从小到大,每个人总有做事做错的时候,但只要分清对错、正确对待,就会感到一份快乐。我就是经历了一件这样的事情……
一天,数学老师走进教室严肃地对我们说:“今天。”这短短的一句话,让我感受到空气很紧张。因为每次考试我都考不好,害怕这次又考不出好成绩。正式考试了,我做着做着答题,同学贾天给我一张纸条让我帮他写题的答案,我刚写了几个数,老师就走过来“把纸条给我。”这时,我感觉到全班同学们都在看着我,似乎都在指责我,说我做的不对,有些同学在议论纷纷,“陈悦怎么做这样的事啊?”、“真是的,贾天让他写,他就写啊?”。我知道我做错了,不敢看老师。下课后,老师把我叫去批评了一番。我感到很后悔,决心下次一定改正。
几天后,又要考试了。我提醒自己不能再给他写答案了。果然不出我所料,他又一次递给我一张纸条。我没有理他,心想我不能再害他了。没想到他急切的又把纸条给了我,“快点!快点!我还等着做下面的题呢!”我摇摇头示意不给他写,他生气了,皱着眉头说:“你快点些,不写的话,我就跟你绝交!”,“不行!传纸条是不对的,我不能给你写。”,“你行!陈悦,我跟你真的绝交,我以后再也不理你了。”说完他就做下面的题了。想到他要跟我绝交,我有点儿心慌了,老师现在提倡要帮助同学。我帮他写吧,可想到给同学写答案是不对的,我还是没有给他写。交完答卷后,我感到心里很踏实,暗暗庆幸:这件事我做对了。
后来,一段时间他不理我了。但是我觉得我自己做对了,因为我不能“害”我的同学。从那以后,考试时再也没有出现过他让我写答案的情况了。经历了这件事以后,我感到自己“长大了”、“成熟了”,我相信他会理解我的。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
初三,这令人难忘的一年。在这一年中,我做了许多错事,但这件事我做对了!
我一个人走在无人的小巷,脑海中不断回想着这几次考试的成绩。在初三的数次考试中,我的成绩总是那么不如人意,这是我那颗曾经骄傲的心无法去面对了!面对老师和家长的期待,我不知道该如何答复。就在这个不知所措的十字路口,我不知道如何选择。向左走,那是一条阴暗的小道,但在小道的尽头,却是美丽的山水。向右走,那是一条宽阔的大道,但在大道的尽头,却是险峻的悬崖……
我站住脚步,犹豫了。不知哪边是对,哪边是错。“人生处处都面临选择”没错,但我该如何选择才是对的呢?
就在我犹豫不绝的时候,脑海中浮现出老师那严肃的表情,耳边响起老师的声音:“在我们人生道路中都会遇到许多挫折与困难。在这个时候,我们要勇往直前,绝对不能放弃,而且永不放弃!”
是啊!放弃是弱者的体现,放弃就代表着我初中三年的努力挥之一旦。对,我不会放弃,而且永不放弃!
“啊!”我大叫着向左奔去……
如今,初中三年的生活已经结束,我的中考成绩要算令人满意。
事实证明了,我的选择是对的。此后,每当我想起此事,总是轻轻一笑,并且自豪的说:“这件事我做对了!”
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
那天,天空中飘着几丝雨,使人感觉十分凉爽,我在街上走着,忽然看见前面有一名妇女,怀中抱着一个女孩,大概两三岁左右吧,她们的衣服破烂不堪,全身上下脏兮兮的,正用可怜的目光看着过往的行人们。那个怀中的小女孩又黑又瘦,嘴里啃着手指头,另一只手摸着肚子,我想她们应该有好几天没吃东西了吧。周围有许多围观的人,我也忍不住上前瞧瞧。这时,我动了侧影之心,摸了下面的口袋,还有今天早上妈妈给的10元钱,但是看其他的人还无所举动,我还是站在原地呆呆的看着。
但是,只听见那位妇女一直在祈求着说:“过往的好心的人们啊,救救我们吧,我们已经几天没有吃东西了,哪怕是1元也行啊,求求你们了!”我有看了看旁边那个可怜的小女孩,她那一双大大的眼睛里充满了安静,没有那个年龄间断应该享有的幸福和快乐,无忧无虑,反而多了几分成熟,不哭也不闹,就一直安静的在妈妈怀里静静的看着。这时,我上前走了几步,刚想把钱找出来,就听见身边一位漂亮的阿姨说道:“又不是没胳膊没腿的,凭什么乞讨啊,别给她,她干嘛不去找工作啊!”
周围的人听了这位阿姨的话,也开始议论了起来:“是呀,光会骗取别人的同情来赚钱,这种人有什么资格接受别人的钱呢!”“光会骗取小孩的钱,什么人啊!”这时,我把手掏了出来。
但是,我又大胆的把钱找了出来,并上前走了几步,把钱递给那位妇女,那位妇女只是感激,我便离开了。
这件事,我做对了!
一般的书都会有推荐序言,不同的人会来就这本书谈谈自己的看法,我们从这本书中看见了什么段位的人的序言,往往也反映了这本书是什么段位。
当然,这里也要考虑一下,有的人推荐书也可能因为某些原因而有溢美之辞,或者只是单纯站台,多读几本书就能看出来了。
之前遇见一本书,罗振宇站台推荐,结果风评不大好,这样一来以后都有点不敢直接选他推荐的书了。
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