初中英语作文怎么批注【一】
打开尘封的记忆，首先浮现在眼前的就是那个“温暖”的冬天，我和她手牵手，在冬日底下……
第一次见到她，高个子，微胖，扎着马尾辫，身穿一件长袖T恤和一条休闲牛仔，面无表情，看起酷酷的样子。后来不知怎么回事，迷迷糊糊的，我们成为了好朋友。她乐观开朗，大大咧咧。而我极其内向，沉默寡言。我们性格迥异，最后却成为了知己，到现在我也弄不清原因。她很勤劳、很勇敢、很善良、很大方、很执着……当然，她也很冲动、很暴躁、很贪玩、很迷糊……
那天，刺骨的寒风无情地撕扯着干枯的树枝，街上的行人寥寥无几，地上堆积的洁白的雪还未融化，一片银装素裹……在公园里，有两个女孩，穿着厚厚的棉袄，围着围巾，戴着帽子，手牵着手，另一只手里拿着热气腾腾的包子，边吃边一起说笑。时而两人开怀大笑；时而两人伤感哭泣；时而手牵手散着步；时而背靠背唱着歌……就这样，两个女孩踩着雪，一步一个脚印，伴随着“嘎吱嘎吱的声音，绕着公园走了一圈又一圈……天气虽冷，心却温暖……
那段日子，纯真，美好，简单，浪漫。那时，我们在一起看“人狗奇缘”，哭的稀里哗啦，一塌糊涂；那时，每天我几乎都会吃到雪糕，而那却不是我掏的钱；那时，我们偶尔会吵吵小架，但几分钟后又迅速和好；那时，我们一起聊天聊到深夜，结果第二天上学迟到；那时她不好意思向一高年级男生问题，结果还是我去问了再告诉她；那时，我被欺负了，她会替我打抱不平；那时，我们一起为考试而拼搏；那时，我们手牵手，在冬日底下……
毕业后，我们各奔东西，有了新的学习和生活。我们依然保持着联系。那段日子，我永远也不会忘记，我很想再和她在一起学习，于是我们约定好，将来要考进同一所高中，这个约定使我更加努力的拼搏。我期待着，我们将在一起度过我们美好的青春年华。
又是一个冬天，有谁愿意与我手牵手，在冬日底下…
批注：这是一篇感情真挚的叙事散文，作者着重描写了与同学的学习往事，语言朴实流畅，故事饱满圆润，人物形象突出。文章中运用了排比的修辞手法，增强了语气。全文结构安排合理，首尾呼应，有极强的回读意味。
初中英语作文怎么批注【二】
In haimen there is a park. it’s a big and beautiful park. it has two gates. they are the north gate and the west gate. many people park their bikes in front of the gates.
There is a shop at the north gate. when you go into the park through the north gate, you will find a large square on your right and you will see lots of trees and flowers around you. in the west of the park, there is a playground.
Sometimes some children fly kites on it and some people sit on the grass and chat. in the middle of the park, there is a lake. there are many boats on it. there is a hill in the east of the park.
The park is very beautiful. i love it very much. will you come to visit it some day?
初中英语作文怎么批注【三】
Green grasses，blue lakes and beautiful mountains are waiting for you!Welcome to colorful nature pare!
There is a clean river. There are some colorful flowers. There is a beautiful mountain near the nature park. The air is fresh. The sky is blue. The clouds are white. The tree is green. The bridge is tall. The grass is green. I can run on the grass. There is a path near the lake. There are many fish in the lake. There is a forest in the nature park. There are many trees on the mountains. There are many flowers near the path.
Look! There are some birds in the sky. One, two, three…… oh! So many!
初中英语作文怎么批注【四】
I tried my best to calm down for a long time. Then I went to the platform to begin my prepared speech.
I felt my brain was blank when I was having my speech.
Before the election, I was confident for this position, but I still so nervous when I was in the platform. Thanks for preparing in advance; otherwise, I must be embarrassed. But the result was what I want. It’s a happy thing.
