英语作文如何去旅行【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
英语作文如何去旅行【二】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
英语作文如何去旅行【三】
这儿子总想出去旅行，母亲说：“你怎样去旅行呢？我们没有一点钱能让你路上用。”
儿子说：“我会自己想办法的。我会说：不多，不多，不多。”
他就是这样走了好些日子，嘴里总是“不多，不多，不多”地说个不停。一次他打一群渔夫那儿经过，说：“愿上帝保佑你们！不多，不多，不多。”
“你说什么来着，乡巴佬，‘不多’？”说着他们拖起网来，打着的鱼果然不多。
因此一个人就操起根棍子朝这年轻人打来，口中说道，“你没瞧见我正打鱼吗？”
“那我该怎么说？”年轻人问。
“你得说：‘打一满网，打一满网’。”
于是，他又走了很长时间，口里不断念道：“打一满网，打一满网。”
最后他来到一个绞架旁，那儿正要处决一个可怜的罪犯。于是他说：“早上好，打一满网，打一满网。”
“你这家伙说什么？‘打一满网’，难道世上坏蛋还多的是？绞死一个还不够吗？”这样他背上又挨了几下打。
“那么，我该怎么说呢？”他问。
“你得说‘愿上帝保佑这个可怜的.灵魂吧！’”
年轻人又走了很长时间，口里念道：“愿上帝保佑这个可怜的灵魂吧！”
他又来到了一条水沟边。那儿站着个人，正在给一匹马剥皮，只听这年轻人说：“早上好，愿上帝保佑这个可怜的灵魂吧！”
“你这浑小子，说什么来着？”这剥皮者给了他的耳朵重重一拳，痛得他眼冒金星，一时分不出哪是东南西北。
“那么，我该说什么？”
“你得说‘你这僵尸，快躺进沟里吧！’”
于是，他又继续往前走，口中念道：“你这僵尸，快躺进沟里吧！你这僵尸，快躺进沟里吧！”
这时，他来到一辆乘满人的马车旁，说：“早上好，你这僵尸，快躺进沟里吧！” 话刚出口，马车果然翻进了水沟里，车夫操起马鞭，给了他一顿猛抽，痛得他只好回到他母亲那儿去了。 从此，他一辈子再也不出去旅行了。
英语作文如何去旅行【四】
这似乎很难做出选择。
如果你问我，我会毫不犹豫的回答：“我会选择一本笔记本和一支笔。”
没错，一本笔记本和一支笔。因为这样，我可以记录在环绕世界旅行途中所经历的每件有趣或令人难忘的事情：可以每天给自己列一个清单，无聊时写写，或是画画沿途的美景……
假设第一站我到达了我们的邻国白俄罗斯，我会记下在这个国家里所发生的任何事情和沿途我所看到的美景。晚上，我也会写上一篇日记。我会给自己列一个清单，比如我买好了第二天飞往朝鲜的机票，花了一百六十八元，在这一天中，我的开销是多少，我都会记录下来，这样我就可以的对自己下一步的旅行，有一个完整的计划。假如遇到一些新鲜的.事情，我还会把他构思成一片有意思或感人的习作。在异国他乡，由于语言的不通，我还可以通过画画，来传递我们之间的友情以及我对他们的祝福。
就这样还不够，我还会寄一封跨国信件给我的父母，告诉他们我旅途中所发生的趣事和收获，并报平安。
英语作文如何去旅行【五】
我和秋姑娘一起去了果园，那里的葡萄成片的挂在那里，远远望去，成串的葡萄就像小珍珠一样在闪闪发光。果园里还有一个个成熟的小苹果，就像小孩子的笑脸，红彤彤的，再一看又像一个个小红灯笼，在向我们招手。
穿过果园我和秋姑娘又去了玉米地，那里的玉米好像穿了一件金黄金黄的外衣。一打开它的皮，一个个金灿灿的小牙齿露了出来，好玩极了。我们又去了高粱地，那里的`高粱扬起了黑红黑红的脸庞，像是在乐呵呵的歌唱。我们又去了向日葵地，向日葵里面的籽已经长出来了，它的身体被籽坠得沉甸甸的，秋风吹过，向日葵在向我们频频点头。
然后，我和秋姑娘又去了白杨树林里。秋姑娘拿着画笔把白杨树的叶子都涂成黄色的了。在树林里，我一抬头就能看到那湛蓝的天空，天空一碧如洗。在傍晚，我们才能看到几缕流云，那些流云在日落的映照下，转眼间变成一道银灰、一道橘黄、一道血红、一道绛紫，就像美丽的仙女在空中抖动着五彩斑斓的锦缎。
在这美丽的秋天，有了秋姑娘的帮助，我去了很多没去过的地方，我很喜欢秋天。
