生活在都市中的你,可曾注意过傍晚西边的一抹夕阳?那余晖,照亮了半边天,照亮了喧嚣的城市,也照亮了巍巍长城。入秋,我随表妹一行人来到慕田峪长城脚下,准备“勇攀长城做好汉”?登上长城,放眼望去,夏意残存,秋味渐浓,虽没有“万山红遍,层林尽染”的感觉,但也已有一种霜草萋萋、秋虫切切的景象。抬头向西边瞭望,一轮红日正徐徐落下,圆圆的,红彤彤的。在它的背后,天呈现出七种颜色,向远方延伸,在天与林的尽头交融,消失。顺着长城往北走,万绿丛巾隐隐约约有着“二月花”,在夕阳的映照下显得格外鲜红、格外醒目,好像周围的绿树只为等待它的降临而牛。一丝微风拂过脸颊,送来秋的气息。万物开始泛黄泛红,准备迎接那银装素裹的考验,待到冰雪融化后,一株株新鲜的生命义将萌发出来,冉为大地披上新装。走上烽火台,向远处眺望,看到几处农田里还有人在辛勤地忙碌。收获的喜悦向四周洋溢着,
飘荡在夕阳的余晖里。义停留了许久,见天色又暗了一些,我们开始下山了。在下山的路上,看到一棵棵松树挺拔地矗立在那里,年复一年地仰望着长城,仰望着长城落日。偶然抬头,忽见树顶上,一只肥硕的松树拖着它那蓬松的大尾巴在树枝间来回地跳跃,似乎在忙着准备它过冬的食物,为再见到那生机勃勃的春天储蓄着生的力量。树干上,一只小虫正在作蛹,它也在为变成美丽的蝴蝶,为了去点缀那经冬之后的绚丽春天而努力着。行进到半山腰时,我回头凝望那夕阳映照下与天色相辉映的长城,是那么的巍峨壮丽。我忍不住举起手中的相机,“咔嚓”一声将这如诗如画的长城与落日留在了我的相机内,留存了我的脑海里。长城的落日是美丽的,长城的落日也是悲壮的。
Dear Admission Committee:
Miss Pan Bei requested a letter of recommendation from me to support her application for graduate program at your university. As her teacher, I am pleased to comply with her request.
I first got to know Miss Pan when she enrolled at university and I was the assistant director of her class at that time. Being a professor for several years, I noticed that due to the lack of self-learning ability, it is really challenging for students, even those performing excellent in senior school, to keep up with the college speed. However, as a diligent girl without any solid background in Computer Science before college, she adapted quickly to the especially competitive environment in our department. At the end of the first year, she earned the 5th rank in her class, while ranking 1st among the girls. I was fairly impressed by her self-learning technique and exceptional efforts. Hence, I believe, goal-oriented, not afraid of inchoateness and with persistence, she has the quality to make achievements.
What distinguished her among her classmates, I think, was that she went far beyond acquiring excellent scores in the exams and instead got her range of knowledge enlarged. In spring, 2006, Miss Pan took the course I taught named Algebraic Structures and Combinatorial Mathematics. This inquisitive and assiduous young woman was sometimes the last to leave after my class, raising novel questions related to the subject. I found that she understood the knowledge in depth and detail. Furthermore, I still remember during the spring vocation in May, due to the break-down of my mail box, I missed her mails to discussing some questions. But the following week during the course time, she asked me directly. Her zeal for knowledge and the spirit to explore answers really leave me a deep impression. Finally, she was among the few students who got almost full marks in every test in class which showed her exceeding grasp of every chapter. Thus, I gave her 98/100 for the excellent performance in my course.
In summary, I have every reason to believe that Miss. Pan will make outstanding performance at your university as a graduate. I would appreciate greatly if you give her a favorable consideration. Please feel free to contact me directly if more assistance is needed. Faithfully yours,
Wanling Qu, Professor
Department of Computer Science and technology Peking University
Email: qwku.edu.cn
November **, ****
To Whom It May Concern:
This is to confirm that Mr. Li Dashui has worked as a full-time system analyst in the NY University since Jun 1994(or This letter is to verify that Mr. Li Dashui worked as an chemist from July 1993 to Sept. 1994. Mr. Lis main duties and responsibilities are as follows:
Design, develop and install various computer hardware, software and network systems for banks.
Determine and analyze the requirements of each system project into related componets solved through the application of computer technology.
