第一个登场的是一位盲童,他叫刘浩,20xx年十岁了,是一名小小音乐家。他从4岁刚开始学电子琴,七岁学习钢琴,到现在早已三年了。刘浩的母亲把五线谱翻译成盲谱,一针一针地把音乐符号扎进包装纸里。刘浩十分信心,他每一次获奖便会对妈妈说:你瞧我获奖了。他妈妈说不必自豪。刘浩就说:我这不是自豪只是信心。对啊!幸福快乐就在身边,发展前途是光辉的,如同成龙大哥说的你需要勤奋,努力越多,获得的幸福快乐就越大。
第二个登场的是笃坪乡的`一个老师和他的学员们,教师叫王忠华,和我这群小朋友们在一起早已三年了。王老师除开给这群小孩授课外,平常没事儿就教她们麦克尔杰克逊的民族舞蹈。如今王老师就需要和这群小朋友们道别了,最终交给她们的礼品是一张光碟,上边记述了王老师和她们在这里三年里的相片也有王老师想对有人说的知心话,这群小孩是多么的的不舍得王老师啊!我觉得:王老师一定是世界最幸福快乐的教师!
第三个登场的是一位好看可爱的女生带著她的妈妈,这一女生叫孟佩杰,她的妈妈叫刘晓英。孟佩杰的妈妈偏瘫在床,她每日早上六点醒来给妈妈煮饭,搞好餐后,先让妈妈吃过饭,她再吃,随后跑着去学校授课。下午下课后,孟佩杰一路小跑步回到家,给妈妈搞好饭,等妈妈吃完饭,她便举起个冷馍边跑边吃,匆匆忙忙地回到院校。中午下学,孟佩杰返回家中的第一件事便是推着一天没出门儿的妈妈到外边去透透风。回家了后,又赶快去煮饭,吃过饭,帮妈妈推拿一会儿,再服侍妈妈入睡,等她忙完就9点多了,这时候她才可以专心致志做作业。
见到这儿,我忍不住落下来泪来。孟佩杰太顽强了,想不到大家同年龄人之中也有这么多悲剧的小孩,比较之下,身心健康又有爸爸妈妈疼惜的大家幸福快乐多了!将来我们要向她们学习培训,甘于奉献,信心开朗,勤奋找寻更完美的幸福!
在英语村里,模拟了现实生活中的四个场景——“城市馆”、“自然馆”、“生活馆”和“商业馆”,四个场馆中的部分物品和布景都是实物,每个场馆又被分成几个场景,外教和中教轮流授课,我们这次可真是与英语世界来了个亲密接触。在全英语的语言环境和实物情境下,我们对学习英语的兴趣变得前所未有的高涨。就比如说在城市馆里吧,刚进城市馆,一个美丽的大都市——上海的模型立刻呈现在我们的面前,那一个个地标性建筑物的模型,在镭射灯光的映衬下是显得格外的雄伟壮丽,你甚至猜想不到的是在城市馆里居然会有一节能移动的地铁车厢,在最后一节课中,老师终于带着我们“乘坐”了一次地铁,这“地铁”中,老师不停的作者令人捧腹的`动作,使得大家都争先恐后的想“乘坐”一次平时已经坐得习以为常的地铁。每当外教拉开悬挂的粉红色幕布时,或旋转布景板进行场景切换时,我们都会发出声声惊叹,因为,我们以前从来没有这样学习过英语。在商业馆的超市里,甚至可以看到真实的收银机等等实物,我们真实地体验着用英语对话来购物的整个流程,我们扮演着不同的角色,来学习这个角色所要说得话;在生活馆里,老师会用英语生动地为我们介绍各式厨具用品,并且还和我们做游戏,让我们在游戏当中来巩固与加深你对这个英语单词的印象,如果你读得好的话,老师会和你拍手,表示鼓励;在自然馆中,我们仿佛亲身来到了大自然中,有热带雨林,有北极,海洋,在教室的墙上还贴着国家的地图和标着英语单词的国旗名称,在自然馆中最有趣的还是要数在进门时有一座假山,不高的假山上悬挂着一个吊绳,仿佛可以真的用来攀岩一般。我们不时为老师们幽默、生动的语言、表情和肢体动作爆发出阵阵笑声,为同学的精彩表现鼓掌加油。
通过这次活动,让我们在现实生活中快乐的学习了一次英语,也然我的英语水平提高了不少,希望以后这样的实践活动多一些,能够我们丰富我们的课外生活。我期待着有更多的同学能来到这个英语村里来,让他们也体验到更多学习英语的快乐!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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