今天，我们班竞选班长了。`我成为了新的'班长。我很高兴，不过我现在仍然很紧张。竞选开始的时候，我好紧张，我都可以听到我的心怦怦跳了。我努力了很长一段时间才平静下来。然后我才走向讲台开始我已经准备好的演讲。在演讲的时候，我觉得我的大脑一片空白。在竞选之前，我对这一职位是很有信心，但当我站在讲台上时还是很紧张。幸好提前准备了；否则，我肯定很难堪。不过结果却是我想要的。这是一件值得开心的事
初中英语作文怎么批注【五】
We take out our kites, mine are butterfly, my friends are birds, all are so funny. I start to let my kite fly, but it could not, so I run faster and faster, then my kite flies, I go let go it gradually. A few minutes later, my friends’ kites are also flying.
Seeing our kites flying, I feel so free. Today, I have a great time.
现在我已经放寒假了，我很开心，可以和朋友们玩。朋友们和我约定风来了，我们就去公园放风筝。今天风终于来了，早饭过后，我和朋友们去公园。我们拿出自己的'风筝，我的是蝴蝶样，朋友的是鸟的样子，都很有趣。我开始让风筝飞，但是飞不起来，因此我跑得越来越快，风筝终于飞起来了，我慢慢放飞。不一会儿，朋友们的风筝也飞起来了。看到我们的风筝飞着，我觉得很自由。今天，我玩得很开心。
初中英语作文怎么批注【六】
Last autumn we took a trip to Qianshan by bus. It is about thirty miles from the city. We planned to put up in a hotel there in order to watch the sun rise the next morning.
As soon as we got there, we began to climb up the mountains. How great the sight is! We felt as if we had entered amother world full of beauty, peaeefulness and loveliness. There are hundreds of mountains, one after another. there are magnificent cliffs, one above another. We climbed up vigorously and breathed the fresh air greedily. As the sun was going down, we descended to a little hotel at the foot of the hill, where we had a big dinner, and then went to bed early so as to regain the energy ior the expedition next morning.
Before daybreak, we reached the peak of the highest mountain after a hard groping and climbing in the dark. Unaware of the cold wind, we stood motionlessly, with our eyes fixing at the hr end of the east. Suddenly thin ravs of red hue spread across the sky. As the redness deepened, some mysterious clouds moved across thc sky, dividing heaven from the earth. Just at this moment, up from the brightening far east rose the sun. It was so red and yet so tender that we could gaze at it with naked eyes. and a slight applause from us. the amazed spectators, rang through the peak. Up, up it rose, adding to itself strength and glory at every step. It dazzled with vigour, driving away darkness, cold, and misery from the earth, and bring light, warmth, and happiness to men.
We were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature. We jumped and shouted like innocent children and we bathed in the first rays of the sun with the peak till it was time for our return.
千山秋游
去年秋天我们乘公共汽车去千山游玩了一次。它距城市大约三十英里。为了第二天早晨看日出，我们计划住在那儿的旅馆里。
我们一到那里就开始爬山。那里的景色太美了!我们感到好像进入了另一个世界，一个充满美丽、和平和可爱的世界。那里有数百座山峰鳞次栉比：有壮观的悬崖层出不穷。我们精力充沛地向上攀登，贪婪地呼吸着新鲜空气。当太阳下落时，我们来到山下的一家小旅店，在那里美美地吃了一顿晚饭，然后早早地上床睡觉，以便恢复精力第二天早晨远征。
天亮前，我们经过在黑暗中艰难地摸索和爬行到达了最高的山峰。我们一动不动地站在那里，双眼凝视着远处的`东方，连寒风也没觉察到。突然间，薄薄的红光在天空中散开，随着红色加深，一些神奇的云朵在天空四散，把天地分开。正在这时，太阳从远处东方的光亮处升起。它是那样红，然而又那么娇嫩以致我们可以用肉眼来观察它。从我们吃惊的观赏者中发出的一阵轻微的欢呼划过山峰，太阳升得越来越高了，每升一步都给它本身增加了力量和光辉。它炫耀着威力，驱走了黑暗、寒冷和大地的苦难，并给人们带来光明、温暖和幸福。
这一奇观和大自然的伟大使我们完全惊愕了。我们像天真的孩子一样跳着、喊着，和山峰一起沐浴在太阳的晨曦中，流连忘返。
