爸爸剔一个平头、高高的鼻梁、尖尖的嘴、中等个头儿、挺着一个“将军肚”,嗓门比谁都大,一吼儿,连解放军叔叔都是甘拜下风。
爸爸是个业余爱好者,不管是棋盘类还是运动类,爸爸都是一流儿的!爸爸同时还是个“工作狂”,有时早上五、六点出门,晚上十一、二点回来。有时候与客户应酬还要拉着脸皮去哄客户。我就问爸爸为什么要这么做,爸爸总是严肃的回答我:“现在的社会不同了,做生意或应酬只要铭记一句中国的古话——客户就是上帝!以后你长大了自然就会就明白。”
爸爸喜欢欣赏一些古董,他也喜欢做一些手工活儿呢!爸爸的历史非常好,常常会给我讲一些历史事件。爸爸的思维是“3D”式的,想一些事情很周到。
爸爸还是一名出色的修理工,家里什么东西坏了,他三下两下就把它给修好了,有时连修理工都束手无策的家电,爸爸看看说明书观察观察它的内部构造,东拆拆,西装装,没多久家电就安然无恙了,左邻右舍有东西坏了都找他。
爸爸喜欢与我们开玩笑,但看爸爸笑一次是比登天还难的。不知道为什么,爸爸的眼神总有着让人揣摩不清的事情,我很难从爸爸的眼神中找到答案,我想:爸爸的世界一定是奇幻的银色。
爸爸做事是很有分寸的。爸爸不喜欢浪费时间也不喜欢别人浪费他的时间。爸爸会把朋友或亲人交代给他的事情做的快,棒的效率!
以前吃饭的时候,爸爸总是把好吃的东西留给我,今天我会毫不犹豫把好吃的菜留给爸爸。因为爸爸为了我整天带着一张劳苦而乌黑的脸,从那一刻起,我就下定决心要好好读书!每当爸爸干活累了回家,我就给他端水做饭。总之我只想尽到我自己的一份孝心,为爸爸分担一些事情,让爸爸有更多的休息时间。
爸爸啊爸爸!您是世界上最伟大的,我知道你所做的一切都是为了我长大后有一个美好的生活;有一个有意义的灿烂人生。
你是那无数寻梦人中的一个,与很多人一样,你一直马不停蹄地在梦想之路上跋涉着。可是,在路上,你翻过一座山,还有一座山;走过一段路,还有更长的路要走。你好累,好累,你付出了全部的时间与精力,可丝毫得不到成功的喜悦。于是,你变得迷惘而无措。
终于,你闭上疲惫不堪的双眼,停下了行色匆匆的脚步。你曾是绝不愿停下的,因为你害怕放松会懈怠了你的精神,荒废了你的年华。可结果呢?无尽的黑暗深渊几乎令你窒息。所以,你决定用你宝贵的时间,去做一次短暂的休憩,去放松自己。
花点时间去放松自己,收获一份好心情。放下厚厚的行囊,躺在软软的床上。任阳光晒在身上任何一处酸痛的地方,温暖与闲适便悄悄渗入心中。清风从窗缝中盈步而来,徐徐吹向静立在床头的风铃,如此空灵而美妙的乐音,忙碌的你却从何时起充耳不闻?亦或大哭一场吧,让委屈随泪水消失不见。最后,打个盹儿,做一场好梦吧。让梦精灵扫去你心中的烦恼。如此,你绷紧的思绪变得舒展,紧张的心情已不复存在。你在放松自己的过程中收获了一份好心情。
花点时间去放松自己,感悟大自然的启示。睁开眼,走到外面去看看吧!大自然的花草虫鱼都在说唱着,听,天边的流云在唱着永恒的变幻之歌;门前参天大树在诉说着伟大与沧桑;而那不起眼的野草,也在摇曳着生命的赞歌。在大自然中,你是否获得了不少人生的启示?花点时间去放松自己,去观观景,你会明白,许许多多的知识都是书本上学不到的。视野开阔了胸怀,原来在大自然中,一切的烦恼都显得渺小而微不足道啊。你在放松自己的过程中感悟了大自然的启示。
花点时间去放松自己,徜徉书的海洋,寻觅前行的方向。偶尔,推开拥挤的书案,翻翻几本闲书吧。你会无法释手的,这是另一个世界呀,每一个小小的细节描写就是一滴甘霖,能让枯木开出青春的花朵;每一段文字的.叙述就是一缕阳光,能让冬枝抽出思绪的绿芽。这甘霖,这阳光,无意间被送进你彷徨的心中,驻进你的心房。你闲适地翻着手中的书卷,看到了对爱、对生命、对美好与希望的追求,书中的人物历经重重困难后,最终寻到了属于自己的幸福。你笑了,因为你的疑问已被解决,你的烦恼已被扫走,因为你会如他们一样,会实现自己的梦想。你在放松自己的过程中徜徉书的海洋,寻觅着前行的方向。
你在片刻休憩之后,重新踏上这条路。你知道不可让放松时间太长,以免丧失了斗志。花点时间去放松自己吧,那不是虚度你的光阴,不是消磨你的意志,而是找到面对困难的勇气和宝贵的经验与启示,这会让你更明确更坚定自己前行的方向。长时间的拼搏,会使人紧张、无措,得“烦恼病”,在这个时候,花点时间去放松自己,则是我们最好的药方。
我一脚深一脚浅地走在回家的路上,这条坑坑洼洼的小路在我看来就像是一条通往世界末日的道路。一想起书包里那张不及格的试卷,一波波惆怅就涌上我的心头,我几乎失去了回家的勇气,我该怎么去面对父亲充满期待的眼神?我在雨中抱着沉重的步伐向前走去。
