考研英语一作文如何得高分【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
考研英语一作文如何得高分【二】
议论的对象选定以后，一些文章便侧重阐发理由。例如《安于途中》一文，作者感觉生命总是在途中，这就形象地告诉读者，与生俱来，人总是在靠近某个可知或未可知的终点。以此为境，作者在文中逻辑而且形象地诠释了哲理生活的理由：人活着不能只是为了刻意靠近终结的辉煌。人生的风景在于充实生命的过程；安于途中并不是碌碌无为，得过且过，而是要关注人生过程，品味生活，展示生命魅力；生命只有在途中才成其为生命，生命不只是为了抵达，主要是为了经历，具体的经历构成了生命的精彩。必须补充一笔的是，在诠释以上的为什么时。作者还精心营构了象中之象，使得相应的理由更加生动而且具体。例如，在阐发抵达并不那么重要，终点并不那么美好时，作者以花朵的终点是凋谢，道路的终点是绝境设喻，警策人们：生命的终点是死亡。这样的生花妙笔。全文俯拾即是。《安于途中》实在是一篇形象生动，义理隽永的绝佳美文。
考研英语一作文如何得高分【三】
①My own experience tells me that … ②In my opinion , we should attack more importance to … ③As for my own idea about … I believe … ④As far as I am concerned , I plan to … ⑤Personally , I prefer … ⑥In my view , both sides are paartly right in that … ⑦But for me , I would rather … ⑧My own point of view is that … ⑨In conclusion , I support the statement that … ⑩As regards me , I tend to choose …(5
考研英语一作文如何得高分【四】
有些议论文，诗意化的着眼点并非是什么。也非为什么，而是怎么办。李汉荣先生的《攀登我的南山》一文即为例证。作者认为，人群有时是那么令人窒息，让人沉闷，因为人群是***的集结，是***的洪流。于是，作者提出：在人群之外，我们还需要一种高度，一种空旷，一种虚静，去与天地对话，与万物对话，与永恒对话。为了产生伟大的灵魂、伟大的精神创造，作者进一步求索对策。首先，作者从反面否定了在单位、在沙发上制作的思想；接着，作者从正面呼告，需要登高，需要望远，需要面对整个天空作一次灵魂的深呼吸，需要从精神的高处带回一些白云，擦拭琐碎而陈旧的生活，擦拭缺少光泽的内心。在如此形象地议论之后，作者将诗意化的怎么办推向极致和高潮：我正在心中攀登我的南山。目光和灵魂正渐渐变得清澈、宽广，绿色越来越多。白云越来越多，我正在靠近伟大的天空毋庸赘言，李汉荣先生的这篇散文诗意业已飞扬。
从特定的角度讲，诗意的议论文必然包含丰厚的意境。在采点之后，设境(设置意境至关紧要，以下努力不可或缺。
考研英语一作文如何得高分【五】
①Thank you for your letter of … ②It is a pleasure for me invite you on behalf of … to accept … ③Thanks so much for your letter , which arrived … ④I am writing to you with reference to … ⑤I am writing to you in connection with … ⑥I would be grateful if you could / would … ⑦I would like to know some information on … ⑧It will be appreciated if you can / could … ⑨I would also like to know if you can / could … ⑩I look forward to hearing from you .考研英语一作文如何得高分【六】
In recent days, we have to face I problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ________(说明A的现状.Second, ________(举例进一步说明现状 Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ________(解决方法一. For another ________(解决方法二. Finally, ________(解决方法三.
Personally, I believe that ________(我的解决方法. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(带来的'好处.
