五年级英语作文交通安全建议【一】
春风轻轻的吹，唤醒了沉睡的大地，万物复苏，我建议的家去农村的田野去看一看，一定会有许多收获，因为我经常去乡下的姥姥家去走亲戚。
迎着春风，我们全班同学乘坐旅游客车向美丽的乡村--移风驶去，一进村就感受到了大自然的气息，清新而舒畅，没有一点污染瑕疵。走在路上，瞧，道路两旁的垂柳已经换上了嫩绿的新装，轻风拂过;无数的柳条像仙女扭动的腰肢一样，随风飘动;又想用绿色四线织成的绿丝带，美丽极了。农村小院里，桃花，杏花，梨花，还有一朵朵苹果花，一簇簇都露出了笑脸。他们争奇斗艳，竞相开放，构成了百花盛开的春天。就连那个不起眼的小草也不甘示弱，悄悄地从地探出了绿油油的小脑袋，在向我们微笑。我们坐在草地上，就如同坐在一张地毯上一般舒服。放眼望去，山坡上一片绿色。可爱的小燕子也从遥远的南方飞来。他们鸣叫着，飞舞着欢迎春天的到来。
我们步漫游，尽情享受这美好的春光，不觉得心阔旷怡，好行进入仙境一般。
我想最近农村一定更美丽了。因此我在此希望大家采纳我的意见:到田野里，麦田边去看一看，乡村生活因为自由自在，无拘无束，多姿多彩而让人向往，令人沉醉不愿归。
五年级英语作文交通安全建议【二】
春姑娘又不知不觉的来到了我们身边，他不光给我们送来了绿草，红花，还唤醒了许许多多动物，春姑娘就曾在植物园里留下了她的踪迹。我建议同学们去植物园游览一下，体验一下大自然里的自然风光。
植物园一进门就有一个喂鸽子的地方，小鸽子白白的，胖胖的，可爱极了，一粒粒小黄玉米就是它们的美餐。人们蜂拥而至的挤上前，想要与这白白胖胖的小鸽子一起嬉戏玩耍，它们也不惊慌，有时瞪眼看着你，有时围着你团团转，还有时落在你手上，好像在说 “我还要玉米，我还要 玉米。”我也不例外，我相信你也会感兴趣的。
再往里走，一个个好玩的游乐设施令人眼花嘹乱，我给大家介绍一个惊险刺激的游乐设施，那就是急速滑车，这个游戏可是我每次都要玩的哦!刚开始上坡时速度非常慢，不过你可要做好心里准备，一上完上坡，赛车梦就会实现，因为赛车般的速度让你连眨眼的机会都没有，当你想体验一下这种速度时，滑车已经到终点了。
植物园里还有很多很多刺激好玩的游乐设施，你肯定想玩个痛快了吧!我就节约时间，不多说了，你们还是去植物园亲身体验一下吧!
五年级英语作文交通安全建议【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文交通安全建议【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
