英语作文如何帮助残障人士【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
英语作文如何帮助残障人士【二】
你们好！
顾城曾经说过：“黑夜给了我黑色的眼睛，我却用它寻找光明！”眼睛是心灵的窗户，许多的孩子有着黑色的眼眸，可是却没有闪烁出的光彩。多么的令人遗憾啊！他们整天生活在黑暗之中，却渴望去寻找光明，但是，上苍不给他们这个机会。在他们的心灵中充满了自卑、充满了渴望、又充满了悲伤，这是莫大的悲哀啊！
据调查报告显示：全世界每一分钟就有一名儿童失明，也就是说，由于疾病和其他原因造成的儿童失明人数每年高达50万。这是多么令人心惊胆颤啊！没有人能够逃避现实的'打击！
在你们心中，重获光明是多么美好的一件事啊！虽然我们互不相识，但在我心中，我们没有高低贵贱之分，我们是一个大家庭，都是这个世界第一份子，都是这个社会不可或缺的一份子，我们有着平等的权利！不要以为你们失明了就会低人一等，人残志不残！
世界因为你们而彰显独特，世界上失明的人往往比正常人更有音乐资质，试问，世界上身为正常人的音乐家总是一时火而已，而且除非资质特别好的，而你们呢？在儿时，你们或许被人嘲笑、挖苦、讽刺，可从他们的品质就可得知他们日后很难有所成就，你们有着超人的心智，稍加努力，就可超人！设想，当你们站在社会高层，俯视那些曾经嘲笑你们的人，那将是怎样的心情？正所谓：“不鸣则已，一鸣惊人！”
我坚信：世界上总是好人多于“坏人”。人各有所长，各有所短。不要被自卑蒙蔽了希望，取长补短，活出个有模有样的自我，做最真的自我！
有一位老先生，今年60岁，他在音乐方面就颇有造旨。他并不是鼎鼎有名的艺术家，却在吉尼斯世界纪录上创下了令人不可磨灭的光环。
仅用了3年时间，他就创造了同时演奏12件乐器的“奇迹”：他将口琴绑在二胡琴杆上，拉弓的右手握着一根鼓槌，边拉边打扁鼓、堂鼓和小梆子；左手臂上系着一根绳子，用以牵动支架上的杠杆击锣；左脚板绑着半片小钹，右脚大拇指也绑了根小棒，分别敲击大梆子和小锣；在座椅下面安装着一副大钹，用大腿通过杠杆来操纵；加上摆在身边轮换使用的唢呐、口琴、笛子。令人没想到的是：他竟是一个盲人!
这位老先生名叫顾光亮，而他正是在三年前创建了能够同时演奏12件乐器的吉尼斯世界纪录。
同学们，只要肯努力，那你就必定会成功！哪怕你是一个身体有残缺的人！世上无难事，只怕有心人。那些失去光明的同学们，我坚信：你们是最棒的！你们同样是未来的希望！
你们永远的朋友：XXX
英语作文如何帮助残障人士【三】
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
