暖了我的心头。我拿起糖塞进嘴里,啊!好甜啊,一直甜到我心里。妈妈用手抚摸我的头还一直嘀咕着:“希望我女儿快点好起来!”眼睛里尽是慈爱和心疼,而妈妈自己,却似乎又憔悴了一些。妈妈,您额上的每一道皱纹都印记下为我的成长操的每一份心,您头上的每一根白发都浸透着为我付出的每一点艰辛,所有这些,我都深深铭记在心,唯有努力学习来报答您的恩情。
今天是感恩节,在这里我想真诚的对妈妈说一声:“谢谢您,妈妈!”
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