我的家英语作文五年级【一】
??的弟弟-五年级你们知道吗?我的弟弟是怎样的人?你们看了我的介绍一定会知道的。
我的弟弟长得像瓜子的脸，爸爸说他是“帅哥的标准脸。头发乌黑光亮，一双眼睛又黑又圆，扁扁的鼻子，像狗一样什么都能闻到。
他是一个尊老爱幼的孩子，记得有一次我和弟弟去玩，看见一个盲人阿姨过不了马路，弟弟看见后赶紧过去帮忙人阿姨扶到马路对面，盲人阿姨非常感动，说：“谢谢你，我虽然看不见，但我想问你叫什么名字。弟弟说：“阿姨，好人不留名，你就叫我红领巾吧。“真有礼貌啊。盲人阿姨夸到，我也对弟弟说：“你真棒。我真佩服他呀!
他也非常的\'调皮。有一次，我刚回到家，他就立刻来到我的旁边，说：“姐姐，陪我一起玩吧!我叹了一口气，说：“不行，我已经很累了。他蹲下身子，抱住我的腿说：“姐姐，你不陪我玩，我就一直抱着你。我真是没有办法了，只好答应了，他却蹦得一跳三尺高。我和她玩的是“孙悟空，我当的是“妖怪，他当的是“孙悟空，他拿着他的“金箍棒，我拿着我的“大刀，他便向我说：“妖精，快把我师傅放出来!我说：“没门，我还要等着吃他的肉呢!她听完我的话，他便直接拿着一“金箍棒向我敲来，我也不甘示弱，也向他发起攻击，经过一系的回合，我和他打了几百大战，他忽然一个金箍棒打中我的腰，我便倒了下来，他看见后，欣喜若狂。我说：“既然你赢了，那我就可以歇息了吧!他说：“嗯，好的，不过下次我还要玩，这个游戏太好玩了，我太开心了!唉，真是的!
他也非常爱学习。有一次我叫他出去玩，他却说：“我的功课还没有做完，你先去玩吧。过了一两个小时，我去看看他把功课做完了没有，却看见他在在看书，我说：“你完成作业了吗?他说：“完成了。“那不去玩。我生气地说。他说：“对不起，我忘了。听了他的话，我想到了一个四字词语“废寝忘食。
这就是我的弟弟，你们想跟他做朋友吗?
我的家英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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