初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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Early morning,sun farther—in—law showed smiling face,small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries,seem to saying:“Beautiful,should get up!Should get up!!
Li Lixing,see sun farther—in—law came out,asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress,wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment,transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry,li Li looks up to look,a birdie is crying,seem to saying:“Li Li has breakfast quickly,I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly,carry small satchel on the back,go to school together with birdie。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
今天妈妈带我去千山。一进大门,我就看见了许许多多的山峰。原来,这里有一千座山呢。
首先,我们去了“百鸟园”。那里有各种各样的鸟。尤其是火烈鸟,有趣极了!它把脑袋收回了,然后,它又慢慢地把一只腿收回。它粉红色的腿又细又长,单腿站着睡觉,我以为它站不稳呢,没想到,它竟然站的特别稳。它身子上的羽毛是白色的,尾巴是粉红色的,十分漂亮。还有金刚鹦鹉,它的叫声特别吓人,眼睛很大,有红胸脯蓝翅膀的,还有黄胸脯蓝翅膀的,又大又美丽。
接下来,我们就去爬那座很高的山—五佛顶。一开始,我以为山是笔直的。原来,山是陡的,还有一蹬蹬楼梯。我们就从山脚下开始爬。我们一边爬山一边休息。我交了一个新朋友,她叫文文。我们和妈妈比赛,结果我们赢了,我和文文一起喊“宝宝组赢了,宝宝组赢了”。休息的时候,蜜蜂围着我飞来飞去,还落到了我的小手指头上,鼻尖上。落到鼻尖上时我都不知道,妈妈告诉了我,我吓的不敢动,妈妈用手打了一下我的鼻尖,蜜蜂才飞走了。
快爬到山顶的时候,我听到了许多表扬,有的说:“还有小孩呢。”有的说:“这小孩真厉害。”……听到这么多表扬,我心里想:我一定能自己爬到山顶。于是我更卖力气了,不知不觉,我就看到了“五佛顶”这三个大字,我就更快了,又爬了一会儿,我就爬到了山顶,看到了五个佛像,看到了远处的小山,同时也看到了鞍山美丽的景色。
下山的时候,一座山峰接一座山峰的。妈妈说:“上山容易下山难。”可是,我却觉得是下山容易上山难。这是怎么回事呢?原来每个人的想法不一样。
最后,我们要走了,也要和千山说再见了。“千山再见。”
秋天,去哪儿欣赏美丽的秋景才好呢?有人说,去古色古香的荡口古镇;有人说,去景色秀丽的蠡园;有人说,去历史悠久的锡惠公园;还有人说,去果实累累的农博园……而我认为,秋天,最理想的景区应该是景色迷人的蠡湖公园小路旁的美景了!
一进入蠡湖公园,就能看见小路旁的树林,换上了五颜六色的衣裳,随着阵阵微风悄然无息地撒落下来,似蝴蝶飞舞,遍地铺金。梧桐树和槐树的枯黄落叶被风卷起,在空中打着旋儿,刚刚落下,又被卷起,金黄的叶子落在了地上,慢慢堆成了一座小山,踏上去软绵绵的。在遇到了什么烦心事时,如果一个人在枯叶上散步,听着脚下发出的“沙沙”声,就会觉得神清气爽,心旷神怡,一切的烦恼都会抛在脑后,只留下了欢乐。
沿着路一直向前走,我就来到一片红枫林中,站在这里,我仿佛置身于一片火光之中。红的似火的枫叶如手掌一样立在树枝上,层层叠叠,密密麻麻。一阵风吹来,远看,那一树红叶似乎在向我招手,欢迎我的到来,又宛如熊熊燃烧的火炬。不时有几片红叶从树上飘落下来,近看,又如一只只红蝴蝶在空中翩翩起舞。看着看着,我不禁想到一句诗“停车坐爱枫林晚,霜叶红于二月花。”
继续沿着小路向前走,我看到路旁秋菊绽放。菊花颜色绚丽多彩,艳丽夺目,有的红艳欲滴,有的洁白无瑕,有的白里透红……它们争奇斗艳,向人们展示它们的身姿。我用鼻子靠近菊花深吸一口气,只觉得缕缕清香充满了整个身体,全身都放松了下来,仿佛快要融化在这馥郁芬芳的香气之中了。
同学们,听了我的介绍,你一定动心了吧!希望你们去蠡湖公园走一走,看一看,去感受一下秋的气息。
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