英语作文分析优势与不足【一】
如果前后两个层次的内容都较复杂，层次之间的转折又很大，一般要用过渡段把它们衔接起来。过渡段一般比较短小，大多是一句话或一个句群。以2013年高考江苏卷优秀《莫惊扰，让生命安宁》片段为例：
人们点燃蜡烛，怀着对自然、对生命的虔诚放轻脚步，唯恐惊扰蝴蝶，却实则造成对这些美丽精灵的惊吓。
殊不知，我们一些看似微小的举动，影响了生命的安宁，惊扰了生命的平静。不打扰，不涉足，让生命处于其最自然的环境，才是对生命最大的尊重。
尊重生命，莫要惊扰，万事万物都有其舒心的环境。星野道夫用摄像机捕捉自然最灵动的'生命大师对自然有最深的爱，对生命有最深刻的理解，所以不惊扰，不忍心破坏那固有的安宁。
相比当下，许多野生动物园以保护动物的之名将其圈养，自然保护区的熊猫被置于游客的闪光灯下，看似是保护，其实是对这些生物的环境、安宁的破坏。
我们总怀着一颗善心，去做一些实际上破坏生命安宁的事，看似微不足道、不会有影响，有时却是对生命最深的伤害。
对自然如此，对人类社会也是如此。
我想起柴静的《看见》
文章开篇以材料起笔，洞见其精神实质;紧接着，用短语殊不知轻轻一点，实现了文意由个体材料向生命体认的转变，提出让生命处于其最自然的环境，才是对生命最大的尊重的观点;尊重生命，莫要惊扰，万事万物都有其舒心的环境，用句过渡，引出了星野道夫从不惊扰自然生灵的敬畏之心，从正面论述文章中心;再用相比当下的短语过渡，将内容从反面联系生活现实;在正反对比的思考中，深刻地表达了尊重生命，给生命以安宁，让万物得和谐的思想。
英语作文分析优势与不足【二】
Sometimes I dream about life in the future. What will it be?
Perhaps some people will go to the moon for a holiday or even live on the moon,and some scientists will build cities under the sea to make people live there. We can have a medical examination or do some shopping without leaving our homes,which makes the life more convenient. Maybe we will also do some shopping and work at home.
And I'm sure there'll be more educational programmes on the radio or TV or by the Intemet or videophones,so perhaps some children won't need to go to school every day. They'll study at home.
In the future,all electric equipment at home is under the con-trol of computers. People can learn about the situation of the house by working on the computer at the office. No people like doing housework. Maybe each family will have a robot. Every day we can tell the robot what to do-shopping,housework and so on. believe the dream will come true some day.
英语作文分析优势与不足【三】
有时为了衔接上下文内容，可用一两句话放在段落的开头或结尾来承上启下。英语作文分析优势与不足【四】
Therearesomecherriesinthebasket.(一般疑问句，否定回答划线部分提问Kittylikesthebluedress.(用thepinkdress改为选择疑问句Don`tplaywithfires.(换一种说法
Joelikesreading.Dannylikesreadingtoo.(把两句连成一句Pleaseeatsomecakesandbiscuits.(改为否定句划线部分提问Thereissomewaterintheglass.(划线部分提问划线部分提问Whatdayistoday?
What`sthedatetoday?
Whatdoyouusuallydoafterdinner?
Whichpearsdoyouwant,thegreenonesortheyellownoes?Whichwesternholidaydoyoulikebest?Whenisit?
WhatdoyoudoattheLanternFestival?
5B2
Thosebooksareours.(同义句划线部分提问划线部分提问
ThosecrayonsareDanny`s.(.(用Alice改为选择疑问句Arethesetheirschoolbags?(单数句划线部分提问
Theyridetheirbicyclestothepark.(用May改写
Thecocooniswhite.(用browng改为选择问句划线部分提问Heisfouryearsold.(改为一般过去时
Iwasathomeyesterdayevening.(改为一般疑问句
Thecaterpillarslikeeatingleaves.(改为单数句划线部分提问划线部分提问
WhatdoyoueatattheMid-autumnFestival?(根据实际情况回答
英语作文分析优势与不足【五】
考辅P42
1.IgaveTomthebook.／／
2.Heboughthismothersomeflowers.／／
3.Thebridgewasbuiltbyworkerslastyear.／／
4.Wehavetofinishtheworktoday.／／5.Hewilldohishomeworktomorrow.／／
6.Wecleantheroomseveryday.／／7.Thewriterspent3yearsonthebook.／／
8.Itisabookwithalotofbeautifulpictures.／／
9.Thebooksoldverywellduringthefirstweek.／／firstweek.
10.Marywastheonlyoneintheoffice.／／
11.Shefinishedherworkat10o’clock.／／Shedidn’12.Shehadtotakeataxihomebecauseitwastoolate.
13.LizaandMikearrivedattheGreatWallintwohours.
14.Theywerehappytogettothetop.／／
15.TheyenjoyedthemselvesontheGreatWall.／／
16.ThepostmansentSusanandTommyapaperbox.
17.Theyopeneditandfoundapresentfromtheirfriend.
18.Theybothlikedthepresentandfeltveryhappy.
19.Alicedidn’tfeelwelltoday,soshewenttothehospital.
20.Thedoctoraskedhersomequestions.／／
21.Thedoctordidn’tgiveheranymedicineintheend.
（全真１）
1.ThecapitalAirporthasbeeninusefor20years.／／
2.ThecapitalAirportisthelargestoneinChina.／／
3.Ihavenevertakenaplane.MyfriendLiPing,either.／／
（全真２）
1.Fathergave$20formetobuysomebooks.／／
2.IwasexcitedwhenIsawsomanygoodbooksinthebookstore.
3.ButsomebookswouldcostmorethanIhave.／／
ButIdidn’／／（全真3）
1.ManyChinesefriendswenttotheparty.2.Tonywasgivenalotofpresentsbyhisfriends.／／Tony’
3.SeeinghisChineseteacheratthepartymadeTonyveryhappy.／／（全真4）
1.Iwanttoeatsomething.／／2.Therefrigeratorisempty.／／3.Bobspentfifteenyuanonthehamburger.／／／（全真5）
1.Mr.Wangdoesn’tworkinthatfactoryanylonger.／／
2.Mr.Wanglefthomeearlierinordertocatchthebus.3.Mr.Wangfindsitnoteasytogetalongwiththatyoungguy.／／（专家1）
1.Manypeoplewentshoppingyesterday.
2.Janespent4hourstobuyNewyeargifts.／／
3.Shewassotiredthatshecouldn’twalkanylonger.／／
（专家2）
1.Myfriendssaidtome,“Areyoufree?”
2.Shewantedmetogoshoppingwithher.
3.Shethinksitapleasuretogoshoppingwithafriend.
