母亲将你带到这个世界上,随即你便有了生命,有了生存的寄托。母爱,永不停息。在家里,母亲的关爱如泉涌般包围着我;学校里,母亲的思念如丝网般牵动着我;陪伴时,母亲的真情与温馨时刻感染着我……
这一切的一切,都是母亲对我的爱所构成的温情。谢谢你,母亲!是你教会了我做人的基本原则,是你给予我生命,是你……
亲爱的祖国:
你好!
我是一名五年级学生,再过几个星期,就是您的第六十七个生日,在这举国欢庆的日子,特意给您写了这一封信,以表达我对您崇高的敬意给您写了这一封信,以表达我对您好崇高的敬意,但这六十年来,您所经历的风风雨雨,坎坷艰难的道路呢?面对今天的生活,我们更应该去珍惜,去爱护、去沉思,在您六十年的努力和辛勤下,开放和经济的发展的影响下,我们的生活是日趋变得美好。
祖国的变化是迅速的,在衣食、住行、文化、科技方面也是首屈一指,首先在生活方面,祖国您的经济落后,人们生活艰难,新三年旧三年,缝缝补补又三年是人们衣着的真实写照,人们现在生活水平高了,更加讲时尚性和观赏性,人的生活上了一个层次。
在住房方面,过去的泥墙、土墙变成了今天的高楼大厦,昔日人们的旧思想观念也随之而去,我们的生活在此划进了一片新的.天地。
在当今的社会中,社会经济发展还趋于进步,我们要认识我国的国情,在这上加快发展才能提高我国在社会上的国情和地位,在这里希望祖国的未来发展强劲,最后祝祖国生日快乐。
小学生:
时间:
世界上有一种无与伦比的爱,那就是母亲的爱!所以世上最值得回报的人就是母亲.
是啊,转眼间我已经快16岁了,在着近xx年的日子里,您为我付出的太多太多.感谢您赋予了我生命,也感谢你对我的无微不至的关爱和爱护.
记得我爱护能够三年纪的时候,身体不是很好.正好一天晚上我发高烧,天有下着大雨,爸爸有不在家是而且那是以是深夜都快两点了外面又没有车,您抱着我包了三站路把我送到医院,但我第2天醒来时才知道你在我的病床上趴了一个晚上,当时我不觉得有什么.但当我渐渐长大我回忆起这见事才知道你是多么的伟大.
母亲你不仅在生活上对我是无微不至,你还叫我怎么做人;"火要空心,人要忠心.世上人最怕认真两字......这些话在当时我都是随口应和这是,但从来没记在心里,现在来看您的这些话不比那个大哲人差,虽说没有是传世但我会把他当一中宝藏,一种我做人的准则,将它埋在我心里的最深处.
母亲您好似一杯茶,寒夜里饮您的温馨,孤独中饮您的清醇,流泪时饮你的淡薄,一生一世饮您的.点点滴滴的关爱,是您丝丝的柔情.
Dear Mom,
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger training”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。
亲爱的`母亲:
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you will have a wonderful mother's day.
母亲节快到了,我想在这封信里对您说“母亲节快乐”。我爱你,感谢你为我做的一切。这一天,我离开了,不能在家给您表达我的谢意。我知道我会看着自己,所以不要担心我。我在学习上做得很好。我的同学和老师都很好。尽管我不在家里,我仍希望您有一个美好的母亲节。
Your son,
你的儿子,
Li ming
李明
Dear Mum,
Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!
your son
My dearest Mother,
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.
Love,
Your son
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