新疆乌鲁木齐英语中考作文【一】
今日，我有幸和同事们再次一起观看了献礼建党90周年的“本土”电影——《乌鲁木齐的.天空》。
该片以现实与回忆相互穿插的艺术手法，讲述了上世纪60年代，汉、维、哈、回、蒙古等多个民族的兄弟姐妹住进乌鲁木齐甜水巷1号大院后共同生活，团结友爱的感人故事，展现了半个世纪中乌鲁木齐城市面貌发生的巨大变化，折射出时代的进步和民族关系的融洽，描绘了一幅新疆民族大团结的和谐画卷。从某种意义上说，《乌鲁木齐的天空》是新疆民族大团结的缩影，是体现新疆社会和谐的经典力作。
我认为《乌鲁木齐的天空》这部影片有很多看点。
一、语言特色突出。此片对话以汉、维语言为主，又夹杂着回、哈、蒙古等语言特点，平实中透着华美，朴素中蕴含风趣。如“羊烈士”的故事，“不下奶”的述说，“裸体画”的评论等等，让人忍俊不禁。影片全程采用字幕(中、英的方式，也给观众听懂对白，理解剧情提供了保障。
二、民族特色分明。剧中除了语言之外，还在服装、饮食、文化、建筑、信仰、人物性格等方面体现了民族特色，如维吾尔族男子的小胡子，回族男子的小白帽，哈萨克族男子的小毡帽均显示出各个民族的特点;维族人爱吃馕，穆斯林吃活羊，蒙古人爱喝酒等饮食文化在片中得到了展现，还有剧中的清真寺等建筑风格也体现了穆斯林文化。
三、本土文化明显。据了解，影片中除了两位领衔主演之外，其余演员都是新疆本土演员，导演和编剧均是新疆人。剧中的取景也主要是在乌鲁木齐。因此，剧中的人物刻画和剧情的演绎始终弥漫着新疆的本土气息，让人看了感到真实、自然、纯朴、有趣。
四、故事感人。这是最大的看点，剧中如“刘沛勇救落井儿童”，“画家卖表为母婴买营养品”，“茹仙古丽寒冬打奶子摔倒在地”，“哈萨克人吾奴别克命令小羊跳崖自尽”，“蒙古人巴图尔通过人情买古巴糖”，“贾如云先结婚后恋爱”等几个小故事把民族团结亲如一家的氛围演绎得淋漓尽致。
新疆乌鲁木齐英语中考作文【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
新疆乌鲁木齐英语中考作文【三】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
新疆乌鲁木齐英语中考作文【四】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