Write specifications for computer programs, and test and implement programs for network systems and control systems.
Supervise computer programmers and other system analysts for paticular system projects.
Mr. Li has mainly taken part in the following projects:
The first engineering design of city general business computer network system.
Upgrading banks system for IBM AS/400 E45 to IBM AS/400 320, IBM AS/400 530.
The design development and test of city general business computer network system.
The design and development network and database systems for the Golden Credit Card Project.
Mr. Li is well experienced with IBM AS/400 system analysis, TCP/IP protocol, SNA protocol and LAN; proficient in RPGIII, VB, C/C++ and DB2, and skilled in UNIX, Informix, Client/Server etc.
Mr. Li is a hard-working and talented analyst, and is highly respected member in our company. If you need further information, please feel free to contact me. Sincerely yours, Singature, Zhang Jianguo
Senior Engineer and Technical Manage Company Name, Address, Tex Fax
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ……
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ……
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……
6) Never in our history has the idea that …… been so popular.
7) Faced with ……, quite a few people argue that ……
8) According to a recent survey, ……
9) With the rapid development of ……,
10 When it comes to…, (当说到…
二、列举观点
I.Some people think/believe that…,
Other argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true
1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages.
2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.
3.Compared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. ,
4.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages.
5....has many advantages.For example,…
6. However,just as every coin has two sides,…has it’s disadvantages.
II…play(san important role/part in……
1.Computers play an important role in science and technology.
2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life.
3.Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies.
4.Education plays an important part in developing our mind.
5.Addiction to alcohol and drugs plays a role in homelessness.
6.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.
7.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication.But now,telephone,email,and fax have taken their place.
III.With the development of…
1.With the development of our economy,many Chinese families can afford a car.
2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious.
3.With the rapid development of Science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home.
4.With the current social and technological developments,employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed.
5.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious.
6.With more and more women entering the society,people's attitude towards women is changing.
7.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up, an increasing number of (a growing number of,a significant number of
families can afford a car.
三、陈述自己观点
There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements,but…
四、批驳
1)It is true that ……, but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ……, but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that……
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ……
7) Too much stress placed on …… may lead to ……
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ……
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ……
10) No one can deny the fact that ……
11) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
12) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ……
13) Recent studies indicate that ……
14) There is sufficient evidence to show that ……
15) According to statistics proved by ……, it can be seen that ……
五、结尾句型 :
英语议论文多以简要总结全文或对所讨沦的问题提出解决办法来结尾。总结全文时除常用到in one/a word,generally speaking,to conclude等外,没有固定模式。提出解决办法时却常使用下一句型:
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ……
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ……
3). We should take measures to control the rapidly increasing world population.
4). We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.
5). The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse.
6). Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.
7) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ……
8) In conclusion, it is imperative that ……
9) There is no easy method, but ……might be of some help.
10) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ……
11) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
12) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
13) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ……
14) Taking all these into account, we ……
15) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear……
六、其他句型
I、There be结构
There+be+主语+(修饰成分,表示客观存在的'人或事物。 There must be a lot of fuel in the tank.
There remains nothing more to be done.
There is no point in talking about it again.
There is something you don't know.
There is not enough time to do the work. .
II、名词化结构
名词化结构用以表明抽象思维的逻辑性和概念化,从而使语体更加正式、更加具有书面语风格。
1.由of连接主谓关系
That the earth revolves around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.
名词化:The revolution of the earth around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.
2.由0f连接动宾关系
One of the most important natural phenomena is that energy is transmitted from one point to another in waves.
名词化:One of the most important natural phenomena is the transmission of energy from one point to another in waves.
3.用of连接含有by的短语,把简单句转换成名词短语
Beijing time, in the early morning of August 5th, Sun Yang defend title successfully with the score of 14 points 41 seconds 15 in 2013 swimming world championships men's 1500 meter freestyle finals. This is the third gold medal in this tournament for Sun Yang as well as the fifth goal of China’s swimming, which is slower 10 second 13 than the result of the London Olympic Games when Sun Yang achieves the champion. Sun Yang uses the score of his fifth goal in his career life to tie with the medal record that Luo Xuejuan keeps in the Chinese swimmer World Championship. He also becomes the person after Hackett in the 2005 Montreal World Championships and a single tournament winning the gold medal of “the king of long distance " in men’s 400, 800 and 1500 meter freestyle.