不知什么时候我已经走到了家门口,刚推开门,一股温馨的气息就拥抱住了我。一切正如我所料,父亲已经做好了满桌的饭菜等我回来。“爸……”后面的字还没说出口,喉咙就像被什么东西堵住了似得。父亲连忙迎了上来,从我肩上接过书包说:“快坐下吧,都等你好久了。”缓缓地坐下,望着眼前丰盛的菜肴我却一点胃口也没,想到父亲每天用心地做饭,关心我的身体而我却拿不出成绩来回报他时,他感到非常失落,惭愧一点点吞噬着我的心灵。“爸,上……”我的话还没说完就被父亲打断了,“上周你要买书的钱我已经准备好了,待会儿吃完饭就给你。”听了父亲的话,又想起那张不及格的卷子,不禁觉得很对不起父亲,胡乱吃了几口饭后就放下了碗筷,到书房里看书。
坐在书桌前,零乱的思绪怎么也理不清,忽然感到肩膀上有轻轻的拍动,把我从迷茫中唤醒。“其实这一切我都知道了,”父亲温和地堆我说“一次失败算不了什么,重要的是要从中吸取教训。巴顿将军从蜘蛛结网中获得启示,最终击退德军‘诺贝尔、爱迪生经历了多少次失败?但他们最终都取得了成功。失败是炼造强者的火炉,只要你振作起来,一如既往地努力,我相信你一定能取得成功。”爸爸的话像是一股清泉流过我的全身,又像是一根羽毛拂过我的心田,我的心终于平静下来了。
这一觉睡得真踏实,早上起来后只觉得身上有着使不完的力量。推开窗户,只见一缕金色的阳光洒在饱含水分的绿叶上,折射出七彩的光芒。缓缓坐下,我拿起笔开始认真地写作业。
我有一个善解人意的父亲,他时时刻刻都在关注着我的思想,不断鼓励我,驱散我心中失落绝望的情绪,帮助我走过人生的雨季,迈向成熟的金秋。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
春三月的西施故里,粉墙黛瓦的楼阁,高低错落着;青石板铺就的小路,青石板的小桥,小桥下,流淌着的是弯弯曲曲的小河;曲径通幽处,鸟啼声声慢;沿途的那些楼房,木质的门窗散发着历史的味道,引人回味无穷。那依临浦阳江而坐落的馆所茶楼,很是适合你,于喧嚣忙碌之中,选择一处安静的场所,沏一壶明前西施玉露茶;或自斟自饮独赏风景,或邀三朋五友碎语清谈;茶香袅袅处,涤尽烦恼与浮躁,任遐思无边,任心境恬淡从容。
你可以透过那落地玻璃,尽情的观赏浦阳江的美景,远眺江对面王羲之所写的“浣纱”二字,欣赏江上不时而过的渔舟,那些嘬鱼的鸬鹚,也许正在看着你呢,或许,你自己也成为了一道风景。
我喜欢在这早春三月,放慢脚步,静心地行走在曲曲折折的小道上,欣赏那些错落有致的房屋,老式的台门,老式的四合院,都泛着一股古朴、沉静的韵味,让我总有一种游离时间之外的感觉,好像历史的影像不曾在此走过一帧。
西施故里,朴实而悠然怡人。西施故里的夜晚是最吸引人的,粉墙黛瓦在那一个个大红灯笼的掩映下,显得很是娇柔,很是让人沉醉。不经意间,你会被慢慢的感染,慢慢的融入进这种独有的典雅之中。那一种都市休闲人的感觉,仿佛已经回到曾经的童年岁月。
那个高高的戏台,演绎过多少出越戏,儿女情长,忠孝节义,尽情的演绎着千年的意蕴;戏台前面道地边上的风车与晒稻谷的雕像,就像回到了小时候村子里做戏时我们顽皮着嬉戏闹闹的情景,往日帮父母扇风车的情景还是那么的清晰,那么的历历在目。
行走在西施故里,一股宁静怡人的心境自然而然的弥漫着。脑际里,仿佛穿越千年时空,四大美女之首的西施,曾经的轻歌曼舞,曾经的惊艳奇迹,一篇篇西施的故事不断的在历史中演绎,穿越千年,不断的深入暨山越水,这里的一切仿佛都是在追寻曾经的历史,曾经的古越足迹。
放松你的脚步吧!在这个季节里,于喧嚣的市区之外,尽情的深呼吸,悄悄地闭上双眼,亲吻那来自于大自然的清香,忘却某些烦闷与***动,放松心灵,让心灵回归自然,让你的心决定你的足迹,放下烦恼,敞开你忙忙碌碌的心扉,偷得些许闲空,不亦乐乎?
Dear wu Yanzu:
You are my favourite superstar.I am addicited to your films and some other works.Our teacher asked us to write a letter to a superstar. You come to mine mind firstly. I am inertested in a question.That is why you are not good at our mother tongue.I am anxious to eat your cooking.It must be taste good.Oh i can not wait.How I wish I could taste it at once. You hurt your nose in an accident.I am very wooried about that,can I have a look at your nose.Yang Qianhua is a so good singer.You two look like a couple,and you will be good lovers.
Yours
XXX
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