考研英语一作文如何得高分【七】
真是的，就算一定得搭野鸡车，也应该睁大眼睛啊，居然司机一说是回头车我就上了，说载不载都无所谓，我就让他开。为什么我当时没有考虑到旅途的安全问题呢？报纸上几乎天天有计程车司机在荒郊野外劫财劫色，甚至还要伤人的报道，为什么我这么大意？
果然，车子刚过中坜吧，我就感到异样了。就如同我前面所说，司机一再从后视镜瞅我，瞅得我心底发毛。当然，我身上的钱不多，又是一个大男生，实在不必害怕。不过，如果他真的心怀恶意，如果他嫌钱太少不满意，无论如何，还是我吃亏。我悄悄打量他的体型，没有我高，但是比我结实多了。虽然单打独斗，我未必就会输他，可是他不可能没带东西，而且我根本不想打。
就在这时候，我看到他的右手从方向盘挪开，往下伸，不知在摸什么东西，大概是扁钻或刀子吧？车窗外一片漆黑，正是苗粟一带的山间，歹徒下手最理想的所在。要动手了吧？我下意识坐直身子，冷汗开始往外冒。
什么事也不曾发生，他的手又伸了上来，放在方向盘上，没有拿什么东西。一定是他看出我有了戒备，不敢轻率下手，在等待更恰当的时机吧？难道我就这样束手待毙吗？也许我可以想想办法，化解这场危机。我不是一向自诩最善于动脑筋的吗？怎么突然吓呆了呢？或许我可以试着和他聊聊天，动之以情，让他不好意思动手。
于是我吞了口口水，和他搭讪：
“生意好吗，老乡？”
他似乎吓了一跳，过了好几秒钟才回答我：
“不好啊！几乎连油钱都跑不回来。”
“不会吧？你不是回头车？刚刚还有客人包了你的车去台北，不是吗？”
他不再回答。我突然想到可能不是真的回头车，一紧张，舌头打结，也沉默下来。沉默最适于培养紧张的气氛。为什么他不跟我聊天呢？是不是怕暴露他的口音或其他的特征，增加警方缉捕他的可能？他当然明白，我被抢之后必定会去报案的，好聪明狡猾的.家伙！我恨恨地咬了咬牙，他又从后视镜飞快地掠了我一眼。
这一眼非常狠毒，我有生以来不曾看过比这更狠毒的眼神，使我再度直冒冷汗，再度后悔自己的莽撞。即使赶不回员林上课，请一天假又有什么大不了，何必一定要搭野鸡车冒险？
算了，如果他真的要抢，就给他吧！好汉不吃眼前亏，财物嘛，生不带来死不带去，有人要就给他，犯不着因此打斗伤身。可是再想想，不行！这么一来，岂不是助长了恶人的气焰？无论如何，都应该和他拼斗一番，给他一点教训。
两种想法交战缠斗，还没有分出胜负，员林居然到了。可爱的员林！当计程车在公路局车站前一停，我立刻打开车门，冲了下去。松了一口气，才想到还没付钱，便绕过车后，走到司机窗口，伸手到旅行袋里掏钱。突然，车子往前冲，迅速拐一个弯，消失在不远的街角上。我最后看到的，是司机无比惊惶的神色。
怔怔地站在凌晨两点左右冷冷清清的员林街头，莫名其妙地把车钱再放入旅行袋，才看见旅行袋的右方开口突出一截枪管。那是我在台北特地为孩子买回来的玩具枪，枪管太长，无法全部塞进旅行袋里。
解读启示：
主题设立：我搭出租车，以为司机不怀好意，误以为司机是劫财劫色的贼人；司机看到我旅行袋里露出的玩具枪枪管，又误以为我是贼人，最后连车钱都不敢要就溜走了。文章通过两人的误会，入骨三分地表现了台湾当时的社会现实，揭示了人性间爱猜疑、互不信任的丑陋主题。全文气氛沉重，是一种冷峻的黑色幽默。
情节设计：
（1）确定描写易引起误会的事情、人物：“我”和司机。
（2）情节设计：“因末班火车已开走，我只好搭出租车。”
交代起因，是“起””；
“司机一再从后视镜瞅我，瞅得我心底发毛。我误以为他有不良想法。”
接上文，是“承”
“到苗粟一带山间，司机右手从方向盘挪开，往下伸，大概拿扁钻或刀子吧？要动手了吧？我下意识坐直身子，冷汗开始往外冒。可没有发生什么事。”
是“承”，也是“转”；
“我试着和他聊天，以打消他的念头。他似乎吓了一跳，过了好几秒钟才回答我。是不是怕暴露他的口音或其他的特征，增加警方缉捕他的可能？好聪明狡猾的家伙。”
气氛由舒缓——紧张——舒缓——紧张，是“承”“转”；
“他又从后视镜飞快地掠了我一眼。这一眼非常狠毒，我有生以来不曾看过比这更狠毒的眼神，使我再度直冒冷汗。”
是“转”；
“目的地到了，我还没给钱，便绕过车尾，司机以为我抢劫，无比惊慌的开车走了。”气氛紧张，是“承”，“转”；“我纳闷中看见了旅行袋中露出的玩具枪枪管。我恍然大悟。”
谜底揭开，主题得以表现，是“合”。