北京时间8月5日凌晨,2013年游泳世锦赛男子1500米自由泳决赛,孙杨以14分41秒15的成绩赢得金牌成功卫冕,这是孙杨本届赛事第三枚金牌,也是中国泳军收获的第五金,这一成绩比伦敦奥运会夺冠时慢了10秒13。 孙杨也以生涯五枚金牌的成绩,追平罗雪娟保持的中国游泳选手世锦赛夺金纪录,并且成为继哈克特在2005年蒙特利尔世锦赛后,又一位单届赛事包揽男子400、800和1500米自由泳金牌的“中长距离之王”!
长城是中华文明的瑰宝,是世界文化遗产之一,也是与我国的“国山”泰山、埃及金字塔齐名的建筑,还是人类的奇迹。在遥远的两千多年前,是劳动人民以血肉之躯修筑了万里长城。长城是中国古代人民智慧的结晶,更是中华民族的象征。春秋战国时期,各国诸侯为了防御别国入侵,修筑烽火台,并用城墙连接起来,形成了最早的长城。以后历代君王几乎都加固增修长城。它因长达几万里,故又称作“万里长城”。据记载,秦始皇使用了近百万劳动力修筑长城,占全国总人口的二十分之一。
当时没有任何机械,全部劳动都由人力完成,工作环境又是崇山峻岭、峭壁深壑,十分艰难。长城东起山海关,西至甘肃嘉峪关,东至鸭绿江。从东向西行经10个省区市。长城的总长度为8851800米,其中人工墙体长度为6254239.662米,堑壕和天然形成长度为2594234.2265米。长城始建于春秋战国时期,历史达2000多年,总长度达532万米以上。我们今天所指的万里长城多指明代修建的长城,它西起中国西部甘肃省的嘉峪关,东到中国东北辽宁省的鸭绿江边,长635万米。它像一条矫健的巨龙,越峻岭,经绝壁,穿草原,跨沙漠,起伏在崇山峻岭之巅,黄河彼岸和渤海之滨。古今中外,凡到过长城的人无不惊叹它的磅礴气势、宏伟规模和艰巨工程。长城是一座稀世珍宝,也是艺术非凡的文物古迹,它象征着中华民族坚不可摧永存于世的伟大意志和力量,是中华民族的骄傲,也是整个世界的骄傲。
***有一句诗句:不到长城非好汉。今天,我终于可以当一回“好汉”,登上万里长城了,我的心情显得格外激动。
来到万里长城“脚下”一阵阵微风向我们吹来,不时传来鸟儿动听的歌声。四面八方都是人山人海,许多外国人也来这里参观,真是热闹非凡!
刚开始登上万里长城,路比较宽,人比较多。我发现长城的梯级很高,长城附近的山坡上长满了盛开的花朵和树苗,还有许许多多的鸟儿在翩翩起舞。继续往前走,我们越走越高了,路也越走越窄人也越来越少了,但是风景却越来越美了。极目远眺,一座又一座的青山蜿蜒起伏,连绵不断。仿佛一条卧龙躺在山上休息。听导游说,中国的万里长城是在月球上往地球看,唯一能看到的建筑物,因为它横跨几省,跨度非常大。长城是中国的象征它是在秦始皇在生时建的,当时秦始皇为了建好长城,强拉壮丁,那时候有许多人为了建长城,牺牲了生命。所以自古就有“孟姜女哭长城”的故事。听说这个故事是因为一个有名叫孟姜女的女人,她的丈夫被强拉去修建长城,为了去找丈夫,孟姜女不惜爬山涉水来到长城下,最后她知道丈夫已经死了,在长城上哭了七天七夜,最后成了一块化石。
我一边走一边想:现在我们爬上长城已经觉得这么辛苦了,真不知道古代的劳动人民是怎样在山上修建出一座这么宏伟的建筑。也许他们是凭着坚持的信念,一直坚持到最后的吧!只要坚持,就能建好长城;只要坚持,就能克服所有困难;只要坚持,就能看到希望。古代劳动人民们就是这样的坚强,就是这样的努力,最终把我们举世无双的万里长城修建好的。
晚上,万里长城上照着五彩缤纷的灯光,显得格外美丽,它就像一条五颜六色的丝带。啊!万里长城是我们中国的象征,他是我们中国古代老代劳动人民的心血结晶,所以我们要好好爱护长城,让这个宏伟的建筑可以永远留在中国,留在人们心中!
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