Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
"机遇只偏爱有准备的头脑",这是一句早为人们所稔熟的。回顾自己走过的历程,我深切地到:一个人要想取得某种成功,必须具备一定的条件,需要有良好的素质作为依托,也就是说,机遇选择素质。
的确,机遇常常偏爱那些有能力、有才***人。然而,这些能力与才***获得,无不是来自艰苦不懈地努力。不能付出眼泪、辛劳和汗水,便不能获得成功。成功者之所以能够成功,是因为他们具备有获取成功的条件,而这些条件有获得,是因为他们付出了比别人更多地劳动,这些劳动,犹如垒土,最终奠定了他们事业的根基,为他们借助机遇实现人生的腾飞打下了最牢固的能力基础。
没有所处时代所赐予的良机,就不会有成功者的人生辉煌和事业成就。然而,面对同样的环境,面对环境所给予的同样机遇,并不是每个人都是幸运儿。在得到命运垂青之前,成功者都经过了长期、艰苦的准备。他们之所以能够获得命运更多的青睐,就是因为他们较之常人为此进行了更为漫长和充分的准备。他们就像一颗颗种子,在黑暗的泥土中蓄积营养和能量,一旦听到春风的呼唤,他们就会破土而出,生长成挺拔俊秀的栋梁之才。
机遇是一种稀缺的、条件苛刻地资源,要得到它,必须付出相当的代价和成本,必须具备相应的足以胜任的资格,而这一切都离不开长期艰苦的准备。如果机遇可以被每个人轻而易举地得到,那么这种机遇便显得没有多大价值了。同样,当机遇人人都知道的时候,机遇也正在迅速消失。
我们现在处在一个充满机遇的伟大时期,在工作中也充满了表现自己才华的机遇,不断进步的机遇,如何面对机遇?这次选拔还告诉我们,尽管有些方面的条件我们不具备,但只要通过不断的学习,不断地提高素质,相信一定会适应社会的要求,把握一定的机遇。同时,一个的人总是处于不断的变化之中,也就是说机遇也在不断地变化,甚至机遇的门槛会越来越高。周围的环境在变,新事物不断涌现,这也要求我们不断学习。固步自封是没有出路的,在汽车工业发达的今天,我们再也不会骑马去旅游。在强调机遇选择素质的同时,还要磨练精神,不断地突破自我。对于那些被机遇选中的人,我不会一味地抱怨,而是会如实地看待他们身上表现出来的优点和长处,分析他们取得成功的原因,化作自己前进的动力。许多成功人士的告诉我们,他们之所以能够最终取得胜利,不仅仅是他们具备一些条件,还在于他们有一种永远奋发、永不满足的精神。在这种精神的鼓舞下,他们能够不断地向自我发起挑战,突破人生中的种种障碍,使自己的事业一步步升级,直达到质变的端点,因此,机遇可能会姗姗来迟,但一旦降临,便会成为这些精神永不垮的人改变自己命运的转折点。
过去的事情我们谁也无法改变,但我们可以在未来的日子里,不断学习,充实自己,提高能力,不断磨练自己,把握属于自己的下一次发展机遇。
又开学了,到了新学期了,新学期准备。同学们也应该有新的学期准备了!比如说你打算考多少分、每天学习多长的时间 …… 我就已经有了新的学期准备了。
首先,我准备好好学习,怎样学呢?每天放学回家,先完成作业,再复习老师当天所教的,最后预习老师明天将要教的,小学三年级作文《新学期准备》。因为只有这样,每次考试才试才能考的好。对了,我打算每次考试都要争取考到满分。
然后,我准备每天放学,以快、对、好来完成作业,完成作业后,也不要闲着每事做,还有很多时间等着我去做一些还没有做好的事情呢!得给自己规定时间了。我打算先用半小时练字,接下来用最快的速度吃晚饭,最后再用半小时来听写。当已经做完了这些事的时候,也许还早着呢,所以我把剩下的时间用在听录音上了。
接着,我准备做什么是,要么就不做,要做就做到最好。
最后,是关于睡觉的事,我准备每天中午都要睡午觉,并且,要睡的长时间一点,因为只有这样,下午的精神才会好。晚上也要早点睡,如果这样做的话,第二天的早上才会起的早,而且又不会想睡觉。早起早睡有很多好处。所以,你也一定也要早起早睡哟!
新的学期代表着新的希望,Are you ready?你准备好了吗?Let's go!
春天, 万物复苏,小河水哗哗地顺流而下; 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱; 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋,大地换上了绿色的新衣; 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽; 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童, 抽出嫩黄色的新芽;。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐, 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶, 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天,太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色,枝条也向四周扩展了许多,变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时, 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸,好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天,凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色,在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来, 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟,我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹,甭提有多高兴了。
冬天,刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过,古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华,仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者,正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月, 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习,成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
成功往往属于那些有准备的人。如果说成功是一片大海,那么准备一定是汪洋大海里的一滴滴水珠。如果说成功是一棵大树,那么准备一定是茂盛大树里的一片片枝叶。如果说成功是一座高山,那么准备一定是巍峨高山上的一块块石子。成功只垂青于那些有准备的人,你准备好了吗?
人生就像楼梯,需要一步一步的往上爬。而那一级一级的台阶正是我们平时所做的准备。你的准备越多越好,那么你的人生之路就越远越稳。正值青春岁月的我们,日日夜夜的在学校里学习着那些被我们看似索然无味的'知识, 其实这就是准备的过程。
记得上初中的第一次月考,我心里暗暗地想着:我一定要努力复习,认真听课,在第一次里要让同学们见识到我的本事。早自习的时候,我一只手捧着书本,另一只手拿着笔,边读、边背、边勾画。眼光随着翻动的书本流动,嘴里一直不停地念叨着,手上的笔在书上来回地转动着,好似在书上跳着优雅的舞蹈。上课的时候,我特地挺直腰,不让它随心所欲地弯下来。我会目不转睛的盯着老师,老师说过的每一句话我都会在心里暗暗地重复一遍。
一下课,同学们都一个个地讲着笑话,或者两三个地一同上厕所,有时四五个的出去透透气,而我却自己控制自己一定要在座位上坐着,我收回了羡慕的眼光,咬了咬干***嘴唇,闭着眼睛用力的甩了甩脑袋,坚决的拿起作业就开始做。
晚上回到寝室,同学们都似一个个放飞山林的精灵,他们一个个卸掉疲劳的包袱,愉快的在寝室里蹦蹦跳跳,或品尝家里带来的美食,或讲述着今天遇到的一些趣事,总之是良多趣味。而我,总是那么格格不入。一个人卧在床上,捧着一本书,边背边问同学,直到熄灯以后我才不甘心地合上书本。清晨, 又开始同样的一天。每天这样反反复复虽然枯燥无味,但是这正是为成功铺下的台阶。那次月考我取得了好成绩。
我一个人在阳光下静静地想着,这次的成功是因为我精心的准备。准备的过程固然艰辛,但是只有肯付出比别人多的准备才能换取独一无二的成功。
当水珠准备到足够多的时候,就会汇聚成大海;当枝叶准备到足够密集的时候,就会拼凑成大树;当石子准备到足够空间的时候,就会堆出高山。记住,成功只限于那些有准备的聪明人,你准备好了吗?
没有准备就直冲云霄,只会中途坠落,折断飞翔的翅膀;没有准备就想绽放花朵,只会成为严寒中的残枝败叶,一片凄凉;没有准备就想日行千里,只会被烈风撕破航行的帆,阻挡前行的路。
做好准备才能展翅飞翔,翱翔苍穹,飞向理想的天堂;做好准备才能鲜花绽放,百花丛中,鲜艳夺目;做好准备才能扬起理想的帆,带着成功的梦,驶向成功的彼岸。
没有准备就急促上路,只能是徒劳;做好准备,自信前进,才会走向成功之道。成功,属于有准备的头脑。
准备是行动的前提和基础。如果没有准备,那么给你一艘轮船,你敢航行吗?给你一个指南针,你敢探险吗?给你一个舞台,你敢展现自我吗?因此,只有做好充分的准备,才会坚定心中的目标和理想,明确自己前进的方向。
准备是顺利实施的保障。古人云:“工欲善其事,必先利其器。”没有工具,怎么能够有效地完成任务?没带武器就上战场,怎么能够战胜对手?没打牢地基就建筑楼房,怎么能够避免墙倒屋歪?没做好充分准备就上考场,怎么能够取得优异成绩?因此,只有做好充分的准备,才能扫除道路中的障碍,加速前进的步伐。
准备是成功的缔造者。邰丽华做好了充分的准备,踏上舞台,用心编织舞蹈,用手传递温情。准备,打破了无声世界的寂静,创造了一位舞蹈天使。杨利伟做好了充分的准备,踏上神舟飞船,实现了亿万人民的飞天梦,加速了中国航天的进程,引起世界震烁。准备,创造了这位航天英雄。刘翔,做好了充分准备,走向国际比赛,打破世界纪录,充分的准备创造了这位中国飞人。
有了准备,才能坚守前进的方向,坚实路上的脚步,坚定地走向成功之峰。为了明日曙光的照耀,赶紧做好今日的准备。成功,永远属于有准备的头脑。
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